Jecci Reborn...... 8.17

jessieager

  我觉得我们俩情况蛮像的啊,都没什么时间都没什么基础都是高二都要4月29号考.....

      那你是不是也读文科啊?呵呵!

          我6月17大7月5号到上海去学SAT诶,呵呵!

jessica021

其实...我是想读理科拉....

jessieager

想？什么意思呢？

jessieager

                                                     Counting Down Clock: 27 days

    刚回家马上又要回学校了.也不知道那个数学是不是真的死得很惨,月底还有个模考.不过可能我不能参加了...

   过了今天还有26天.恩,我喜欢这个数字.

   这周的任务是完成写作的准备工作.从周三开始记时写作,每天1到2篇吧.呵呵!

   今天先把手边有的写作资料看看.还真多啊!

   加油!

jessieager

Counting Down Clock: 24 days

丝毫没有察觉到只剩下这屈指可数的24天了。呵呵！也不知道只剩下2天的时候我还会说些什么。

已经开始着手准备作文了。发现第一篇INTEGRATED是绝对要用模板的哦！不过得用自己unique的才行，不然一眼就穿帮而且还容易忘记。我已经自制了一个Contradict的和一个Support的，好象从来没见过不是这两种类型的吧！不是反对就是支持啊！还是希望考试的时候是反对，这样比较上手。

也初步准备了一些Independent的东东。比如说我改编的开头段和结尾段。外加从CD上搜到的好的衔接句子。还有我从新东方那里学到的那个很经典的Arroyo的例子以及我一定会想办法用到的Zimo的例子。（将近120个字呐！）呵呵！看了一下以前DOWNLOAD下来的twe填空作文法，觉得那个实在是太浅太初级了。基本上都是简单句，句型也没什么变化。估计按照那样写只能上个20的样子。我想现在终于找到了一点写中文作文的感觉了，想起上个学期每次考语文大作文的时候，（一般都是议论文）我总会先花几分钟列个提纲，一般都是想好中心论点，然后分成3个分论点。最后一个排比句结尾就OK了。（一般在考试前一两天我都会很临时抱佛脚地看几篇高考满分作文，背几个万能例子：像什么项羽刘邦、曹操韩信、孔子孟子、感动中国人物。。。全都recall一遍），基本上都能保证在46~50分左右徘徊。虽然跟班上的大牛有很大距离，但是自我感觉良好：呵呵！很稳定啊！

还记得春节上新东方的时候我还在跟卉卉一起琢磨：这个。。。用英语写作文到底该怎么下笔呢？怎么把我想到的point用英语表达呢？到底是注重思想还是写作能力呢？到底。。。其实现在，也就是今天，我才觉得，何必呢？何必想得那么繁杂呢？就把它当成考语文的作文吧！只不过是外加了个时间限制而已。把自己想说的话用英文表达出来就好了。相信中国人的逻辑能力绝对没问题。

发现这两者其实真的很像。

 

好了，说说今天做了些什么吧！

首先又把学科词汇复习了一遍，然后就是精心准备了Integrated Writing的template，接着就是看了一些作文的资料：IBT高分作文，TWE填空作文法、以及以前作文考得好的牛牛们的经验介绍。然后趁热打铁写了自己觉得很赞的开头和结尾段，还有中间的衔接语和好例子。然后把他们都背下来了。

本来想看阅读机经的，可是没时间了。

晚上要写一下数学作业和练习，还要把天使的分类词汇背一遍。

 

恩！加油！

jessieager

In the lecture, the professor raises several counterarguments against the reading passage by providing drastically different evidences regarding the problem of smoking ban, especially on the aspects of health、economics and personal rights.

 The first point that the professor made to cast doubt on the reading passage is that in stead of what stated in the reading, smokers still can smoke as long as they feel like doing so, but be sure not to harm others. People, especially non-smokers, tend to have clean air and good living conditions.

  Then the professor made another point that although some restraunts and bars may have to face bankrupty if smoking are banned, just as the reading indicates, on the other hand, the non-smokers will appear in this kind of places and more bars will be built up. In fact, it is more appealing to the owners and it is a tremendous market.

  Finally, the professor stated that, on the contrary of the reading passage, smoking can generate a considerable number of cancers and disease. Such as lung cancer、heart disease and other kinds of body damages. However, the reading just mentioned few about this fact.

  In summary, the points made in the lecture explicitly contradict what the reading passage indicates.

 

 

　　这是ＫＡＰＬＡＮ　ＴＥＳＴ２的综合写作部分，我用了大概１４分钟写完的．是第一次写．总觉得有点怪怪的．想请大家帮忙给点建议啊！只有２０天的样子了，有点紧张啦．．．忽忽～

jessieager

有没有人能帮我看看呢？

  小女子感激不尽啊。。。

jessieager

有没有人能帮我看看呢？

lxzjojo

以下是引用jessieager在2007-4-5 15:20:00的发言：

In the lecture, the professor raises several counterarguments against the reading passage by providing drastically different evidences regarding the problem of smoking ban, especially on the aspects of health、economics and personal rights.

 The first point that the professor made to cast doubt on the reading passage is that in stead of what stated in the reading, smokers still can smoke as long as they feel like doing so, but be sure not to harm others. People, especially non-smokers, tend to have clean air and good living conditions.

  Then the professor made another point that although some restraunts and bars may have to face bankrupty if smoking are banned, just as the reading indicates, on the other hand, the non-smokers will appear in this kind of places and more bars will be built up. In fact, it is more appealing to the owners and it is a tremendous market.

  Finally, the professor stated that, on the contrary of the reading passage, smoking can generate a considerable number of cancers and disease. Such as lung cancer、heart disease and other kinds of body damages. However, the reading just mentioned few about this fact.

  In summary, the points made in the lecture explicitly contradict what the reading passage indicates.

 

 

　　这是ＫＡＰＬＡＮ　ＴＥＳＴ２的综合写作部分，我用了大概１４分钟写完的．是第一次写．总觉得有点怪怪的．想请大家帮忙给点建议啊！只有２０天的样子了，有点紧张啦．．．忽忽～

来看看~~MM写得挺不错了，连接用词都很流畅。kaplan你觉得怪怪的相当正常，大部分人的感觉都跟你一样，哈~

就是第三点有点牵强，最后那句太general,让人有点不解。你得expect那个rater没有读过文章，也没有听过听力，现在来看你的东东也能读得懂才行。

顺便提一下，实考中一般听力部分都3点，一一反驳阅读中的内容，对比比较清晰，结构也挺明朗的，所以会比较好下笔。kaplan在这一题上是比较难了些。关于综合写作各种材料难度的比较，MM可以参照一下非牛人考托福的贴子里面作文的部分，eddie写过比较中肯的意见的。

嘟嘟yolee

我高一捏

上海的

准备7月份考

不过没JJ那么牛