20th AUG, 转眼还有5天考试了。。写作文的时间不多了T.T
【独立】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise.
389words， 40min， 本来能30分钟写完的，越写到后面越词穷，一词穷就打字速度慢下来了。。。这个题目算是很好写的一类了，感觉第一段论证还行，后面大概只有10分钟，写到了第三段论证的第二句时间就到了。多花了10分钟写完剩下的和结尾，看来段内论证的逻辑顺序还得自己准备好几套，以备不时之需。这个字数其实还能再多点的，论证都没展开。
Interesting as it might be, books andmovies can only be the condiment for life. Real relaxing one's body is based onthe factors, such as a positive emotion, a long-run healthy body condition aswell as a suitable way to relax for different types of people. Therefore, in myopinion, doing sports is a better way than watching videos and reading books toget relaxed.
To begin with, even some people wouldwonder that how possible people can get relaxed by adding the physicalpressure, such doing exercises, on them, hitting gyms can actually activatepeople's body by a bit of physical pressure on them. Not only can exercisesbe highly intensive, but also it can betight and relaxed. Some oxygen-sports (自己先给自己纠个错aerobic exercise，后面也都用错了), for example yoga or jogging, can push people less. In addition, oxygen-sports can increase the people's metabolismrate and their oxygen input. According to the scientific research, highermetabolism rate and oxygen ingestion can real lessen people's muscle pressureand make people relaxed.
Moreover, as we all known that doing sport canbe benefit to the mental and physical health, healthy body condition ensurespeople's strength to persistent（自己纠错，resistant才是抵抗的意思） the pressures which are the resource of our tiring feelings. It isno doubt that watching movies and doing some reading can slow down our space afterwork or study. But if we want to be less stressed out, enforcing our health isthe only method that works.
Finally, watching movies and reading booksare sometimes not suitable for students or the people who use eyes intensivelyin their work. Because watching movies and reading books can make their eyesmore tied, which will do harm to their eyes. On the contrary, playing tennis,basketball, or football help those people relax their eyes as well asactivating their whole body, considering that the people who often use eyesalso suffer sedimetay（自己纠错sedentary久坐的） habits. Not only can students and office people find the suitabletype of exercises, but any kinds of people can meet their tastes in the gyms orsports fields.
In conclusion, even though some peoplemight be fond of movies or books as their relaxing ways, the exercise, whichcan relax and be benefit to all kinds of people in a long-run, is the bestchoice to relax ourselves from the rapid and intensive pace of our lives.
【综合】TPO-14 280 words 还是有一两点细节没听清楚。。而且笔记记得太简单，写到后面自己又想不起来了。。所以笔记和听力要找到一个平衡点才行
The reading passage presents an argumentthat not only the forest but the economy can benefit from the salvage logging.But the professor in the listening lecture disputes that the drawback of thesalvage logging might overshadow its short term gain, which is opposed to thereading passage. And she supports her point of view based on the followingreasons.
To begin with, even though the new treeneed room for growth, but it is not necessary to remove the dead trees for thenew ones as the professor argues. She explains that the dead tree mightdecomposed to add some nutrition into the soil which will do good for thegrowth of new trees. But if the dead ones are cleaned soon after the forestfire, it will decrease the necessary elements for trees to grow.
Moreover, the professor contends thatinsect problem cannot necessarily result a damage for the forest, despite thestatement in the passage that dead trees will cause a serious insectinfestation. The professor demonstrates her idea with the fact that the decreaseof insect resulted from salvage logging will do harm for the birds in theforest. And birds play an important role in the forest eco-system. So salvagelogging can be more harmful to forest than the insect problem.
Finally, the professor asserts that theeconomic gain from salvage logging will be small and comteporay (自改temporary ) ,whereas the reading passage claim the advantages of salvage logging inindustries and employment. The professor proves the claim is indefensible bypointing out that the lumber of salvage logging cannot be maintain for lots ofindustries and the workers need some specific experience to do the work.
[ 最后一段听力里的因果细节没听清楚，再加上时间不够自己编的。。所以希望改的童鞋给最后一段纠正一下~]
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