以下是引用dollphin在2004-7-7 14:08:00的发言:Q34: Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.
- people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their(前后不可比,前面是people,后面是USA,也不应该用comparable to )
- people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the(从和后面一个分句的平行上看,我觉得D更好)
- fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their(一样前后不可比)
- the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the(前分句前后可比且从句之间非常平行)
E. the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the(显然把原一改变了)
想问一下
1.B中的at about the same rate会不会形容fatty food的歧义发生?
2.E之前说改变原义,但我觉得不会阿,请教大家排除E的原因
3.D除了被动外 还有其他的缺陷吗?
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