又一个语法考点的总结（现在分词伴随状语的正反向考法）

skyinseas

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jchen924

以下是引用skyinseas在2006-7-29 20:59:00的发言：

这道题是og11上的104题，og上选的是C,这是这么回事？那个nn出来看看

这题的正确答案是c，以前大全、xdf都有这道题，答案是错的。og11出来后，大全里也相应出现了几个错误答案，具体题号我忘了。呵呵，我也认为，gmat的要义在于有效表达，避免歧义，而不在于语法的牛角尖。看熟练了，就顺了

lez9664

怎莫以前的NN们的答案和OG11的总有不一样的，关键是以前的解释看起来还挺有道理，但是OG更权威。看样子还是得在OG上把功夫练到家，在到江湖上行走啊。

yinuoqianjin

Nuclear fusion is the force that powers the Sun, the stars, and hydrogen bombs, merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors.

(A) merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors

(B) merging the nuclei of atoms instead of splitting them apart, like nuclear reactors

(C) merging the nuclei of atoms rather than splitting them apart, as nuclear reactors do

(D) and merges the nuclei of atoms but does not split them apart, as is done in unclear reactors

(E) and merges the nuclei of atoms, unlike atomic reactors that split them apart

很明显，is这个动作和merge这个动作不可能是同时发生的，也不可能是前一个句子的整体导致后面动作的发生，所以使用merge就错了。大家可以注意到，ABC三个选项都在引诱你使用伴随状语，这就是ETS的险恶用心。所以答案必须在DE中筛选。

这个题目明确地说弄错了，OG11 104th 原题 答案是C

之所以不用 and merges 是因为这样会产生 that powers .... , and merges 的结构 从而产生歧义

文章本意是说 merge 的主语是Nuclear fusion

linda816

以下是引用yinuoqianjin在2006-8-21 23:34:00的发言：

Nuclear fusion is the force that powers the Sun, the stars, and hydrogen bombs, merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors.

(A) merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors

(B) merging the nuclei of atoms instead of splitting them apart, like nuclear reactors

(C) merging the nuclei of atoms rather than splitting them apart, as nuclear reactors do

(D) and merges the nuclei of atoms but does not split them apart, as is done in unclear reactors

(E) and merges the nuclei of atoms, unlike atomic reactors that split them apart

很明显，is这个动作和merge这个动作不可能是同时发生的，也不可能是前一个句子的整体导致后面动作的发生，所以使用merge就错了。大家可以注意到，ABC三个选项都在引诱你使用伴随状语，这就是ETS的险恶用心。所以答案必须在DE中筛选。

这个题目明确地说弄错了，OG11 104th 原题 答案是C

之所以不用 and merges 是因为这样会产生 that powers .... , and merges 的结构 从而产生歧义

文章本意是说 merge 的主语是Nuclear fusion

答案是C没错，但是我不认为会产生that powers...,and merges的歧义。 如果在and之前没有逗号，那么可能会造成powers和merges的并列，但是这里有了一个逗号之后，即使你想让这两个动词并列，也得用that powers..., and that merges。 这里的that不能省略。

yaomao

og11上说E错就是因为powers与merges平行了啊

Illogical and awkward
construction incorrectly makes
        merges
the
second verb of the restrictive
            clause and a separate action parallel to
        powers;

sebbo904

 

Nuclear fusion is the force that powers the Sun, the stars, and hydrogen bombs, merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors.

(A) merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors

(B) merging the nuclei of atoms instead of splitting them apart, like nuclear reactors

(C) merging the nuclei of atoms rather than splitting them apart, as nuclear reactors do

(D) and merges the nuclei of atoms but does not split them apart, as is done in unclear reactors

(E) and merges the nuclei of atoms, unlike atomic reactors that split them apart

这个题的中文意思就是说“核聚变是一种力量，这种力量能够给太阳，星星和氢弹提供动力，......”如果答案在DE中选择的话，下面的翻译就应该是“这种力量把原子核融合在一起而不是把他们分开....."这里就出现错误了，因为核聚变就是原子核融合在一起发生的，而不是核聚变促使原子核在一起。

所以这里merge应该用分词表伴随，来形容和解释核聚变。所以答案选C

我没用看到OG11关于这个题的解释，恳请NN指正

wz1

彻底糊涂了。。。。

我的OG11上的答案是C。。。 XDF的补充材料答案是E。。。这里有人说C有人说E。。。。

自己选的是C，同意5楼的看法，举个例子

Studying in ABC high school, she is a high school student.

应该是对的吧？

sunshinerab

以下是引用sebbo904在2006-10-11 10:15:00的发言：
 

Nuclear fusion is the force that powers the Sun, the stars, and hydrogen bombs, merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors.

(A) merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors

(B) merging the nuclei of atoms instead of splitting them apart, like nuclear reactors

(C) merging the nuclei of atoms rather than splitting them apart, as nuclear reactors do

(D) and merges the nuclei of atoms but does not split them apart, as is done in unclear reactors

(E) and merges the nuclei of atoms, unlike atomic reactors that split them apart

这个题的中文意思就是说“核聚变是一种力量，这种力量能够给太阳，星星和氢弹提供动力，......”如果答案在DE中选择的话，下面的翻译就应该是“这种力量把原子核融合在一起而不是把他们分开....."这里就出现错误了，因为核聚变就是原子核融合在一起发生的，而不是核聚变促使原子核在一起。

所以这里merge应该用分词表伴随，来形容和解释核聚变。所以答案选C

我没用看到OG11关于这个题的解释，恳请NN指正

根据白勇:-ing分词短语在句尾: 作伴随结果状语或者伴随动作状语;作伴随结果状语时没有逻辑主语,作伴随动作状语时逻辑主语等于主句的主语.从逻辑意义上,此题应作伴随结果状语. "核聚变是将原子融合而非分离"作为".核聚变由太阳,星星及氢弹的压力而形成的能量"的伴随结果.

bobo19790111

以下是引用dancingforum在2004-5-1 3:01:00的发言：

版主总结的真的很好， 但是我还是不太明白， 有点似懂非懂：

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------来一个实际中的例子，新东方补充教材新版本204题：

Nuclear fusion is the force that powers the Sun, the stars, and hydrogen bombs, merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors.

(A) merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors

(B) merging the nuclei of atoms instead of splitting them apart, like nuclear reactors

(C) merging the nuclei of atoms rather than splitting them apart, as nuclear reactors do

(D) and merges the nuclei of atoms but does not split them apart, as is done in unclear reactors

(E) and merges the nuclei of atoms, unlike atomic reactors that split them apart

很明显，is这个动作和merge这个动作不可能是同时发生的，也不可能是前一个句子的整体导致后面动作的发生，所以使用merge就错了。大家可以注意到，ABC三个选项都在引诱你使用伴随状语，这就是ETS的险恶用心。所以答案必须在DE中筛选。

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从语法点上看， 分词的主要功能就是做形容词修饰名词或代词，我不觉得应该把merging看成和 is 并列构成伴随状语(版主用来排除ABC的主要依据），这题为什么不可以 将 merging 看成是修饰主句的主语 fusion 呢， 如果我们把语序稍微调整一下， 变成：

Merging the .....,  nuclear fusion is a force that ......

把merging看成方式状语， 觉得有什么问题呢？

一直觉得分词做状语在GMAT里挺浑人的，但我手边没有语法书， 能不能请版主把分词的用法给来个详细的， 全面的总结.  谢谢了

另外， 这题到底是 的 D 还是 E 呀， 给我自己选， 我肯定象版主说的，掉坑里，选个 C 了， 呵呵

这道题目再og11-104种的答案是C不是E OR D

解释如下：

C rather than is a correct idiom for comparion in this sentence; as is followed by a clause with a subject, nuclear reactors, and a verb, do; the comparison is clear and complete.

D Illogical and awkward construction attempts to make merges the second verb of the restrictive clause paralled to powers and does not split; punctuation makes clear this separate action can not be the case;as  is done is awkard and wordy

E Illogical and awkward construction attempts to make merges the second verb of the restrictive clause paralled to powers and does not split; punctuation makes clear this separate action can not be the case;as  is done is awkard and wordy; comparision is awkardly drawn; switch from unclear to atomic is unexplained and unsupported

 本来看了lz的解释恍然开朗，在一看og的选向，彻底迷糊了。。。可是这可是og11版的解释和答案，应该不会有错吧。