以下是引用薰衣紫草在2005-6-10 4:41:00的发言:那我就不客气真的拍了(不是NN), 反正手头有块冰砖. 1. , 分词做非限制修饰的比比皆是. 关键看他在句尾还是句中. 如果在句中, 那就是非限制修饰(OG258), 但要注意, 如果句中的非限制分词有一个句子跟在后面, 那就有歧义的, 因为搞不清是修饰后面的句子还是前面的名词. 所以这时候要用从句. 如果 ,分词在句尾, 那就99%修饰前面的动作. 2. "分词比从句简洁,从句比分词清晰,因此如果这个划线修饰部分前面出现有N个(N≥2)名词时,就应尽量用从句。 OG1" 这个观点我持保留意见, OG178就是一个反例. 我认为从句的先行词存在跳跃修饰的可能性, 虽然that的跳跃基本局限于a of b结构, 但分词不存在跳跃修饰, 大多直接修饰前面的名词. 所以分词与从句的使用并不取决于前面名词的多少, 而是修饰的可行性. 刚刚注意到上述关于句中的现在分词可能存在的修饰问题,因为以前从未听说过的这一语法现象,在下对比了几位nn的有关说法。只有在山峰的笔记给出了一个例子Og179,对此OG解释中说法是:D and E are confusingly worded because they begin with present participles (having and knowing) that appear at first to refer to the immediately preceding noun, newcomers, rather than to Native Americans. 从这句话来看OG认为现在分词是在修饰前面的紧前先行词(这是正常的gmat规则),这显然跟现在分词的逻辑主语native americans不一致,所以这里不能用现在分词。但这是否意味着从语法上现在分词还能够修饰其他句子成分呢?我觉得上述分析中排除现在分词的真实原因是现在分词修饰的成分和其逻辑主语不一致,而不是因为现在分词修饰对象存在歧义。og说的AT FIRST,LONGMAN的解释如下: at first:used to talk about the beginning of a situation, especially when it is different now At first, Gregory was shy and hardly spoke. I felt quite disappointed at first. OG的解释好像是在说分词开始是在修饰先行词,后来是在修饰其他成分。但我们可不可以这样理解og的意思呢:从语法上现在分词应该修饰先行词,但这里逻辑上却又要求它修饰句子主语而不是先行词呢?如果这种理解正确的话,从本题中我们不能‘非限制修饰(OG258), 但要注意, 如果句中的非限制分词有一个句子跟在后, 那就有歧义的, 因为搞不清是修饰后面的句子还是前面的名词’这一结论。不知紫草mm或其他NN还有没有其他例子能证明上述说法? 板砖、冰砖一并欢迎..... OG179. During the early years of European settlement on a continent that was viewed as “wilderness” by the newcomers, Native Americans, intimately knowing the ecology of the land, were a help in the rescuing of many Pilgrims and pioneers from hardship, or even death. (A) Native Americans, intimately knowing the ecology of the land, were a help in the rescuing of (B) Native Americans knew the ecology and the land intimately and this enabled them to help in the rescue of (C) Native Americans, with their intimate knowledge of the ecology of the land, helped to rescue (D) having intimate knowledge of the ecology of the land, Native Americans helped the rescue of(C) (E) knowing intimately the ecology of the land, Native Americans helped to rescue Choice A suffers from the wordy and indirect expression were a help in the rescuing of. B creates an awkward, redundant, fused sentence in which the first clause has to be repeated in the vague this of the second clause; furthermore, the comma required before and in larger compound sentences is omitted. D and E are confusingly worded because they begin with present participles (having and knowing) that appear at first to refer to the immediately preceding noun, newcomers, rather than to Native Americans. D also has the wordy and unidiomatic helped the rescue of. Clear, direct, and economical, choice C is best.
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