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12.6 作业，
大学生是否不必到学校上课，只要参加考试就行了？各位不要给我面子，使劲批
Recently, a controversial issue has been brought into our eye-sight that whether it is necessary for  college students to study at school or just to participate the final exam. For me, even though studying at home or somewhere else enjoys some advantages such as comfortable condition, I hold the strong opinion that students have to study in campus. My reasons following will substantiate my opinion.
To start with, the effiency is the key point for study. While studying in the places other than in campus is of low efficiency in that myriads of disturbs will affect the efficiency of the study. Have you ever experienced that when study at home suddenly the phone rings? have you ever experienced that when you read a book in the Star Bucks while the people talking loudly? The list will go on. If you have , you might stand on my side that no place is as ideal as campus for study. There are libraries, quite class room and, the most importantly, a good study atmosphere in campus. In the university. students,more often than not , can make full use of the advantage. So I think studying in campus is not only good but also necessary.
In addition, even thought the widespread internet is a good advantage for study, can we ignore the importance of the teachers and class mates? of course not. Maybe students can learn all kinds of knowledge on internet, but some issues and problems are diffcult,like computer science, to understand by students themselves. They have to ask for others people who are more experienced for help, their teachers. Teachers will teach them hand by hand in more vivid way. It is easier to  understand. If they have problems, teachers will help them figure out quickly.How can we ignore the classmates?  When I was at college, it is my classmate Tom who encouraged me, competed with me and helped me. I think all these factors are necessary for students. If they study at home or somewhere else. It will be a pity in that they will never get the these advantages or happiness of study.
from all aspects carefully taken into consideration, I will draw the conclusion that students should go to college to study. In the college they will get the unparalleled advantages such as good teachers, kind classmates, effiency and the peaceful mood. All these factos make the campus studying unique. Even if some people say that studing home or coffe bar will be more comfortable. But a comfortable studying environment does not necessarily lead to a successful study nor a successful life

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大学生是否不必到学校上课，只要参加考试就行了？各位不要给我面子，使劲批
Recently, a controversial issue has been brought into our eye-sight that whether it is necessary for  college students to study at school or just to participate in the final exam. For me, even though studying at home or somewhere else enjoys some obvious advantages such as comfortable condition, like being totally independent about everyday schedule, I hold the strong opinion that students have to should study in on campus. My following reasons (或者：reasons as follows) will substantiate my opinion. (开头很不错哦~)
To start with, the effiency is the key point for study. While studying in the places other than in campus is of low efficiency in that myriads of disturbs will affect the efficiency of the study. Have you ever experienced that when study at home suddenly the phone rings? have you ever experienced that when you read a book in the Star Bucks while the people were talking loudly? The list will go on. If you have , you might stand on my side that no place is as ideal as campus for study. There are libraries, quiete class room and, the most importantly, a good study atmosphere in on campus. In the university. students,more often than not , can make full use of the advantage. So I think studying in campus is not only good but also necessary.
In addition, even thought the widespread internet is a good advantage for study, can we ignore the importance of the teachers and class mates? of course not. Maybe students can learn all kinds of knowledge on internet, but some issues and problems are diffcult,like computer science, to understand by students themselves. They have to ask for others people who are more experienced for help, their teachers. Teachers will teach them hand by hand in more vivid way. It is easier to  understand. If they have problems, teachers will help them figure out them quickly.How can we ignore the classmates?  When I was at college, it is my classmate Tom who encouraged me, competed with me and helped me. I think these factors are all necessary for students. If they study at home or somewhere else. It will be a pity in that they will never get the these advantages or happiness of study.
from all aspects carefully taken into consideration, I will draw the conclusion that students should go to college to study. In the college they will get the unparalleled(great,unique) advantages such as good teachers, kind classmates, effiency and the peaceful mood(good mood/peace of mind/peace). All these factos make the campus studying unique. Even if some people say that studing home or coffe bar (cafe)will be more comfortable. But a comfortable studying environment does not necessarily lead to a successful study nor a successful life

总体来说，不错啦。论据再充分一点~

tengawaakito

进来学习了！明天我也来写

45573asdasd

进来学习了！明天我也来写

-- by 会员 tengawaakito (2012/12/6 22:15:35)

欢迎！

45573asdasd

12.7 作业.独立

Do you agree or disagree: Do you agree or disagree: economic growth seems to be more important than environmental concerns

Recently, a controversial issue has been brought into our eye-sights that whether the economic development is more significant than the environment. For me, even if the economic growth may lead to a short-term prosperity, I hold the affirm opinion that the environment is the vital point to all human-being.My reasons below will substantiate my opinion.

To begin with, what is the most important for a peoson? the money? the fame? or the beautiful girls? None of those things are as important as health. the health, as we all know ,is based on the good living condition, the enviroment in which we live in. We can not emphasize the importance of the environment too much. Because it is related to the most valubale thing, the health. If a wealthy and famous person has cancer, I think he will never be happy. To him, the edifices and the number in his account is meaningless.So in term of the health, the good environment overweighs the economic growth.

In addition, the environment and the economic development are not mutually exclusive. One one hand, the good environment will be a good source of economic growth, such as the usage of the solar energy instead of the coral or fossil fuel. One the other hand if the living condition gets worse, and more people gert sick.The goverment will have to pay for more expensive medical care for them. It will be a great burdern. Maybe it will set off the development achievements which based on the harm to the environment.So the environment is more significant to the long-term development.

Last but not least, what is the most concern to people? It is their kids. But the poor environment will ruin their children's lives. A survey conducted by Chian Health Care Agency(CHCA) shows that fifteen out of one hunderd mothers can not give birth to new-born babies because of all kinds of pollution. Is not it a alarming fact? No matter how important the economy is, we have be careful of the environment.  

From all aspects taken into consideration carefully, I definitely disagree with the statement that economic growth seems to be more important than environmental concerns. Even if everybody knows how important the economic development is, It can resolve the unemployeement and it can create profits for the country.But the economy should not be based on the harm to the living condition and environmental concerns. Because the environment is releated deirctly to the people's lives, to people long-term happiness and to their offsprings' future. The answer is obvious.

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Recently, a controversial issue has been brought into our eye-sights that whether the economic development is more significant than the environment. For me, even if paying more attention to the economic growth may lead to a short-term prosperity, I hold the affirm determined opinion that the environment is the vital point to all human-being.My reasons below will substantiate my opinion.非常棒！

To begin with, what is the most important for a peoson? the money? the fame? or the beautiful girls? None of those things are as important as health. the health, as we all know ,is based on the good living condition, the enviroment in which we live in. We  the importance of the environment can never be overemphasized too much. Because it is related to the most valubale thing, the health. If a wealthy and famous person has cancer, I think he will never be happy. To him, the edifices and the number in his account is meaningless.So in terms of the health, the good environment overweighs the economic growth.

In addition, the environment and the economic development are not mutually exclusive. One one hand, the good environment will be a good source of economic growth, such as the usage of the solar energy instead of the coral or fossil fuel. 例子很棒~One the other hand层次出来了~ if the living condition gets worse, and more people gert sick.The goverment will have to pay for more expensive medical care for them. It will be a great burdern. Maybe it will set off the development achievements which based on the harm to the environment.So the environment is more significant to the long-term development.（不建议用这个例子，和第一段有交集）

Last but not least, what is the most concern to people? It is Their kids. But the poor environment will ruin their children's lives. A survey conducted by Chian Health Care Agency(CHCA) shows that fifteen out of one hunderd mothers can not give birth to new-born babies because of all kinds of pollution. Is not it a alarming fact? No matter how important the economy is, we have be careful of the environment.  （也是与健康有关，不建议使用）

From all aspects taken into consideration carefully, I definitely disagree with the statement that economic growth seems to be more important than environmental concerns.非常好的结尾，你昨天给我补充的那一句也是赞透了，谢谢啊~ Even if everybody knows how important the economic development is, It can resolve the unemployment and it can create profits for the country.But the economy should not grow by sacificingbe based on the harm to the living conditions and environmental concerns. Because the environment is releated directly to the people's lives, to people long-term happiness and to their offsprings' future. The answer is obvious.总而言之，写的很不错，asd 写作功底很厚的啊~再接再厉，就是我有点嘴拙，其实已经很表扬你了~~~~~不好意思啊。

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Recently, a controversial issue has been brought into our eye-sights that whether the opinions from famous people are more important for the young to know than those from elder people. Eventhough the celebrities sometimes represent the headquarter in some certain fields. For me, I think learning from the elder people are more important in today. My foolwing reasons will substantiate my opinion.

To begin with, the opinions from famous people might not be the correct one. Because some of the celebrities are of poor knowledge such as some movie stars and some singers.they do not got much knowledge. How can they teach the young? In addition, Have you heard the story a star drives the car after drinking a lot of wine? have ever heard the politician take advantage of his previlige? If you have so, you might stand on my side. Some celebrities themselves are of poor personal ethics. How can they give the correct opinions to the children? How can they set the example for the young people? The celebrities are not necessarily represent the right side. By contrast, the elder, they took all their lives to see things and people. They have a good sense of the rightness owing to teh experience. They can tell the difference fromright and wrong. Tehy can also provide some tips related closely to the daily life. At this point the older people's opinions are more important.

In addition, let me put aside the opinion itself. What does an old man need most? money? cars? none of them are more important than a short conversation with his son or grandson. In today's high-velocity society, people are always too busy, therefore, they always ignore what is the most valuable thing for old people. They always chase starts. tehy can spend all their salary to attend a concert, but they always forget listen to the old people's words. The old people always feel lonely. It is something should not happen. At this point, I think it is human-kind to listent to old people's opinions no matter they are right or wrong. Because it is communication what the old need.

From all aspects taken into consideration carefully above, I can safely draw the conclusion that listening to the old people's opinions are more important than listening to the celebrities. Because the famous people will also make mistakes, while the old people are more experienced in some certain fields. Second, it is the communication that the old people need most. we should care them and let them feel less lonely.

tengawaakito

运动员哥哥，看的的作文好像审题喝我的不一样啊，
我的理解是，来自名人的意见对年轻人来说更重要，换句话就是说年轻人比老人更鸟名人说的话。。。。。。。我很疑惑啊！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

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我厚着脸皮来了啊~~~


Recently, a controversial issue has been brought into our eye-sights that whether the opinions from famous people are more important for the young to know than those from elder people. Eventhough the celebrities sometimes represent the headquarter pioneers in some certain fields,for me, I think learning from the elder people are more important in today（in去掉，要不就说in recent years）. My following reasons will substantiate my opinion.（即便是模板，你也是运用的很不错的那种人啊~）

To begin with, the opinions from famous people might not be the correct ones. Because some of the celebrities are of poor knowledge such as some movie stars and some singers.they do not get much knowledge. How can they teach the young? In addition, Have you heard the story a star drives the car after drinking a lot of wine? have you ever heard the politician take advantage of his previlige? If you have so, you might stand on my side.（我发现asd君很擅长使用这种排比啊。） Some celebrities themselves are of poor personal ethics. How can they give the correct opinions to the children? How can they set the example for the young people? The celebrities are not necessarily represent the right side. By  contrast, the elder, they took all their lives to see things and people. They have a good sense of the rightness owing to their experience. They can tell the difference fromright and wrong.（说理性很强嘛~） They can also provide some tips related closely to the daily life. At this point the older people's opinions are more important.

In addition, let me put aside the opinion itself. What does an old man need most? money? cars? none of them are more important than a short conversation with his son or grandson. In today's high-velocity society, people are always too busy, therefore, they always ignore what is the most valuable thing for old people. They always chase stars. they can spend all their salary to attend a concert, but they always forget to listen to the old people's words.The old people always feel lonely. It is something should not happen. At this point, I think it is human-kind to listen to old people's opinions no matter they are right or wrong. Because it is communication what the old need（It is the communication that counts）.

From all aspects taken into consideration carefully above, I can safely draw the conclusion that listening to the old people's opinions are more important than listening to the celebrities. Because the famous people will also make mistakes, while the old people are more experienced in some certain fields. Second, it is the communication that the old people need most. we should care them and let them feel less lonely.偏题了啊~下次注意了。。。不过若是没有偏题，这是篇好文章呀。asd，错误很少了呀，你有进步了。

45573asdasd

我厚着脸皮来了啊~~~


Recently, a controversial issue has been brought into our eye-sights that whether the opinions from famous people are more important for the young to know than those from elder people. Eventhough the celebrities sometimes represent the headquarter pioneers in some certain fields,for me, I think learning from the elder people are more important in today（in去掉，要不就说in recent years）. My following reasons will substantiate my opinion.（即便是模板，你也是运用的很不错的那种人啊~）

To begin with, the opinions from famous people might not be the correct ones. Because some of the celebrities are of poor knowledge such as some movie stars and some singers.they do not get much knowledge. How can they teach the young? In addition, Have you heard the story a star drives the car after drinking a lot of wine? have you ever heard the politician take advantage of his previlige? If you have so, you might stand on my side.（我发现asd君很擅长使用这种排比啊。） Some celebrities themselves are of poor personal ethics. How can they give the correct opinions to the children? How can they set the example for the young people? The celebrities are not necessarily represent the right side. By  contrast, the elder, they took all their lives to see things and people. They have a good sense of the rightness owing to their experience. They can tell the difference fromright and wrong.（说理性很强嘛~） They can also provide some tips related closely to the daily life. At this point the older people's opinions are more important.

In addition, let me put aside the opinion itself. What does an old man need most? money? cars? none of them are more important than a short conversation with his son or grandson.In today's high-velocity society, people are always too busy, therefore, they always ignore what is the most valuable thing for old people. They always chase stars. they can spend all their salary to attend a concert, but they always forget to listen to the old people's words.The old people always feel lonely. It is something should not happen. At this point, I think it is human-kind to listen to old people's opinions no matter they are right or wrong. Because it is communication what the old need（It is the communication that counts）.

From all aspects taken into consideration carefully above, I can safely draw the conclusion that listening to the old people's opinions are more important than listening to the celebrities. Because the famous people will also make mistakes, while the old people are more experienced in some certain fields. Second, it is the communication that the old people need most. we should care them and let them feel less lonely.偏题了啊~下次注意了。。。不过若是没有偏题，这是篇好文章呀。asd，错误很少了呀，你有进步了。

-- by 会员 1369179610 (2012/12/9 23:37:04)

恩啊，我看到的时候已经写完了，下次一定注意，这要考试1500就扔了