作文求助~

lxc1989614

TPO10
The lecture completely rejects the idea in the passage about cause of the declining of the sea otters’ population. Contrary to the opinion in the passage that the pollution triggered the decreasing of the sea otters, the professor thinks that the major contribution is attacking by predators.

The professor contradicts the first point in the passage that the known sources alone the coast leads to the slashing of sea otters. The professor argues that there is no dead sea otters washed up to the beach which is best evidence for the theory of killing by predators. If they are killed by chemical pollution, their dead bodies will be washed up on shore.

The speaker goes on to oppose the claim of the author that other sea mammals like seals and sea lions are also reducing because of the pollution. On the other hand, the professor contends that because whales are disappearing due to human activities, their predators-orcas have to change diet and resort to otters and other sea mammals.

Finally, the professor challenges the last viewpoint in the material that pollution hypothesis explains the uneven pattern of otter decline. The professor reminds us that the location which otter populations decline greatly is the place the orcas occur more easily. The big size of them made them cannot go to the shallow and rocky places. So, at these places the otters' population remained stable.

lxc1989614

6月2日101029 NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Communication skill is the most important character of those who are successful.
Asked what communication skill will do to one's life, some people have a stereotype: this skill is not indispensable in one's success, since there are myriad of other factors. I claim, on the contrary, that communication skill plays the most crucial role in one's success.

Improvement of the social relationships tops the list of expediencies. Excellent communication skill enables people to make many friends who are helpful in their work or study. A recent survey made by Fudan University, one of the most prestige universities in China, reveals that compare with those who without good communication skill, their counterparts are more likely to stand out in this competitive society. It is communication ability that made a successful person.

Surely, there has always been another advantage: eliminating the misunderstanding in the work. I want to thank my boss Jack, who owns outstanding communication capability, he never blame an employee without making out the whole thing. As a result, the atmosphere in our company is harmonious so that we can better concentrate on our work. Each year, the volume of our revenue ranks the first in our field. Hardly can we gain such a success with a boss in low communication skill.

Nevertheless, there are still some people believe that other skills like abundant knowledge are more important. But I will not walk away from my viewpoint. Without communication skill, one cannot express his or her knowledge or ideas clearly, let alone get success. It is the answer spoken by people from all walks of life, who sent a message to the questionnaire conducted by Social Bureau. All these concluded the same result that communication skill is necessary.

For all the reasons listed, it is time to applaud improvement of communication skill instead of overlooking its significance. Communication skill is part of what made one distinguished.

lxc1989614

To begin with, solving the environmental problem tops the to-do list(这个感觉有点怪怪的). The reason why it is so crucial is that it becomes（has become用完成时比较好） a major concern for the public and poses a huge threat to people's health condition. A recent survey made by Fudan University, one of the most prestige（prestigious） universities in China, reveals that compare with the last generation, its counterpart is more incline to(可以用数字表现出来，显得更真实) suffer from lung cancer and other diseases triggered by environmental pollution. According to this research, because of the pollution in the air, drinking water and food,  the rate of lung cancer has increased 32%, stomach cancer has doubled.(本句我想表达，肺癌发病率增加32%，胃癌发病率增加2倍）写不好，你看看~ It is an important problem which should be solved as soon as possible.

婷婷connie

To begin with, solving the environmental problem tops the to-do list(这个感觉有点怪怪的). The reason why it is so crucial is that it becomes（has become用完成时比较好） a major concern for the public and poses a huge threat to people's health condition. A recent survey made by Fudan University, one of the most prestige（prestigious） universities in China, reveals that compare with the last generation, its counterpart is more incline to(可以用数字表现出来，显得更真实) suffer from lung cancer and other diseases triggered by environmental pollution. According to this research, because of the pollution in the air, drinking water and food,  the rate of lung cancer has increased 32%, stomach cancer has doubled.(本句我想表达，肺癌发病率增加32%，胃癌发病率增加2倍）写不好，你看看~ It is an important problem which should be solved as soon as possible.

-- by 会员 lxc1989614 (2012/6/2 20:05:43)

呵呵，差不多了~
我也给你写一个
参考了一下wikipeida.
A survey conduced by Fudan University, a prestigious university in China, reflected that over 85% of lung caner patients share an urban life where the air pollution threatens people's healthy condition severely. According an expert connected, even though some people are not addicted to the cigarette,  those secondhand smoker  as well get a chance to suffer from lung disease.  Above all, with the advent of the automobile, the release of carbon dioxide, radon gas and other poisonous gases boosts the environmental problems.



Lung cancer

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Lung cancer is a disease characterized by uncontrolled cell growth in tissues of the lung. If left untreated, this growth can spread beyond the lung in a process called metastasis into nearby tissue and, eventually, into other parts of the body. Most cancers that start in lung, known as primary lung cancers, are carcinomas that derive from epithelial cells. The main types of lung cancer are small cell lung carcinoma (SCLC), also called oat cell cancer, and non-small cell lung carcinoma (NSCLC). The most common cause of lung cancer is long-term exposure to tobacco smoke.[1] Nonsmokers account for 15% of lung cancer cases,[2] and these cases are often attributed to a combination of genetic factors,[3][4]radon gas,[5]asbestos,[6] and air pollution[7][8][9]including secondhand smoke.[10][11]

lxc1989614

6.3 TPO11
The lecture completely rejects the idea shown in the passage about the problems caused by the decreasing audience of literature-novels. In the professor's opinion, people should not worry about this tendency.

The professor contradicts the first point in the passage that because of reading less literature, public will lose important benefits. The professor contends that other kinds of book like science-fiction also own high quality. They are more creative than the novels and encourage audience to exercise their imagination.

The speaker goes on to oppose the claim of the author that young people spend more time on other entertainments may lower the level of culture in general. On the contrary, the professor argues that there are plenty of other entertainments like music and movies, which express directly to easy understanding. So, these entertainments absolutely will not lower cultural standard.

Finally, the listening challenges the last viewpoint in the material that less audience leads to fewer talent writers, which will be a big loss for society. The professor reminds us that it is not audience's fault to pay less attention to the literature but the writers. The writers nowadays make the novels difficult to understand, which leads to less audience.

花呀clear

Asked what communication skill will do to one's life(这句话感到怪怪的 前面加个when会比较好吧?), some people have a stereotype: this skill is not indispensable in one's success, since there are myriad of (a myriad of吧? 看这里http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_are_the_myriad_of_colors)other factors. I claim, on the contrary, that communication skill plays the most crucial role in one's success.

Improvement of the social relationships tops the list of expediencies. Excellent communication skill enables people to make many friends who are helpful in their work or study. A recent survey made by Fudan University, one of the most prestige universities in China, reveals that compare with those who without good communication skill, their counterparts are more likely to stand out in this competitive society. It is communication ability that made a successful person.

Surely, there has always been another advantage: eliminating the misunderstanding in the work. I want to thank my boss Jack, who owns outstanding communication capability, (前后是两个句子 应该用分号吧? 或者在he前面加一个for)he never blame an employee without making out the whole thing. As a result, the atmosphere in our company is harmonious so that we can better concentrate on our work. Each year, the volume of our revenue ranks the first in our field. Hardly can we gain such a success with a boss in low communication skill.

Nevertheless, there are still some people believe that other skills like abundant knowledge are more important. But I will not walk away from my viewpoint. Without communication skill, one cannot express his or her knowledge or ideas clearly, let alone get success. It is the answer spoken by people from all walks of life, who sent a message to the questionnaire conducted by Social Bureau. All these concluded the same result that communication skill is necessary.

For all the reasons listed, it is time to applaud improvement of communication skill instead of overlooking its significance. Communication skill is part of what made one distinguished.

LZ的作文很不错噢 很厉害

lxc1989614

6.3
If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, you will use e-mail or text messaging, OR use the telephone or voice-messaging

Asked what kind of means of communication will someone choose when he or she wants to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, people may have a stereotype: In order to solve the problem as soon as possible, one should resort to telephone and text messages. I claim, on the contrary, that E-mail is an ideal way to discuss problems.

Convenience and economy top the list of expediencies. Just use Iphone or Ipad to connect to the internet, one can send E-mail at anytime and anywhere. Moreover, it also saves me a lot of money. A recent survey made by Fudan University, one of the most prestigious universities in China, reveals that compare with other means like telephone and messaging, E-mail saves more than ten yuan a  month to communicate, for the fee of telephone and messaging is expensive than that of internet service. It is the E-mail that made our cost of communication cheaper.

Surely, there has always been another remarkable advantage: E-mail is more likely to express matters well since there is less limitation in the words. I want to thank E-mail, which solves my myriad of problems in my life. I remember the time I studied in American and far away from parents. One day I had some conflicts with my best friend Mary. Then I sent an E-mail to my mom and expressed my feeling in long passage. She understood my situation and gave me many suggestions from her experience, which were very helpful. Consequently, Mary and I became best friends again. Hardly can I deal with such a problem without E-mail.

Nevertheless, there are still some people believe we should choose telephone in emergency situation, while E-mail may not be checked quickly. But I will not walk away from my viewpoint. In modern society, majority people are used to check their E-mail everyday for work, for study and for communication. So E-mail is more efficiently to handle a problem.

For all the reasons listed, it is time to applaud E-mail for discussion instead of other low -efficiency methods. E-mail is part of what made our puzzles more easily solved.

teresaz318

TPO10
The lecture completely rejects the idea in the passage about cause of thedeclining of the sea otters’ population. Contrary to the opinion in the passagethat the pollution triggeredthe decreasing of the sea otters, the professor thinks that the majorcontribution is attacking by predators.

The professor contradictsthe first point in the passage that the known sources alone the coast leads tothe slashing of sea otters. The professor argues that there is no dead seaotters washed up to the beach which is best evidence for the theory of killing by predators.If they are killed by chemical pollution, their dead bodies will be washed upon shore.

The speaker goes on tooppose the claim of the author that other sea mammals like seals and sealions are also reducing because of the pollution. On the other hand, theprofessor contends that because whales are disappearing due to humanactivities, their predators-orcas have to change diet and resort to otters andother sea mammals.

Finally, the professor challenges the last viewpoint in the material thatpollution hypothesis explains the uneven random 个人提议可以换一下patternof otter decline.The professor reminds us that the location which otter populations declinegreatly is the place the orcas occur more easily. The big size of them madethem cannot go to the shallow and rocky places. So, at these places the otters'population remained stable.




很好啊，很Perfect啊！！ 只是有一点点的小提议！
LZ 的作文很不错～～！

lxc1989614

Tpo12
The lecture completely rejects the main idea shown in the passage about the authority of Jane Austen's portrait. In the professor's opinion, the reasons in the passage are not convincing and the portrait is not teenager Jane Austen.

The professor contradicts the first point in the reading that Jane Austen's family recognized it as Jane Austen's portrait. The professor argues that at that time, Jane Austen has been died 70 years. So, even the family members have not seen Jane by themselves, let alone known her certainly.

The speaker goes on to oppose the claim of the author that the features in the portrait are similar to those in the portrait of adult Jane Austen. On the contrary, the professor argues that Jane had an extend and large family, there are a lot of teenagers in the family may look like Jane. In fact, the portrait is one of Jane's distant relatives.

Finally, the listening challenges the last viewpoint in the material about the evidence of the time when the picture created. The professor reminds us that a stamp on the back of the canvas revealed the picture's time. The seller of the canvas did not sell canvas in London at that time. Actually, he sold the canvas when Jane was older.

lxc1989614

6.4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should encourage their children to do their schoolwork independently rather than help children to do their schoolwork.

Asked what should parents do when their children have some school work to do , majority of parents in China have stereotype: It is parents' responsibilities to guide their children in the assignments to get better grade. I claim, on the contrary, that it is better for kids to do school work independently.

Avoiding mistakes in the future study tops the list of expediencies. Learning from the mistakes and correct them, leading to improvement in the next time. A recent survey made by Fudan University, one of the most prestigious universities in China, reveals that compare with the kids who finish assignments under the help of their parents, their counterparts do better in the final exams. According to this research, about ten points higher in math test, five in English and seven in science. It is doing school independently make a student stand out.

Surely, there has always been another remarkable advantage: finishing assignment on one's own elevates one's thinking ability. I want to thank my parents. They often encourage me to do school work independently and rarely assist me, which allowed me to think deeper and further. It benefits me not only in the study but also in my life, especially in my social interaction with others. It enables me to analyze the situation and to understand others better. Hardly can we gain this under parents' help.

Nevertheless, there are some people still believe that parents should help students to do school work to reduce their pressure. But I will not walk away from my viewpoint. What will happen if a student attend SAT test without others' assistant? Children may face myriad of challenges in his or her life without their parents in the near future.

For all the reasons listed, it is time to applaud inspiring students doing school work independently instead of helping them. Being independently is part of what made students outstanding.