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rio

以下是引用德克的猪在2007-7-5 3:25:00的发言：

special thanks to rio

谢谢对iBT的支持呀!!!!

客气

你为大家做出了很大贡献

qianrene

两个牛牛都很热心，就不要推来让去了HOHO

yaoshuming

文章出炉了，希望大nn小nn拍砖~~这一次自我感觉良好，时间上毕竟比上一次有进步（3小时搞出来的，上一次用了一天，哈哈~~~），字数470左右。希望猪猪这一次不只是说我写得不好了，告诉一下我哪里写得不好，我就会很感动了~~~

It is undeniable that continuous advancement of technologies has brought tremendous change in our daily life, and more options are supplied to satisfy diverse demands from various persons. For instance, people can make a decision on how to go to the destination, via train or via airplane, or how to keep in touch with a friend far away from us, via telephone or via internet.

 

When someone asks him/herself the question "how do I like to enjoy a performance, by taking part in the live locale or watching it on television?", the answer depends on a lot of considerations such as what is the most crucial in his/her opinion. For me honesty, attending a live performance is always attracting me, since the atmosphere brought by the live show is so appealed to me that I am fail to consider the others as the most important factors.

 

Such is human nature, that although just sitting in front of the television, people gain the whole content of a show is regarded as effortless and thus many people select this manner. However, the most convenient access is possibly not the optimal one. Comparing to seeing with one's own eyes on the spot, looking at the same event through TV cannot be encouraged a greater level of participation as well as a better understanding of the event. As it do in the case of one of my friends who enthusiastically love the rock'n'roll, he was used to watch the music concert on television at home at one time until he had a occasional chance to go to attend a live concert. He went into raptures when he came back and he was forever extolling the virtues of the live concert, considering this experience as the most precious and memorable one. He told me what he saw on the spot: the beat is going strong, and when the band is playing its most famous songs, the listeners are almost crazy for this. They cry, they jump and they forget all the unhappy things in their lives at the moment, what makes the smell of excitement and passion waft through the air. My friend said that he is fail to feel any distance between the band and him, and he is full of satisfaction because he is likely to participate in the entire show despite being an audience. What makes him depressed is only the finite time of the show.

 

His feeling just confirm my perspective that the privilege of attending a live concert is well worth the merely little troubles which can be avoided by watching the concert on television, and furthermore I deem that when one immerse his/herself in the atmosphere on the spot, s/he might ignore all the discommodiousness which virtually exist before. Therefore, I am obliged to maintain that a live performance is more enjoyable than some merely active pictures on TV.

alexwithibt

以下是引用yaoshuming在2007-7-5 23:38:00的发言：

文章出炉了，希望大nn小nn拍砖~~这一次自我感觉良好，时间上毕竟比上一次有进步（3小时搞出来的，上一次用了一天，哈哈~~~），字数470左右。希望猪猪这一次不只是说我写得不好了，告诉一下我哪里写得不好，我就会很感动了~~~

It is undeniable that continuous advancement of technologies has brought tremendous change in our daily life, and more options are supplied to satisfy diverse demands from various persons. For instance, people can make a decision on how to go to the destination, via train or via airplane, or how to keep in touch with a friend far away from us, via telephone or via internet.

When someone asks him/herself the question "how do I like to enjoy a performance, by taking part in the live locale or watching it on television?", the answer depends on a lot of considerations such as what is the most crucial in his/her opinion. For me honesty, attending a live performance is always attracting me, since the atmosphere brought by the live show is so appealed to me that I am fail to consider the others as the most important factors.

Such is human nature, that although just sitting in front of the television, people gain the whole content of a show is regarded as effortless and thus many people select this manner. However, the most convenient access is possibly not the optimal one. Comparing to seeing with one's own eyes on the spot, looking at the same event through TV cannot be encouraged a greater level of participation as well as a better understanding of the event. As it do in the case of one of my friends who enthusiastically love the rock'n'roll, he was used to watch the music concert on television at home at one time until he had a occasional chance to go to attend a live concert. He went into raptures when he came back and he was forever extolling the virtues of the live concert, considering this experience as the most precious and memorable one. He told me what he saw on the spot: the beat is going strong, and when the band is playing its most famous songs, the listeners are almost crazy for this. They cry, they jump and they forget all the unhappy things in their lives at the moment, what makes the smell of excitement and passion waft through the air. My friend said that he is fail to feel any distance between the band and him, and he is full of satisfaction because he is likely to participate in the entire show despite being an audience. What makes him depressed is only the finite time of the show.

His feeling just confirm my perspective that the privilege of attending a live concert is well worth the merely little troubles which can be avoided by watching the concert on television, and furthermore I deem that when one immerse his/herself in the atmosphere on the spot, s/he might ignore all the discommodiousness which virtually exist before. Therefore, I am obliged to maintain that a live performance is more enjoyable than some merely active pictures on TV.

这是我改的.

我觉的你写的很好.32分.

It is undeniable that continuous
                advancement
                has brought
                tremendous
                change in our daily life, and more options are supplied to satisfy diverse demands
                from various persons. (It is undeniable that, with tremendous change that rapid developing of technology and society brings to us in daily lives, we live more conveniently and are given more options to satisfy our diverse preference)For instance, people can make a decision on how to go to the destination, via train or via airplane, or how to keep in touch with a friend far away from us, via telephone or via internet.

 

When someone asks him/herself the question "how do I like to enjoy a performance, by taking part in the live locale or watching it on television?", the answer depends on a lot of considerations such as what is the most crucial in his/her opinion. For me honesty, attending a live performance is always attracting me (always attractive), since the atmosphere brought by the live show is so appealed
            to me that I am fail to consider the others as the most important factors. (since blast in a live performance drives me crazy. I so appeal to feelings that, compared with watching TV at home, nothing can change me to vote attending live performance as my first choice)

qianrene

7/06/2007, 写作第五篇:  049(185题库).

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When would you choose if you were given two options? face-to-face communication or distant communication, such as letters,email, or telephone calls?Were I supposed to answer this question, I would say I prefer the former, since there are some conspicuous advantages indicating that the former outweighs the latter. The reasons are listed below.

To begin with, face-to-face communication is a way of contact existed in this world  as long as the human history.Not to mention the ancestors using this type of method to construct the civilization  about  thousands of years ago, currently the face-to-face communication, which is also called direct communication,contributes a lot to our daily life, it is straightforward and easy to understand by people involved in this communication,say, conversation between two people.However, the communication through the untraditional ways of letters, emails,or telephones, all of which based on the technological development, is dubious and hard to transit the actual meaning intended to be transmitted. Take my own experience for example, when I was interviewed, I will use the guestures to express my desire;my voice will convey the confidence which can never be seen through a piece of paper, the resume.The employer can also judge my credibility by observing my eyes, a scientific experiment has proved that when people lied, they always look up leftside direction.So, I guess this face-to-face communication is do good to both of the party, employer or applicant.

Another virture of the face-to-face communication is that this mean is not expensive for most of us and can utterly avoid misunderstanding.Normally,letters need the stamps, email needs computers and internet, telephone calls need the telephone equipments, whereas the face-to-face communication need only you and other people be involved in.In this kind of low-cost conversation, you can speak as long as you want to, without the worries about the expense.
Admittedly, some misunderstanding can be avoided by this method, for example, when you use the letters or other indirect ways of communication, the language always don't include all the feeling you have, and if you want the interaction immediately, this is not possible unless you choose face-to-face.

To sum up, there is more advantages when one choose the face-fo-face communication, since it is convenient, explicit,and more relax.I believe that this kind of communication will not change a lot and  be progamatic now and forever.It is beneficial for our daily life.

感觉越写越倒胃口了呢

yaoshuming

宝儿姐姐我觉得你写得太快了~~~好像快跟不上了……

alexGG，32分是什么意思啊……谢谢帮我改作文~~~我把这篇文章好好改改然后背下来，忽忽~~

yaoshuming

以下是引用qianrene在2007-7-6 20:17:00的发言：

7/06/2007, 写作第五篇:  049(185题库).

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When （应该是what?）would you choose if you were given two options? face-to-face communication or distant communication, such as letters,email, or telephone calls(jj这句话这么写就变成distant communication is letters,email, or telephone calls,这里用该加一个by or via)?Were I supposed to answer this question, I would say I prefer the former, since there are some conspicuous advantages indicating that the former outweighs the latter（jj这句话也有问题，what of the former outweighs what of the latter?）. The reasons are listed below.

To begin with, face-to-face communication is a way of contact existed in this world  as long as the human history.Not to mention the ancestors using this type of method to construct the civilization  about  thousands of years ago, currently the face-to-face communication, which is also called direct communication,contributes a lot to our daily life, it is straightforward and easy to understand by people involved in this communication,say, conversation between two people.However(这个表示转折，前一句和后一句没有转折关系), the communication through the untraditional ways of letters, emails,or telephones, all of which based on the technological development, is dubious and hard to transit the actual meaning intended to be transmitted. Take my own experience for example, when I was interviewed, I will use the guestures to express my desire;my voice will convey the confidence which can never be seen through a piece of paper, the resume.The employer can also judge my credibility by observing my eyes, a scientific experiment has proved that when people lied, they always look up leftside direction.So, I guess this face-to-face communication is do good to both of the party, employer or applicant.

Another virture of the face-to-face communication is that this mean is not expensive for most of us and can utterly avoid misunderstanding.Normally,letters need the stamps, email needs computers and internet, telephone calls need the telephone equipments, whereas the face-to-face communication need only you and other people be involved in.In this kind of low-cost conversation, you can speak as long as you want to, without the worries about the expense.
Admittedly, some misunderstanding can be avoided by this method, for example, when you use the letters or other indirect ways of communication, the language always don't include all the feeling you have, and if you want the interaction immediately, this is not possible unless you choose face-to-face.

To sum up, there is more advantages when one choose the face-fo-face communication, since it is convenient, explicit,and more relax.I believe that this kind of communication will not change a lot and  be progamatic now and forever.It is beneficial for our daily life.

感觉越写越倒胃口了呢

后面没怎么仔细看了，我觉得是不是姐姐是掐时间做的，所以有些地方有点仓促意思表达的不是很清楚。同义替换词再想想吧~~~如果写的没灵感了，不如把以前写的东西精改一下，说不定能得到更多~~菜鸟的个人愚见，还请n人指正

德克的猪

这次写得不错的说

yaoshuming

德克帮我改一下吧，我突然对自己的作文很绝望，很难过……哭去了

德克的猪

其实,我看了,也改了一些,只有改到很少的地方.一些小错误.

3个小时多了点.最近我在重新些写作的帖子