[原创] iBT@CD 第一写作小组(8 月), 开始啦....

alexwithibt

成员:

qianrene
yaoshuming
alexwithibt
lyrath
autumnbird 
Water_Water
lindenwxl
nap
qnz

要求:

每个人的能力和进度不同.可以酌情. 每个题目一大概是一周时间.

只要你post上去了, 大家都会看并有义务根具自己的水平互改.

6/26/2007, 写作第一篇:  011(185题库).

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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6/29/2007, 写作第二篇:  027(185题库).

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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7/01/2007, 写作第三篇:  028(185题库).

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

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7/03/2007, 写作第四篇:  035(185题库).

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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7/06/2007, 写作第五篇:  049(185题库).

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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7/29/2007, 写作第六篇:  038(185题库).

Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. (Agree/Disagree)

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7/31/2007, 写作第七篇:  054(185题库).

One should never judge a person by external appearances. (Agree/Disagree)

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[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-31 14:22:11编辑过]

德克的猪

我来占个沙发,好发链接用

qianrene

不好意思啊，现在出去吃饭，我该挨打，呆会回来献丑，我写得很菜哦~~

alexwithibt

以下是引用qianrene在2007-6-26 17:47:00的发言：
不好意思啊，现在出去吃饭，我该挨打，呆会回来献丑，我写得很菜哦~~

我比你还菜啊....

我都不敢拿出来....

roseyx0915

我也要加入可以吗？？ 还是有第二小组？？？？

德克的猪

我刚刚花整整30分钟写了一篇这个题目,结构比较另类,因为时间不够了,收尾很仓促

We are brought up to believe that book, as something which can convey knowledge and emotion, is of the first importance in any form of education. This theory, always, is beyond doubt. In the light of it, modern universities invariably invest large sum of money on the building or maintaining of the libraries, and I agree this is a good cause.

 

But just now I failed to mention that a multitude of universities, while spending money on libraries, ignore the indispensable role played by sports activities on campus-the truth is that the budgets on sports instruments, when compared with the ones on libraries, are pathetically low. From my perspective, sports activities and libraries are equally crucial in any university.

 

It would suffice to mention the positive effects from the sports activities to support my standpoint-sports activities should be allotted with the same money with libraries. As no doubt, students in many universities currently live under the intense stress triggered by the formidable academic study. According to this situation, it is not difficult for any of us to come to the conclusion that they need something to help them to release such harmful pressure. Sports activities, indubitably, can act such a role perfectly. Via taking sports, I believe, students can relieve the stress, as in the playgrounds they can run frantically to chase the ball and thoroughly enjoy the leisure. In this avenue, their worry and anxiety reduce and self-recupuration begins. My brother, let me say, is a student in a top university. In his first year, he found it next to impossible to keep his leading position in academic fields as he used to do in high school due to the fact that in top universities, the most students’ capabilities are outstanding, even supernatural. As my brother felt a twinge of being thrown behind by others, he began to immerse himself in the libraries-this, directly, drove him into a state of great angst-there were so many books that it seemed he could never overcome this challenge. Fortunately, in his university, there were many sports activities. Every time when he felt exhausted, mentally, he brought his Spalding basketball and tied up his Air Jordan shoes, and then went to the indoor court for a shooting practice. After 300 times of shooting, his shirt was saturated with sweat-in spite of being worn out, physically, he released the negative grasp in his brain because physical excise successfully draw his attention to another field of interest. And after sports activities, he said, he felt recharged and vigorous so that he could concentrate on study again.

 

Well, from my brother’s experience, we can see it easily that sports activities are worthy of being given with the same sum of money that given to libraries.

qianrene

Nowadays as the educational developments among universities are becoming more and more competitive, many universities put most of their budget into the renovation of the condition or environment of the campus, because they think that the concrete buildings is the essential ingredient in achieve the goal to be successful in attracting students, however, I would say that this strategy will not function as expected, to my own opinion, the students parents’ concern is more focused on the health improvement of the students and students may choose the school based on the varieties of sports activities the university can provide.

 

 

The students’ health is important to their study at first, without the good condition of body, students couldn’t concentrate on the assignments or classes, since when they are sick, they need to go to the hospital and are persuaded to have more relaxation to get recovered quickly, if they insist to go to classroom or libraries to study, the situation will always be more severe. Moreover, a lot of students, especially boys, have affection on the sports such as playing basketball, playing football, swimming, and jogging as well, they like the sports not only because the sports can build up their body shape, but also because they just love it, they consider it be cool sweating on the playground. As with the case of girls, they prefer sports for some other reasons for example, the dancing, it can be beneficial for the girls’ purpose of losing weight, you know, they like to be more thin and think that the thinner the more beautiful they should be.

Whereas the libraries is the foundation of the facility in an university, we can’t ignore their importance, but since the accommodation is just as tremendous as to provide the enough information and reference to students, providing more funding to the improvement of libraries is not that pragmatic, reversely, the money put into the libraries may increase the economic burden of the university committee. So with this consideration, I would agree that the universities should invest more money to promote the sports activities among students to maintain their health, and a moderate investment to libraries is a better choice.

我没计时，因为不敢计时，一点点想出来的，要是考试这样我就死翘翘了，上次旧托福就栽在作文上，感觉一直把握不好老外的标准，哎，字数才360

德克写的好好啊，好多词我都没见过，句式也没用过，而且我忘记托福喜欢举例了，没举例-_-||

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-6-26 20:58:54编辑过]

roseyx0915

德克自己也来写了?！结构确实比较另类，但是感觉还是挺自然的  而且比较具体化....  应该比较迎合ETS吧

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-6-26 21:04:49编辑过]

yaoshuming

看来明天要写我T的第一篇作文了，ggmm等着~~

lyrath

占个楼先~~~明天交作业。