Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The advice from grandparents has no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 5o years. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
As the sosiety(society) we are living in is changing all the time with a high speed, what we used to totally agree with no longer catches up with
(感觉用 can no longer catch up with会好一点) the pace today. In such a "fast world", a large number of people agree with the statement that advice from grandparents for their grandchildren is of no use. I, however, argue for the opposite.
To begin with, grandparents usually have adequate life experience, which makes them more sensitive dealing with various things. From that aspsct(aspect), they are the best advisors for grandchildren solving all kinds of problems. To be honest, my grandmother, is my closest friend and listener. When I ran into some (
是不是可以去掉?)troubles, she always helped me analyze the situation and provided me very useful advices
(advice不可数吧。。。)according to her own experience. Though sometimes she was not quite familiar with the terrible condition I had confronted, her instructions could inspire me to cope with some emergencies in a proper way.
Furthermore, the concept our grandparents hold is more prudent and conventionnal(conventional其实我想写conservative的,单词记混了...). What we may see as old-fashioned ideas may have a significant influence on making right decisions. A few years ago, I told my grandmother that I would like to shift all my deposit to stocks although she didn't actually know stocks well. To my surprise, she persuaded me not taking
(to take) a risk because she thought that it was not high time to join the stockmarket. I consequently accepted her suggestion though I firmly believed that it was a great chance to earn a great deal of money in a short period. Faced with the serious inflation later, finally, her cautiousness made sense
.(个人感觉finally不用再居中,可以提前一下,晨依你再查查?)
No one would deny that our world is changing rapidly and things maybe extremely different compared to the past 50 years. Admittedly, the gap between grandparents and grandchildren is increasingly enlarged with highly developed science and technology. However, that does not mean that points from grandparents are out of date. No doubt that we should take their ideas into consideration in case of repeating the mistakes they have made in their young ages(?). Additionally, their advices are benefical(beneficial) to making ourselves
be(去掉吧) more mature when meeting with incidents.
Since grandparents have abundant experience and more prudent attitude, grandchildren do have the necessary
(是不是该换成名词形式啊,necessarity?) to respect their suggestions. After all, truth is worthy of being examined by time.(truth can stand the test of time敢问大家有没有正宗一点的说法?) In conclusion, words from grandparents are useful to their grandchildren even in a fast-changing world.
-- by 会员 chasedreamabc (2012/2/25 10:48:17)