2月19日 独立写作 题目（2010.6.19 NA） When people need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, some people prefer to use e-mail or text messaging. Others like to use telephone or voice messaging. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer. 作文 Communication is of great importance in our daily lives. When people are in need of conveying their feelings or ideas to others, some people tend to choose telephone or voice messaging because it is more direct. I, however, argue for communicating by the way of e-mail or text messaging.
To begin, using e-mail or text messaging is a more polite way to express people's thoughts to others. When people need to put out their points of view to those who are not quite familiar with, it's impolite to telephone them or have a talk to them directly. According to a recent research on the Internet, nearly 85 percent of people regarded words from e-mails or text messaging they received more polite than those they heard via telephone calls or voice messaging. That is to say, choosing the way of conveying ideas by an indirect way, like a letter or an e-mail, may help people better express themselves in a friendly tone. On the contrary, for example, if you are a new employee of a large company and you are going to discuss some details about your work with your manager, it's not sensible for you to go straight to his office talking to him face to face because what you do may lead you to a bad impression for disturbing his work. So, a better method is to send him an e-mail with your problems and ideas in it. And I am sure you will get an immediate reply or contact after he opened his mailbox.
Also, e-mail or text massaging makes communication more fluent and instant in some conditions. An urgent communication with people who are having a meeting tends to fail because people are not allowed to pick telephone calls or have free discuss to others during that time. I remember an embarrassing time when I was very young, I couldn't get into my house after school because I forgot to bring the keys with me. I had to use a public telephone to get in touch with my mom. What was worse, my mother was having an important meeting and she didn't realize that the constant calling was mine. How I wish I had had a mobile phone so that I could text message to tell her about my trouble instead of waiting for her coming back home late at night.
In sum, I suggest people discussing issues or problems with others in a proper way like sending an e-mail or texting a message. A communication in silence is not only as convenient and instant as making telephone calls, but also makes people more polite and graceful communicators in our daily lives.
Communication is of great importance in our daily lives. When people are in need of conveying their feelings or ideas to others, some（many, 与后文的however形成对比） people tend to choose telephone or voice messaging because it is more direct（than email or text-messaging）. I, however, argue for communicating by the way of e-mail or text messaging(the latter for the following reasons).
To begin, using e-mail or text messaging is a more polite way to express people's thoughts to others. When people need to put out(present/deliver表达, put out 是熄灭)their points of view to those who are not quite familiar with, it's impolite to telephone them or have a talk to them directly. According to a recent research on the Internet, nearly 85 percent of people regarded words from e-mails or text messaging they received more polite than those they heard via telephone calls or voice messaging. That is to say, choosing the way of conveying ideas by an indirect way, like a letter or an e-mail, may help people better express themselves in a friendly tone. On the contrary, for example, if you are a new employee of a large company and you are going to discuss some details about your work with your manager, it's not sensible for you to go straight to his office talking to him face to face because what you do may lead you to （leave him）a bad impression for disturbing his work. So, a better method is to send him an e-mail with your problems and ideas in it(删去). And I am sure （,most of time, 避免绝对）you will get an immediate reply or contact after he opened（checked） his mailbox.
Also, e-mail or text massaging makes communication more fluent and instant in some conditions. An urgent communication with people who are having a meeting tends to fail because people are not allowed to pick(pick up/answer)telephone calls or(and) have free discuss to others during that time. I remember an embarrassing time when I was very young, I couldn't get into my house after school because I forgot to bring the keys with me. I had to use a public telephone to get in touch with my mom. What was worse, my mother was having an important meeting and she didn't realize that the constant calling(s) was mine(from her anxious daughter). How I wish I had had a mobile phone so that I could text message to tell her about my trouble instead of waiting for her coming back home late at night.
In sum, I suggest people discussing(discuss， suggest后面接V原形，其实是省略了should) issues or problems with others in a proper way like sending an e-mail or texting a message. A communication in silence is not only as convenient and instant as making telephone calls, but also makes people more polite and graceful communicators in our daily lives.
Communication is of great importance in our daily lives. When people are in need of conveying their feelings or ideas to others, many people tend to choose telephone or voice messaging because it is more directthan email or text-messaging. I, however, argue for communicating by the way of the latter for the following reasons.
To begin, using e-mail or text messaging is a more polite way to express people's thoughts to others. When people need to delivertheir points of view to those who are not quite familiar with, it's impolite to telephone them or have a talk to them directly. According to a recent research on the Internet, nearly 85 percent of people regarded words from e-mails or text messagingsthey received more polite than those they heard via telephone calls or voice messaging. That is to say, choosing the way of conveying ideas by an indirect way, like a letter or an e-mail, may help people better express themselves in a friendly tone. On the contrary, for example, if you are a new employee of a large company and you are going to discuss some details about your work with your manager, it's not sensible for you to go straightaway to his office talking to him face to face because what you do mayleave hima bad impression for disturbing his work. So, a better method is to send him an e-mail with your problems and ideas. And, most of time, you will get an immediate reply or contact after he checked his mailbox.In this way, I believe, people are making their communication more welcome and genty.
Also, e-mail or text massaging makes communication more fluent and instant in some conditions. An urgent communication with people who are having a meeting tends to fail because people are not allowed to answertelephone calls and(这个地方为什么不用or用and呢？我觉得意思差不多吖~)have free discuss to others during that time. I remember an embarrassing time when I was very young, I couldn't get into my house after school because I forgot to bring the keys with me. I had to use a public telephone to get in touch with my mom. What was worse, my mother was having an important meeting and she didn't realize that the constant callingswere from her anxious daughter. How I wish I had had a mobile phone so that I could text message to tell her about my trouble instead of waiting for her coming back home till late at night.In such circumstances, a silent message is more powerful than a voice messaging.
In sum, I suggest people discussissues or problems with others in a proper way like sending an e-mail or texting(这个地方有没有错呀？在word里面划线了，text可不可以这么用？)a message. A communication in silence is not only as convenient and instant as making telephone calls, but also makes people more polite and graceful communicators in our daily lives.
2月20日 独立写作 题目： （2011.8.21 NA） Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is never a reason to be rude (impolite) to another person. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
作文：Treating people politely is an essential element in the process of creating a harmonious society and we are often taught never to be rude to others since our childhood. Although politeness is a key piont(point) in our daily communications, I believe there are still a few reasons accounting for being impolite to another preson(person).
For one reason, there are some emotions, like anger, annoy and eager, sometimes leading to impoliteness during a conversation. In addition, people may have a tendency to be rude to others when they are in an emergency situation. However, this kind of impoliteness or rudeness is understandable and acceptable after a proper explaination(explanation). For example, once my best friend and I hold totally different ideas on an issue and consequently we had a firm quarrel. She got so angery(angry) that she shouted at me with some dirty words as well, which made me extremely depressed and upset for quite a long time. At the moment I thought that I would lose my best friend ever since, she came to me with her sincere apology, which broke the coldness between us. So, in my point of view, a comtemperoray(temporary) impoliteness caused by some special emotions is not an evil in people's communication.
For another reason, as politeness is important to both the speaker and the listener in a conversation, their is no necessary for one person to keep being gentle and graceful if the other one shows no respect at all. Furthermore, a friendly talk is based on joint efforts from both sides. If the person we are talking with is really aggressive and attacktive, we are of no need to endure his insult with an elegant smile because he does not deserve our politeness. There is an ancient Chinese story about an intelligent embassender(ambassador) visiting another country but was treated in a rude and insultant way by the emperor there. It was unfriendly and unbearable for him because he was on behalf of his country. In order not to watch his country insulted, he managed to trick the emperor in very sharp words and defend the dignity of his own country. We can draw a conclusion from this story that being rude to others is acceptable and needed under the circumstance when we are attacked by others first.
It is known to all that treating other people in a kind and polite way is a virtue in Chinese culture. However, politeness does not mean we have to perform like a graceful lady or a gentleman all the time. As for me, whether being polite or not to another person depends on different situations. Since people all have their own mood, they have the ability to justify on which condition is the rudeness accountable and understandable.
To conclude, I disagree with the statement that there is never a reason to be rude or impolite to others though respect is dispensable in our daily communications because there exists reluctant rudeness caused by emotions which are not well controled(controlled) and the defensive impoliteness is reasonable sometimes.
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