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161.D

My thoughts	OG
Ø 条件从句(if)的主句用一般将来时,排除ABC Ø E的were跟density单数不对应,选D Ø C的should应省略 Ø AB的would不对,且B的provided应跟that来带出从句 Ø E的in that region修饰了density,改变了原文的意思	Ø    正确答案B在三个关联从句中的三个动词都用了正确的具指示性的时态:predicts, will fail和is Ø    Density(密度)从逻辑上要用greater than来修饰,AE用numerous来修饰density,错误 Ø    AB中,would fail的时态跟其他动词的时态不对应 Ø    B用provided代替了if,产生逻辑错误: provided一般用于假设必定失败的事物 Ø    C的should fail和后面的was矛盾,且与前面的predicts时态不对应 Ø    CE用了timber wolf density,错误,wolf本身是不能用密度来描述的,只有wolf的population才能用密度来描述 Ø    E用了were,单复数不符
考点：
Ø   条件从句:一般现在时和一般将来时 Ø   逻辑关系:名词和其修饰成分之间的对应:密度不能用numerous形容;密度不能用来表示wolf只能表示population Ø   单复数之主谓搭配

D, the best choice, uses a correct sequence of present and future indicative verb forms--predicts, will fail, and is--in the three related clauses. Density, an abstract "mass" noun, is logically construed with greater than. In A and B, would fail disagrees with the other verbs in tense and mood. Choice A misconstrues density with more numerous than, and B uses the pretentious and illogical word provided for if a conditional clause after a negative idea (would fail). C's should fail and was are confusing and inconsistent with predicts. C and E use the absurd phrase timber wolf density. (The wolves are not dense; their population is dense.) E also uses an inconsistent subjunctive form, were, and misconstrues density with more numerous than.

162.C

My thoughts	OG
Ø AB: parents被restrained,不符合逻辑关系,排除 Ø DE: under four years of age变成修饰restrain,改变原文意思,同时,require的强调对象从parents转移到了children,改变句子强调重心,选C Ø B: require sth of sb,不惯用	Ø    本题要求句子的各个成分顺序合理以避免歧义 Ø    AB中被restrained的是parents不是children,改变了句子原意 Ø    DE将under…放在restrained后面,使句子产生歧义:under…更像是在修饰restrained而不是children Ø    E将in the…放在parents后面,看起来像在修饰parents
考点：
Ø   逻辑关系:句子各成分之间的关系及放置在什么样的位置才能正确表达句子意思

This question requires the correct placement of sentence parts to achieve accurate meaning and to avoid awkwardness. Choice C most accurately and efficiently expresses the meaning of the Tennessee child-passenger protection law. Choices A and B absurdly indicate that it is the parents, not the children, who are to be restrained. Choices D and E misplace the phrase under four years of age so the phrase dangles and seems to modify restrained rather than children. In addition, E misplaces the phrase in a child safely seat to create the idea that the parents are in a child safety seat.

163. D

My thoughts	OG
Ø 划线部分结尾应是so…that,..结构,AE的enough和B的such排除 Ø C中,hang…,sleep…,and move,三个并列动作都成了use…to的内容,改变句子原意,选D Ø 划线部分前有Found.,.,表明划线部分的sloth是特指的东西,应该用the sloth而不是sloths Ø A中sleep跟hang平行对称,表示这是两个分离的独立的动作,产生逻辑错误 Ø BC的and前后成分不对应	Ø    正确答案D正确地将sleeping和moving作为hangs的从属部分,且使用了正确的习惯用法so…that….D的its也清楚表明了limbs是sloth的而不是trees的 Ø    AE错误地将hang和sleep这两个动作并列;B用了一个awkward和不平行的序列: sloths hang ..., they sleep ..., and with....; C的结构使句子confusing: use their... limbs to hang ..., sleep ..., and move ....   Ø    AE用了错误的习惯用法infrequently enough that Ø    ABC的复数sloths跟单数its coat and…its toes不对应 Ø    E在move前加了it,使其变成了一个独立从句,错误
考点：
Ø   平行对称: …and… Ø   逻辑关系:谁是谁的从属动作 Ø   单复数对应

D, the best choice, correctly subordinates sleeping and moving to hangs while using the idiomatically correct phrasing so (infrequently) that.... The pronoun its shows clearly that the limbs belong to the sloth, not the trees. Choice A illogically coordinates hang and sleep and, like E, uses the unidiomatic expression infrequently enough that. B creates an awkward and nonparallel series: sloths hang ..., they sleep ..., and with.... C creates a confusing and absurd image with use their... limbs to hang ..., sleep ..., and move .... A, B, and C all mistakenly use the plural sloths, which does not agree , with its coat and... its toes. E wrongly coordinates hangs and sleeps and violates parallelism by inserting it before moves to create a new independent clause.

164.B

My thoughts	OG
Ø Propose that x do y或propose x to do y,排除ADE Ø C的perhaps不如could open肯定,表达不精确 Ø C的perhaps…不知道是在修饰park还是在修饰funding,选B	Ø    A的which从句和D的perhaps open to修饰了development,但其实开的是公园而不是development Ø    C省略了proposed的宾语that来引出解释这个提议的从句,同时,C的to be是不惯用的,这里应该用be Ø    E改变了原文意思,变成funding是open的对象
考点：
Ø   erhaps/can be Ø   习惯用法: propose that x do y Ø   逻辑关系: open的对象是谁
注意
Ø   5个选项如果出现3/2局面(某个细节有三个选项一样,另外两个选项一样),往往那三个一样的选项在这点区别上是正确的,另外两个是错误的(本题有三个答案是could be,两个答案是perhaps).这个细节往往出现在选项的结尾

Choice B is best. Choice A attaches the relative clause which could be open ... to the noun development, when, in fact, it is the park that could be open. Choice C omits that, the object of proposed that is needed to introduce the clause describing the proposal. C also uses to be unidiomatically where be is correct: the commission proposed [that] funding ... to be obtained is wrong. Choice D incorrectly uses perhaps open to the public ... to modify development; the phrase should modify park. Choice E, which seriously distorts meaning, says that the commission proposed development funding and that such funding could be open to the public ....

165.E (C)

My thoughts	OG
Ø Where不如in which,选E Ø A的N1 of N2 of N3的结构表达不清晰 Ø B的they找不到复数的可指代对象 Ø BCE中,49%的基数变成了incomes,改变句子原意(变成了”收入的49%低于贫困水平,产生逻辑错误)	Ø    AE的them没有出现过的先行指代对象,且AE混淆了收入的百分比和居民的百分比(49% of them) Ø    B的they没有指代对象 Ø    BE的have和D的has表示community拥有所有低于贫困线的居民收入的49%的意思,
错误点:
Ø   Where=介词+which/what
考点：
Ø   Where=介词+which/what(要看介词是否正确)

C[Z1] , the best choice, uses a clear, direct, and economical adjective clause to indicate the percentage of household incomes below the poverty line in the community in question. Choices A and E insert the pronoun them without a stated antecedent. In addition, the wording of both A and E confuses the percentage of community residents (the implied referent of them) with the percentage of households, not the same thing at all. Choice B introduces the pronoun they without an anteced­ent. Furthermore, the use of have in B and E and of has in D illogically suggests that the community possesses 49% of all the household incomes below the poverty line.

166.B

My thoughts	OG
Ø 看到Not only…but also…,就知道考平行对称 Ø ACD的not only后面是一个句子,无法与but also后的(on)名词短语对称 Ø E的not only后是一个介词短语,but also后是一个名词短语,不对称.选B Ø CE的but also后缺少on,直接跟名词短语,句子结构不完整 Ø E的on most…变成修饰are tied to the prime,改变句子原意	Ø    习惯用法not only…but also…来连接跟prime lending rate有关的两个基础贷款:中小企业贷款和消费者贷款.只有B用了平行对称的两个成分:not only on…,but also on… Ø    CE缺少了on Ø    A; not only are…,but also on和D的not only the interest rates…,but also on都不平行,其中D尤其混淆了原文意思
考点：
Ø
注意
Ø   本题有三个but also on, 两个but also(选项结尾)

This sentence uses idiomatic paired coordinators, not only..., but also.., to relate two basic kinds of loans to the prime lending rate: (1) loans to small and medium-sized businesses and (2) consumer loans. B, the best choice, is the only one that maintains the necessary parallelism in the phrases following the paired coordinates: not only on..., but also on.... Choices C and E omit the on after but also. Choices A (not only are ..., but also on) and D (not only the interest rates ..., but also on) are not parallel either. Choice D especially garbles the meaning.

167.B

My thoughts	OG
Ø 划线部分后是were without language,则主语应该是Neanderthals而不是tracts,排除CDE Ø 看到resemble,就觉得考比较对象对等 Ø A的比较对象是a tract(单数)和those of the apes(复数),单复数不对等,选B Ø A的that多余,且resembled表示已经结束的动作,不能精确表达原文意思	Ø    句子需要一个正确的主语来对应两个谓语动词,后面一个谓语动词是were,所以主语应该是Neanderthals Ø    A的those跟a vocal tract单复数不对应 Ø    CED错误地将vocal tracts作为主语 Ø    描述一个物种同样的生理特点时,最好用单数而不用复数.CDE都用了复数的tracts,其中,D的复数tracts跟单数Neanderthal不对应,产生逻辑错误
考点：
Ø   单复数:对应,描述一个物种同样的生理特点用单数不用复数 Ø   逻辑关系:谓语对应的主语是谁
注意:
Ø   本题有两个an ape’s,两个of the apes,一个the apes’ (选项结尾) (猜测:如果出现2/2/1的局面,则那1个肯定是错的)

The sentence requires a subject appropriate to both members of a compound predicate, the second member being and so were probably without language. B, the best choice, logically uses Neanderthals as the subject. Choice A also uses this subject, but the plural pronoun those does not agree with its singular antecedent, a vocal tract. C, D, and E present the inappropriate subject vocal tracts, which cannot logically govern the second member of the predicate (i.e., vocal tracts cannot be said to be without language). Moreover, it is better to use the singular in referring to an anatomical feature common to an entire species; C, D, and E use the plural vocal tracts. D compounds the problem by giving multiple vocal tracts to one Neanderthal.

168.B

My thoughts	OG
Ø 划线部分前用的谓语动词是produces, 划线部分后面有in 1910的时间提示,则划线部分补出的谓语动词应该是did,排除ACD Ø E的a doubling of罗嗦且that it did像在修饰apples,使句子产生逻辑错误,选B Ø A的double是动词,接在动词produces后,产生语法错误 Ø C的much修饰不可数名词,而apples是可数名词 Ø D的two times是两次的意思,不表示倍数	Ø    B正确地使用了副词短语twice as many…来修饰动词produces,用many而不是much来描述可数名词apples,并用正确的动词did来表述produce的意思 Ø    AC的has不对 Ø    A用double代替了twice是awkward的,同时,A的that指代不清 Ø    C的as much as twice罗嗦,且much不对 Ø    D的as there were罗嗦,且改变了原文意思:原文指的是1910的所有苹果 Ø    E的that指代a doubling,则E的doubling就发生在1910年,产生逻辑错误
考点：
Ø   比较对象对等 Ø   …的两倍一般都用twice as many/much as,不用其他的表达方式 Ø   逻辑关系:E的doubling发生在1910,产生逻辑错误

Choice B, the best answer, correctly uses the adverbial phrase twice as many... to modify the verb produces; properly employs many rather than much to describe a quantity made up of countable units (apples); and appropriately substitutes did for the understood produced to express the logically necessary past tense of produces. Choice A awkwardly substitutes the adjective double for twice; uses that without a clear referent; and misuses has to refer to events occurring in 1910. Choice C employs the incorrect much in a wordy construction and also misuses has. D is wordy and imprecise;... as there were in 1910 refers to all apples produced in 1910, regardless of location. E is illogical: since that refers to a doubling, E nonsensically asserts that the doubling occurred in 1910.

169.A

My thoughts	OG
Ø …,…and…,肯定考平行对称 Ø 第一个element是the…power of(N+修饰N的成分,且这个N是一个自然现象),后面也必须是这个结构.只有A符合这个结构,选A Ø B:第三个element缺少特指的the,且and后变成了一个句子,不再与前两个成分有并列关系 Ø CD把两个成分都变成了句子,改变了原文的并列关系 Ø E的第二个element的名词变成了one man,与另两个element不对称	Ø    三个成分必须平行对称.句子提到了3个神秘现象,后面两个现象必须跟第一个现象保持形式上的一致:都以the开头的名词 Ø    B把第3个现象变成了一个从句 Ø    CD把后面两个现象都变成了从句 Ø    E没有用the,而且one man不是一个神秘现象,产生逻辑错误
考点：
Ø   平行对称:…, …and…
注意
Ø   本题有三个hours before the temblor,两个were detected(选项结尾)

The correct answer will maintain parallelism in a coordinate series. Three mysteries are mentioned, and the first establishes the form required for the other two members of the series, a noun phrase introduced by the (the unexpected power ...). A, the best choice, correctly uses noun phrases introduced by the for the second and third members of the series (the upward thrust... and the strange electromagnetic signals ...). Choice B substitutes a clause (strange electromagnetic signals were detected...) for the third noun phrase, and C and D use clauses instead of noun phrases for both additional members of the series. E uses two noun phrases, but they are not intro­duced by the. Furthermore, the phrase one man who ... does not logically identify one of the mysteries.

170

My thoughts	OG
Ø First一旦出现,位置决不能改变,排除CDE Ø A的had moved不对,这个动作不是发生在aired的过去,选B Ø 节目是被移动而不是自己主动move,所以要用被动,ACD的主动错误 Ø E的moved to the 1930’s和in the daytime互换了位置,改变了原文意思:变成是在白天的时候move到了30年代	Ø    正确答案B保持了前一从句中的被动和过去时 Ø    AD使用了主动,且A的过去完成时错误 Ø    C的moving分词短语替代了从句,造成句子断裂 Ø    E的aired前少了were,且将几个短语颠倒了位置,改变了原文意思
考点：
Ø   平行对称:Although从句用被动,主句是否也要用被动 Ø   First/last/always一旦出现,位置不能改变
注意
Ø   本题只有一个选项结尾跟其他不一样,这个选项就是错误的

Choice B is the best answer. It maintains the passive voice and the past tense (were ... aired) established in the intro­ductory clause. Choice D breaks this parallelism by shifting from passive to active voice (moved). Choice A also uses the active voice and inappropriately shifts to the past perfect tense (had moved); the past perfect should be used to indicate action completed before, not after, the action of were aired. In C, moving introduces a dangling participial phrase in place of an independent clause, thus producing a fragment. E drops were before aired and finishes the sentence with two prepositional phrases that distort the meaning.

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[Z1]C难道没有歧义为:收入的49%低于贫困线吗?

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-6-17 11:46:08编辑过]

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本单元总结：

一个投机取巧的办法:

1.      如果5个选项中出现了3/2局面,即有三个选项拥有一个相同的细节表达,另2个选项在同样的细节上则采取了另外一种表达,则3个细节一样的选项往往是正确的

No.164, 出现3个could be,两个perhaps—答案是could be

No.166, 出现三个but also on, 两个but also(选项结尾)—答案是but also on

No.169, 出现三个hours before the temblor,两个were detected(选项结尾)—答案是hours before the temblor

No.165, 有3个选项用where,两个选项用which(选项开头)—答案是用where的选项

2.      如果5个选项中出现了4/1或2/2/1的局面,即同样的细节,5个选项中有4个的表达方式是一样的,或2个2个是一样的,只有1个跟他们不一样,则这1个选项一定是错误的.

No.167, 出现两个an ape’s,两个of the apes,一个the apes’ (选项结尾)—结果含the apes’的答案是错误的

No.170, 四个选项结尾为the 1930’s, 只有一个选项结尾为in the daytime hours—结果结尾是in the daytime hours的答案是错误的

3.      以上所说的细节往往出现在选项的结尾,其次是选项的开头

4.      以上所说未经大量验证,仅仅是总结的一点感觉,仅供检验或时间紧急时参考,不作为解题依据.

以上结论经验证不正确!! 留在这里提醒大家吧.

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-6-19 19:40:27编辑过]

vincent0330

不错的总结.....

但是mm你该睡啦.....都半夜了.....

有个好体力也是考试的必备啊......

take care & keep going!!

vincent0330

cc....加油啊!!我现在复习SC时, 还边对照你的总结噢......不错.....

no. 32与no. 31重复噢......呵呵

vincent0330

对于no. 38, 我补充一下, 那是独立主格的用法, 用以一个足以代表前句整个动作的文法.....

vincent0330

再补补充一下: no.39 有独立主格(就是你说的新名词), 伴随用语(句子, Ving结构)

vincent0330

第40题

• instead of和rather than同时出现，一般选rather than

关于这点, 我觉得不要太绝对化, 这题毛病出在介词......cc

vincent0330

呵呵...别嫌我烦啊......

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嫌你烦？？？我狂喜还来不及呢！立刻翻笔记去对……

31和32的重复我改了。38和39原来叫独立主格啊，多谢狗狗指教。40题……嘿嘿，只是一个投机取巧的办法。当时是想总结下来，以后验证看看ETS是不是不喜欢instead of，总喜欢用rather than（目前好像还没有遇到不用rather than而用instead of的题目）。不过这两个短语的意思也有些不同吧，应该不难选择。instead of语气更强烈一些，用了A就不用B。rather than弱一些，AB都可用，但更倾向于用A。