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An increasing number of people are complaining about the skyrocketing(这词当时我也想用,就没想起来) price of housing in the contemporary era, which attracts a highly public concentration. It is the high time, from my point of view, that our government built new housing rather than paying(这里我有点疑惑,rather than后面是do 吧,doing 行么) too much attention on preserving old historic building.
Primarily, stressing(这个词好) more significance on building new housing satisfies people's need in modern society. Nowadays, people are more aware of their personal space, which raises the need of seperate(separate) space in housing(which不能指代全句阿,people’s awareness of personal space raises the need of separate room in housing 你看这个可以么,参考哈). People are no longer willing to share the same washroom with their neighbors in today. That is to say, old historic buildings, which usually have no exclusive water closet or kitchen, do not satisfy people's taste anymore. Hence, with the rapid development of economy, more modern buildings are required to meet people's need.
Secondly, modern buildings are more space-saving than historic buildings, which are good ways of solving the tension of housing(which 真不能这么用啊which 应该是construction of modern building 不是mofern building). In traditional culture, a much space occupied construction is always regarded as splendid and spectacular building. In this case, take the Siheyuan-a traditional kind of housing in Beijing as an example, it was built so large and wide. However, the growing population does(我觉得can比较合适,还是别扭,人口不能忍受建筑?) not tolerant such architects, so the need for a space-saving building appears. As for some new buildings, functions and space are more concentrated by architectures in order to maximum their(无指代,growing population远了一点吧) profits, and they are indeed more suitable to a modern need of a enormous population.
Furthermore, it is vital for the government to pay close(这个词能这么用么) attention to construct new buildings because it will encourage the creativity of a nation. Architectures are enabled(有点别扭, are able呢,参考阿,可以商量一下) to design a diversity of new buildings with both convenience and modern appearance if supported by the government. Though history is an important component of a country, a new building can also add popularity to historical ones. For instance, the "new pyramid" built in front of the Verse Palace(Palace of Versailles) in France, is a perfect combination of historic elements with high-tech design. It not only preserved the traditional construction, but also created new masterpiece in the world.
In the end, I firmly believe that our living standard will be improved if policies are published by the government to build new housing than preserving(rather than preserve)old historic building. 晨依,我真觉得你要注意一下,which |
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