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[0527-综合]TPO13

The article introduces that recently there is a trend of commercial business of fossils. The reading material expresses a lot of concerns about the result because the business may be an unfortunate development for both scientists and general public. However, the professor says that the business’s benefits overate its disadvantages for several reasons.

First, the professor refutes the idea of the article that the public will have less access to fossils. In contrast, the public will have more exposure to the fossils for some reasons. The large amount of business trade of the fossils will make public have more chance to see the fossils. The more trade of fossils, the more purchase of them. Then some scientific constitution will have more resources to explain to the public.

On the second place, the professor does not accept the opinion that scientist are likely to lose access to some of the most important fossils. The assertion is not realistic. The reality is that every fossil need to be passed from the hand of scientists. Only scientists can give the fossil detailed identity. In this circumstance, scientists will not lose any chance of researching and studying the fossils.

The last point that the professor disagrees with the reading is that the finding of private collectors cannot destroy the scientific value of the fossils. Since much of the fossils are found unintentionally, the commercial finding is just a small part of the total finding of fossils. The finding of fossils can give scientists more data about the location of fossils or there are just many uncovered fossils without research value.

听力渣爆了。。没有限时。。

sweetyecho

综合修改～～～～～～～～～

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sweetyecho 发表于 2014-5-29 21:38
综合修改～～～～～～～～～

谢谢谢谢！~~~~

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[0530-独立]The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone

When it comes to the discussion of how to relax and reduce stress, some people would like to spend time with their friends while others prefer to spending time alone. As for me, I would choose the way of spending time alone to truly relax myself for following reasons.

To start with, spending time alone means I can choose the thing I really want to do. When many people group together to talk about what we will do to have fun, it is also a terrible experience for me because everyone has his own preference. It always takes a long time to make the final decision and there are always some disappointments. This circumstance  oppositely adds the stress. However if there is only one person, I can choose whatever I want without considering others' opinions. For example, I prefer watch romantic movies for my spare time but some of my friends prefer science fictions. It will take us a long time to decide which film to watch every time we group together and the process is filled of compromise. If I can spend time alone, there will be no this kind of problem.

Secondly, having time alone can ensure I have a quiet place to have rest. During my daily life, I often feel tired and just want to have a sleep. However, it is sometimes noisy if I am with other people. I really hope to have some private space to sleep or just do nothing. At the same time, I need to keep away from the Internet. With the development of high technology, we can communicate easily without stepping out our living room. However, the information on the Internet sometimes just bothers us. What impressed most is the terrorism affairs. I am not saying that I have no concerns about the world but I really want to be alone without any disturbance from the outside.

In the last place, as far as I am concerned, thinking is the most important thing we need to know and do in our whole life. It is true that we can have deep thinking even through the surrounding atmosphere is chaotic, however it is better if we can have some silent time to recollect what we have done in the past. The thinking process is the best way of relax.One of my favorite books is an autobiography written by Haruki. The name of the book is what I am thinking when I am running. After reading the book, I acquired that the best way of relaxing and making progress is spending some time alone and doing something that you are really into. So I just follow the way of the writer---- running everyday. During the running time, I think about what I have done in that day and what I will do in the next day or weeks. Even through running is kind of tiring, but the thinking process can truly reduce my stress about my problems. I cannot say that you cannot have good thinking experience in a noisy situation, but I am sure a silent period is better.

In summary, spending time alone can be the first choice for me to have a rest and reduce my stress. For during the private time, I can choose thing I really want to do such as running or just watch a romantic movie. The time alone can also provides me a chance to have great sleep for I really need a quiet space. The last but not least part of the reasons is that thinking when you are alone is beneficial not only to your body but also to your mental health.

对不起晚了一天才交作业，效率太渣了。。
限时30分钟的话还是写不完。。

超级无敌小鹤鹤

改好啦，i'm 企鹅 again

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超级无敌小鹤鹤 发表于 2014-6-2 22:14
改好啦，i'm 企鹅 again

谢谢组长~~辛苦辛苦~~

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[0603-综合]TPO20 333 words

In the United States, it is common to use the "let it burn" policy to deal with the fire of natural forest fires. However, in the summer of 1988, forest fires in Yellowstone caused a great damage. Then people started to argue that the "let it burn" policy has many disadvantages. However, the professor in the listening material says that even through the fire can cause damage, but sometimes it can be a good one for it can be creative.

In the first place, professor disagrees with the article because fire can develop the diversity of the forest but not decrease the amount of the vegetation. After the fire of Yellowstone, the number of plants increased because the fire created more place for plants which cannot live in the forest before. For instance, some small plants need open space with less shade. The other example is that some seed of plants can only grow after the stimulation of high temperation.

Secondly, as professor has mentioned before, she does not accept the second opinion of the reading because it is the same for animals---the type of animals grows as well. There are more space and more kinds of plants for the live of new animals, such as rabbits. Then the predators of the new coming animals will follow. As time goes by, the food chain will strengthen. The relationship between different animals will be even stronger than before.

The last point that the professor says to refute the assertion of the article is that it is not the fire that affected the tourism of Yellowstone. There are massive factors contributed to the fall-down of the tourism such as rainfall and traffic. The reality is that in the next year of fire, the tourism of Yellowstone recovered to its normal level. Several years later, the value of the Yellowstone as a tourist attraction is not affected by the fire in 1988. So it is not convincing that the fire compromised the economic value of Yellowstone.

今天是限时完成的，主要是因为文章和听力都比较简单，修改了几个拼写错误，开始的时候一定要好好检查，因为没有自动纠错啊。。

xhbhxhbh

我去哪里找你需要改的文章啊

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xhbhxhbh 发表于 2014-6-4 21:20
我去哪里找你需要改的文章啊

就是上面那篇啊。。我写的也是TPO20的综合写作。。

xhbhxhbh

sorry 啊 昨天没找到你的作文 今天才改的。。。