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[原创] iBT@CD 第一写作小组(8 月), 开始啦....

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发表于 2007-7-1 16:21:00 | 只看该作者
偶尔用用很吓人的词汇,也是可以的
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发表于 2007-7-1 17:38:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用qianrene在2007-7-1 16:20:00的发言:

miscellaneous好复杂,miscellaneous多背几次,为什么用girlfriend比较好,显得年轻一点吗?

谢谢RIO帮我改作文

很久没吃过西瓜了

这边西瓜太贵了

43#
发表于 2007-7-1 19:12:00 | 只看该作者
昨天吃了一个西瓜```` 今天拉肚子了
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-7-1 22:36:00 | 只看该作者

多谢得克和各位版主帮我们改作文

问克帮和大家一个文题.关于魔板,是否应该套用一下?看了一些魔板,里面啥也没写,不过给人感觉象那么回事.

这样,把内容添进去就OK拉. 着样不是更好吗?

我现在写作文还没套魔板.不过在想这个问题.

大家怎么看的??

说说你们的观点.

谢谢


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发表于 2007-7-1 22:59:00 | 只看该作者
我也帮你改拉,都没谢我虽然改得不好德克说过不要套模板的,当然套得好的例外,今天我没写作文-_-||
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-7-2 08:32:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用qianrene在2007-7-1 22:59:00的发言:
我也帮你改拉,都没谢我虽然改得不好德克说过不要套模板的,当然套得好的例外,今天我没写作文-_-||

我想专门感谢你的.

47#
发表于 2007-7-2 09:24:00 | 只看该作者

Sports games and reading books are two different aspects of students’ life. Without one of them, the life of a student is not complete and not balanced. Reading makes a man become clever and smart in mind, doing sports game is also can make a man become strong and healthy. If we just pay attention to reading books, it’s not good for a student’s entire development.

Sports activities are not only good for people’s health but can make our mind acute. It is very important to do some sports activities daily. As we all know, young people they are all activated and have more energies. So they especially need to relax through doing sports game.

There are many various sports games including running, swimming, playing basketball, playing tennis, etc. If universities can provide good equipments for sports use, students will be more benefit from it. They can do what favorite sports game they want.

Students can also make many new friends through doing sports game. For example, when I began to learn how to swim in a sports gym, it was so difficult for me that I have no idea how to relax my body. At that time, a young man taught me patiently. With his help, I not only learned swimming rapidly but established a very good friendship with him. From my opinion, I felt much happier than reading a novel.

Apart from our regular study, doing sports activities acts an important role for every student in university. So I think universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries.


[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-2 9:25:33编辑过]
48#
发表于 2007-7-2 09:26:00 | 只看该作者

英语基础比较差,几年前勉强4级及格那种程度.

但是今年年底必须考T,希望各位多拍拍砖了.

谢谢大家!

49#
发表于 2007-7-2 09:36:00 | 只看该作者

现在加入还来得及吗?

这几天先把这几篇补上,希望能跟上大家的步伐。。。

YAOMM呢?

50#
发表于 2007-7-2 13:26:00 | 只看该作者

目前到底该写第几篇了?

到底组员都有几个?

不是同一作文题目吗?

我都被搞晕了……

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