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kchszy061ban

TPO 19 综合  

In the reading text, the author talks abouht reasons that buzzging should be banned. While, the speaker in the lecture cites his personal experiences to argue that the claims in the reading text are indeed misleading and not correct.

First, the speaker says that the statement in the reading is not ture. He points out that companies only hire people who really use their products and believe these products are really good, otherwise, companies would not hire them. Such as the speaker used the phone service and he found it really useful,then, the company hired him as a paid buzzer. This is directly contradicted to its counterpart in the reading passage.

Second, according to the speaker, people even become more aware when someone talk about some products with them. They ask many questions about the price, how long the buzzer had use the products and so forth. They will not buy the product if the answers are not satisfactory. Thus, the second claim in the reading text is disputed.

Third, the speaker argues that the concern about buzzers would destory social relationship is stupid. Because only companies which have the ability to make good products will hire buzzers. Moreover, he says that if people use the phone service which he is now buzz, they would find it really helpful. So, the third claim in the reading text is totally unsounded.

Aaaaaaangela

When it comes tothe question of whether parents should help their child ren(?) with theirwork,each of us place different weight on various factors and may considercertaion(certain) phase of educating children at different time.(这句话，本来应该是总起作用的，但是感觉和下面的展开没多大关系，并没有说在不同时期的教育方针) Some people would like to help their children for the reason thatthey（their children前面主语是some people,这里的they让人误以为是some people） can finish their（去掉） work quickly and then have spare time to do other important things.While others,on the contrary（与前面while意思重复，没有必要再用，去掉）,hold different opinion（opinions）,theybelieve it is good for their children to work out their homework all on theirown,and learn how to solve the difficulties by themselves. According to my ownexperience and what I had learnt from people which（who,不要乱用which，它不能指代人） Ifamilar with,I am against the above statement（我觉得可以指代的再清晰一些，因为above既有支持的又有反对的，这样太模糊了）,and will list my explainations（explanations） as follow（follows）.

To begain with,children may dependend on（depend on这个使用在系动词后面的。。。。may后面要动词。。而且拼错了，是dependent） their parents to find all solutions of their problems if parentsalways help them. This would cause their（去掉，从前句顺接下来，本来就是children在做主语，不用加their了） childrencan not solve problems when they deal with them all on their own（themselves这个表达前面用过了，做好换一个表达）. From the time when（去掉） I was a child（，） growing up in my hometown,I loved working out problems on my own.On the contrary,my friend Mike always asked his farther when he confronted withsome difficulties. Every tiem（time）(when) our teacher gave us some homework,he was usually the firstone to finish them and the answers were all correct. All of us was(were)surprised about his talent. But(however前后并非因果关系),when（去掉） at theend of the term,we needed to take a text,his score was very low compared to me.Then I knew that the his father told him the answers of our homework,but hecould not predict the question in our text,（.）so,Mikefailed in the text. As you can see,parents' help is not always benefitial（beneficial）. 这个例子还可以讲得更深入一点，这里说，mike因为父亲告诉他答案，最后考得很差，差是和“我”比的，为什么要强调和“我”呢，感觉这样的话，就有一种特例的感觉，并不是普遍现象，建议可以再加一点，其他独立完成作业同学的论述。

Moreover,if parents often make their children rely onthem,their children' chances to contact with other people such as theirteachers,classmates and friends will reduce. It is natural for children tochoose the easy ways when they want to solve a problem. So,if their parentsalways want to（这里并不是want，是假设已经发生了，所以去掉） help them,this would give children a signal that when they want tosolve some question（face questions）,asking their parents is the quick solution. Therefore,their timeand opportunity to contact with other people would be reduced.

Finally,if parents encourage their children to do theirwork indecently,then,the consequence may be very severe. The purpose of give（giving） work tochildren is to help them improve their ability. The equal important object isthat they also need to finish their work in proper way. If they just copy theirclassmates or （to）do this when they take a test,teachers will punish them. If childrendid not know this point when they were young,they would continue their improperway when(as) they grow up. While the law is strict, they will be put intoprison if they do some work indecently. (严重性是不是提升的太厉害了，从上面的分析完全得不到下面进监狱的结果啊。。。)

Of course,with the help of parents,children could solve problems quickly and crrectly most of the time,and some parents are willing to help their children train creative thinkingability too. However,under these conditions,children can easily develop dependence（名词啊啊啊啊，怎么后面还接介词啊。。。。。） on their parents,this is harmful for their future study and work（去掉）. Also,things become even worseif children do their work indcently. Thus,based on what had been discussed above,I firmly believe that it is better for children to problems independent
ly.
建议：（一点点个人的意见哈，不一定正确，但都是自己思考以后提出来的）
1、感觉楼主字数虽然很多，但是有很多句子和观点都是重复的，可以再提炼一下
2、句式太单一了，而且从头到尾都是用一个表达（比如all on their own），可以换换其他的表达，这样文章才不会枯燥
3、基本木有连词啊。。。。句子与句子间，都是生硬的连接，建议楼主可以去背背一些连词，少用BUT什么的，尤其是没有因果关系的前提下。
4、which和when乱用，词性乱用，很多时候感觉楼主写的作文就是直接从中文翻译过来的，有很浓的中国式英语的痕迹。
5、楼主虽然举了好几个例子，但是感觉有点凑字数的感觉，例子大多只是单纯的讲述了下，并没有深层的进行探讨，和分析。
6、拼写错误太多了，建议写完后复制到word里面检查下，还有不要忘记英文标点后面，要加个空格！！！！！！！！！！

qianjun06

TPO 17 综合

In the reading text,the author writes about several reasons that birds will contiune to decline in the Uniterd States. However, this is being argued in the lecture. The professor in the lecture says that the claims in the reading text are unconvincing,and she gives her reasons in the lecture.

First,the professor admits that human development indeed cause the decline of some types of birds,but it also increases certain types of birds like doves,sea dogs and so forth,even hawks are flying around the cities to pray on these birds. The residents even complains that there so many birds in the street. So,this is directly contrary to what had been worte in the reading text.

Second,the professor points out that argiculture is increasing,but it needs less and less extra land every year. The reason is that new crops which can produce more products every unit land are created. They could produce more food in the land which already exsist,thus,it is no need to convert the wild land. The second explaination in the reading passage is disputed.

Third,people nowadays begain to aware of the influence of traditional pesticides on birds. Therefore,two methods are used to decrease this bad effect. The first one is to use pesticides which are less toxic,in order to notnot to hurt the birds. Second,new crops which have resistance to pests are invented. All these will help to reduce harm to birds. Thus,the decline predicted in the reading text would not happen according to the professor.


每段最后都有总结，值得学习

kchszy061ban

When it comes tothe question of whether parents should help their child ren(?) with theirwork,each of us place different weight on various factors and may considercertaion(certain) phase of educating children at different time.(这句话，本来应该是总起作用的，但是感觉和下面的展开没多大关系，并没有说在不同时期的教育方针) Some people would like to help their children for the reason thatthey（their children前面主语是some people,这里的they让人误以为是some people） can finish their（去掉） work quickly and then have spare time to do other important things.While others,on the contrary（与前面while意思重复，没有必要再用，去掉）,hold different opinion（opinions）,theybelieve it is good for their children to work out their homework all on theirown,and learn how to solve the difficulties by themselves. According to my ownexperience and what I had learnt from people which（who,不要乱用which，它不能指代人） Ifamilar with,I am against the above statement（我觉得可以指代的再清晰一些，因为above既有支持的又有反对的，这样太模糊了）,and will list my explainations（explanations） as follow（follows）.

To begain with,children may dependend on（depend on这个使用在系动词后面的。。。。may后面要动词。。而且拼错了，是dependent） their parents to find all solutions of their problems if parentsalways help them. This would cause their（去掉，从前句顺接下来，本来就是children在做主语，不用加their了） childrencan not solve problems when they deal with them all on their own（themselves这个表达前面用过了，做好换一个表达）. From the time when（去掉） I was a child（，） growing up in my hometown,I loved working out problems on my own.On the contrary,my friend Mike always asked his farther when he confronted withsome difficulties. Every tiem（time）(when) our teacher gave us some homework,he was usually the firstone to finish them and the answers were all correct. All of us was(were)surprised about his talent. But(however前后并非因果关系),when（去掉） at theend of the term,we needed to take a text,his score was very low compared to me.Then I knew that the his father told him the answers of our homework,but hecould not predict the question in our text,（.）so,Mikefailed in the text. As you can see,parents' help is not always benefitial（beneficial）. 这个例子还可以讲得更深入一点，这里说，mike因为父亲告诉他答案，最后考得很差，差是和“我”比的，为什么要强调和“我”呢，感觉这样的话，就有一种特例的感觉，并不是普遍现象，建议可以再加一点，其他独立完成作业同学的论述。

Moreover,if parents often make their children rely onthem,their children' chances to contact with other people such as theirteachers,classmates and friends will reduce. It is natural for children tochoose the easy ways when they want to solve a problem. So,if their parentsalways want to（这里并不是want，是假设已经发生了，所以去掉） help them,this would give children a signal that when they want tosolve some question（face questions）,asking their parents is the quick solution. Therefore,their timeand opportunity to contact with other people would be reduced.

Finally,if parents encourage their children to do theirwork indecently,then,the consequence may be very severe. The purpose of give（giving） work tochildren is to help them improve their ability. The equal important object isthat they also need to finish their work in proper way. If they just copy theirclassmates or （to）do this when they take a test,teachers will punish them. If childrendid not know this point when they were young,they would continue their improperway when(as) they grow up. While the law is strict, they will be put intoprison if they do some work indecently. (严重性是不是提升的太厉害了，从上面的分析完全得不到下面进监狱的结果啊。。。)

Of course,with the help of parents,children could solve problems quickly and crrectly most of the time,and some parents are willing to help their children train creative thinkingability too. However,under these conditions,children can easily develop dependence（名词啊啊啊啊，怎么后面还接介词啊。。。。。） on their parents,this is harmful for their future study and work（去掉）. Also,things become even worseif children do their work indcently. Thus,based on what had been discussed above,I firmly believe that it is better for children to problems independent
ly.
建议：（一点点个人的意见哈，不一定正确，但都是自己思考以后提出来的）
1、感觉楼主字数虽然很多，但是有很多句子和观点都是重复的，可以再提炼一下
2、句式太单一了，而且从头到尾都是用一个表达（比如all on their own），可以换换其他的表达，这样文章才不会枯燥
3、基本木有连词啊。。。。句子与句子间，都是生硬的连接，建议楼主可以去背背一些连词，少用BUT什么的，尤其是没有因果关系的前提下。
4、which和when乱用，词性乱用，很多时候感觉楼主写的作文就是直接从中文翻译过来的，有很浓的中国式英语的痕迹。
5、楼主虽然举了好几个例子，但是感觉有点凑字数的感觉，例子大多只是单纯的讲述了下，并没有深层的进行探讨，和分析。
6、拼写错误太多了，建议写完后复制到word里面检查下，还有不要忘记英文标点后面，要加个空格！！！！！！！！！！

-- by 会员 Aaaaaaangela (2012/7/3 12:14:09)

哇，多谢啊，你 改的好认真。 多谢建议，确实是在凑字数。 现在正在练习怎么样举例子什么滴。  你改的太好了。

kchszy061ban

7月3日Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

Nowadays, movies and televisions become ordinary to all families across the wrold. With the spreading of them, questions relate to them also rise becauuse some people find that these media have more negative effects on the way their children behave. After their children watch some really cool scenes in their mind, they would imitate actors' actions, some of these actions may dangerous to children themselves and soem may cause damage to ohters. However, other parents believe movies and television give their children different perspectives and expand their outlook. From my point of a student, I think movies and television are really helpful and help me learn much information which I can not obtain from school. Also, it is so joyful to watch some funny movies and television with my parents after one day's hard study.

It is obvious that movies and televison can help to broaden young people' horizon. Programs provided on the television are relating to various subjects, such as economy, politic, science, technology, sport, and so forth. These programs are up-to-date, easy to access, and widely available to young people through a TV set. I am a student who study physics in university. One of my favourite program is called "nature world". It talks about events happened in the nature world, like volcanic eruption, hurricane, global warming, and analyzes the reasons which cuause them, the effects of these events to human society. By watching these programs, I learnt so many things that our professors are not mentioned in the classes. And my experiences are not rare, everyone who wants to know the mysteries of the nature can do this.

Moveover, watching movies and TV programs with one's family members helps develop strong relationships and make one feel a sense of belonging. It is important to have some common topics which all family members want to involve in and shaer their opinions. While, movies and TV programs provide the oppotunity to get together and chat with family members. When I was in high school which is far away from my parents, I could only come back to see my parents once a week. I clearly remember after dinner, I sat together with my parents, watching my favourite TV programs and talked with my farther about some occasions happened at school. The atmosphere at that time was so pleasant and harmony that I could never forget.

On the contrary, in most of the movies, criminals are punished in the end. And this gives young people who watch these movies a signal that if they do the same thing, they will be punished too. Thus, watching these movies helps young people distingish whihc is benefitial and which is baneful. When they face the same situation, the information they gethered from the movies gives them the wisdom to choose the right side. Such as if one gang member invited a student to take part in his/her party, then the student recalled punishments that the gang members suffered in the jail, and their miserable destinies after they get out from there. S/he would refuse the gang member. Youngsters could not learn this from teachers in school or from their parents who are always teach them positive things about the society. So, movies and TV programs are beneficial to hamper youngsters do improper things.

Of course, movies and television indeed have some bad effects on certain young people, but the violence scenes in them are limited, so the causes of their misbehavings could not only be imputed to movies and television. Therefore, to exaggerate the nagetive effects and diminish the positive ones are not fair.

sailingqiong

来改你7.3号的作文啦~
7月3日Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

Nowadays, movies and televisions become ordinary to all families across the wrold. With the spreading of them, questions relate to them also rise becauuse some people find that these media have more negative effects on the way their children behave.（这句话不错 一句话讲清楚问题） After their children watch some really cool scenes in their mind, they would imitate actors' actions, some of these actions may dangerous to children themselves and soem may cause damage to ohters. However, other parents believe movies and television give their children different perspectives and expand their outlook. From my point of a student, I think movies and television are really helpful and help me learn much information which I can not obtain from school. Also, it is so joyful to watch some funny movies and television with my parents after one day's hard study.

It is obvious that movies and televison can help to broaden young people' horizon. Programs provided on the television are relating to various subjects, such as economy, politic, science, technology, sport, and so forth. These programs are up-to-date, easy to access, and widely available （喜欢这三个用词的并列）to young people through a TV set. I am a student who study （建议用过去时态）physics in university. One of my favourite program is（was） called "nature world". It talks about events happened in the nature world, like volcanic eruption, hurricane, global warming, and analyzes the reasons which cuause them(reason和cause重复了。。。。最近在看GMAT 所以对这种wordy特别敏感), the effects of these events to human society. By watching these programs, I learnt so many things that our professors are not mentioned in the classes. And my experiences are not rare, everyone who wants to know the mysteries of the nature can do this.

Moveover, watching movies and TV programs with one's family members helps develop strong relationships and make one feel a sense of belonging. It is important to have some common topics which all family members want to involve in and shaer their opinions. While, movies and TV programs provide the oppotunity to get together and chat with family members. When I was in high school which is far away from my parents, I could only come back to see my parents once a week. I clearly remember after dinner, I sat together with my parents, watching my favourite TV programs and talked with my farther about some occasions happened at school. The atmosphere at that time was so pleasant and harmony that I could never forget. （都用自身的example 很清楚很有同感）

On the contrary, in most of the movies, criminals are punished in the end. And this gives young people who watch these movies a signal that if they do the same thing, they will be punished too. Thus, watching these movies helps young people distingish whihc is benefitial and which is baneful. When they face the same situation, the information they gethered from the movies gives them the wisdom to choose the right side. Such as if one gang member invited a student to take part in his/her party, then the student recalled punishments that the gang members suffered in the jail, and their miserable destinies after they get out from there. S/he would refuse the gang member. Youngsters could not learn this from teachers in school or from their parents who are always teach them positive things about the society. So, movies and TV programs are beneficial to hamper youngsters do improper things.

Of course, movies and television indeed have some bad effects on certain young people, but the violence scenes in them are limited, so the causes of their misbehavings could not only be imputed to movies and television. Therefore, to exaggerate the nagetive effects and （To）diminish the positive ones are not fair.

kchszy061ban

来改你7.3号的作文啦~
7月3日Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

Nowadays, movies and televisions become ordinary to all families across the wrold. With the spreading of them, questions relate to them also rise becauuse some people find that these media have more negative effects on the way their children behave.（这句话不错 一句话讲清楚问题） After their children watch some really cool scenes in their mind, they would imitate actors' actions, some of these actions may dangerous to children themselves and soem may cause damage to ohters. However, other parents believe movies and television give their children different perspectives and expand their outlook. From my point of a student, I think movies and television are really helpful and help me learn much information which I can not obtain from school. Also, it is so joyful to watch some funny movies and television with my parents after one day's hard study.

It is obvious that movies and televison can help to broaden young people' horizon. Programs provided on the television are relating to various subjects, such as economy, politic, science, technology, sport, and so forth. These programs are up-to-date, easy to access, and widely available （喜欢这三个用词的并列）to young people through a TV set. I am a student who study （建议用过去时态）physics in university. One of my favourite program is（was） called "nature world". It talks about events happened in the nature world, like volcanic eruption, hurricane, global warming, and analyzes the reasons which cuause them(reason和cause重复了。。。。最近在看GMAT 所以对这种wordy特别敏感), the effects of these events to human society. By watching these programs, I learnt so many things that our professors are not mentioned in the classes. And my experiences are not rare, everyone who wants to know the mysteries of the nature can do this.

Moveover, watching movies and TV programs with one's family members helps develop strong relationships and make one feel a sense of belonging. It is important to have some common topics which all family members want to involve in and shaer their opinions. While, movies and TV programs provide the oppotunity to get together and chat with family members. When I was in high school which is far away from my parents, I could only come back to see my parents once a week. I clearly remember after dinner, I sat together with my parents, watching my favourite TV programs and talked with my farther about some occasions happened at school. The atmosphere at that time was so pleasant and harmony that I could never forget. （都用自身的example 很清楚很有同感）

On the contrary, in most of the movies, criminals are punished in the end. And this gives young people who watch these movies a signal that if they do the same thing, they will be punished too. Thus, watching these movies helps young people distingish whihc is benefitial and which is baneful. When they face the same situation, the information they gethered from the movies gives them the wisdom to choose the right side. Such as if one gang member invited a student to take part in his/her party, then the student recalled punishments that the gang members suffered in the jail, and their miserable destinies after they get out from there. S/he would refuse the gang member. Youngsters could not learn this from teachers in school or from their parents who are always teach them positive things about the society. So, movies and TV programs are beneficial to hamper youngsters do improper things.

Of course, movies and television indeed have some bad effects on certain young people, but the violence scenes in them are limited, so the causes of their misbehavings could not only be imputed to movies and television. Therefore, to exaggerate the nagetive effects and （To）diminish the positive ones are not fair.

-- by 会员 sailingqiong (2012/7/4 17:42:47)

童鞋你过誉了。  谢谢捏啊。   我自己的错误老多，你看angela改的，嘿嘿。 下次会写的仔细一点的。

kchszy061ban

7月4日Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past people eat more healthy food than what people have nowadays

Nowadays, people across the world become concern about their mental and physical health. An increasing number of people complain that present crops and ohter products of agriculture use too many pesticides and hormones, which may do harm to their healthy. People also worry about the use of fertilizers to raise crops. Thus, some of them claim it was better to live in the past, in which time there were no pesticides, hormones and fertilizers. However, they just ignore the fact that improvement of science and technology have already given modern people so many ways to ensure food safety.

To begain with, new crops which can provide both high quality and quantity per unit land have already been created by scientists. These new crops can help to ensure the sufficient supply of food to people. Take the hybrid rice in China as an example, the quality of this type of rice is as well as other rices which people like to eat, the yield of it can be six hundreds kilograms per mu. Its total yeild can provide enough food to about one half of the population in China. On the contrary, people in the past lacked this kind of knowledge, they only made use of crops which they could easily find in the natural world. The quality of those crops could not compare to today's new crops.

Moveover, compared with people who lived in the past, modern people have more selections of food and new ways to cook them. All kinds of fruits, vegetables, meats and cereals around the world is provided in Wal-Mart now. Consumers have the choice to buy apples from America or from local producers, they can read the instructions of these fruit to compare them in order to know which one is more healthier. The recipes of modern people are various, this helps them absorb complete nutrients to ensure their health. Also, new cooking utensils such as pressure cooker can kill most noxious bacterias in the food. This is directly contributed to the safety of food people eat today. While, these advantages were not available in the past.

Finally, new intruments which examine the quality of food have been invented, these facilities help scientists test the content of the food. By doing this, modern people will not choose food that is not heathy. For example, some heavy metal elements are toxic to people' heath, and certain kinds of chemical materials would endanger people' health. With the appearance of these new instruments, the contents of these toxic marterials in food can be examined before people eat it. In contrast, people in the past had no such instruments, they did not know some types of food they ate everyday contained harmful materials. Even after they felt ill, they did not realize the reason was the unhealthy food because the lack of instruments and related knowledge.

Of course, people in the past did not use hormones, pesticides and fertilizers to ensure their food grow healthily. They cultivated their crops and domestic animals in natural way which modern can no compare to. Their rivers and atmosphere were less pollutated than today's, the enviorment of them was so green and clean. However, this is only one factor to judge whether food is healthy or not. other factors may be more important. Therefore, based on what has been discussed above, modern people have more advantages to ensure their food safety than people lived in the past. So, we can draw the conclusion that modern people eat healthier food than those in the past.

chenglu9066

红色为修改，高亮为精华

In the reading text, the author talks abouht(about) reasons that (why)buzzging should be banned. While, the speaker in the lecture cites his personal experiences to argue that the claims in the reading text are indeed misleading and not correct. (总结的很到位诶~好)

First, the speaker says that the statement in the reading is not ture. He points out that companies only hire people who really use their products and believe these products are really good, otherwise, companies would not hire them. Such as the speaker used the phone service and he found it really useful,then, the company hired him as a paid buzzer. This is directly contradicted to its counterpart in the reading passage.

Second, according to the speaker, people even become more aware when someone talk about some products with them. They ask many questions about the price, how long the buzzer had use the products and so forth. They will not buy the product if the answers are not satisfactory. Thus, the second claim in the reading text is disputed.

Third, the speaker argues that the concern about buzzers would destory social relationship is stupid. Because only companies which have the ability to make good products will hire buzzers. Moreover, he says that if people use the phone service which he is now buzz, they would find it really helpful. So, the third claim in the reading text is totally unsounded.

总体流畅，听力中该有的细节都有了，建议加上阅读短文中对应的陈述，会更好些哦~

kchszy061ban

7月5日
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High school students should take a course on basic economics.

When it comes to the question of whether high stdents shold take a course on basic economics, different people hold different opinions. Some people think basic economics would benefits high school students ffor several reasons. While others believe that high school students have already so many courses to study, and hire new teachers means extra spending for high school, thus, these people do not agree with the plan to provide basic economics to high students. From my point of a student who also experienced high school life, and based on the experiences of others that I failiar with, I support the idea that high school students should take basic econoics coruse. The reasons are as follow.

To begain with, high school students need related knowledge in order to learn how to budget their money properly. Basic economics offers the knowledge about how to use money in a proper way, such as it talks about in which time of the day time the price of the vegetables will be the lowest according to demand and supply theory. In this way, students can save their money. Also, it can also help students expand this knowledge to their study, they may make a plan on their study. In the plan, students can make use of the time, they would spend time which they can learn more effectively to study even their classmates call them to play, while, when they fell tired, they will spend time to do exercises or other entertainments to relax themselves. By doing this, they also learn how to use their time properly. As we can see,
basic economics course is really helpful to high school students.

Moreover,  basic economics gives high students different perspective on their own life. The major coursed in high school include nature science, history, literature and so forth. All of these courses are not tightly connectting to their daily life as basic economics is. The knowledge in basic economics relates to different aspects of people' daily life. One example of this is that taxes. It expalns why the government need taxes, such as in order to support normal function of the government, provide salaries to government employees, offer finantial support to public projects. Then, it provides information about what types of taxes certain people should pay,while others they need not pay.  Learnning this can help high students understand the tax system.

Finally, basic economics is beneficial for students, it will encourage students to do some part time jobs in order to use the knowledge they learnt. When students do part time jobs, they contact with different people, learn how to deal with them and how to do their jobs well. These work experiences are important for their future work, also can influence their choices to chooses a major when they enroll university. I took a part time job in a book store when I was in high school. I read lots of books about history there, and this experience help me to get high score in history class. After I entered university, I decided to learn history as well. Besides, I could use the money I earned to buy something I wanted to. This helped me relieve economic burden on my parents partly.

Of course, learnning extra course on basic economics require time and energy for high students. To hire new teachers also increases school's expense. However, compared to the benefits which students receive from the course, it really worth to take basic economics. Based on what have been disscussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that it is necessary for high studetns to take basic economics.