天山 3-Q2

jishuiyu510

天哪!看了这么长的帖子,都没NN出来给个准信儿~

michellechang

期待大牛！

我觉得还是要以意思为重，如果逻辑意思不对，结构再好看也没用

支持E！！CD的主语都是 stinger，不能导致蜜蜂死亡，只有叮人的动作才能做result的主语

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-8-30 13:51:11编辑过]

peeeepy

支持E,原句的意思就是说the stinger stays at where it is asserted这个行为导致了死亡，只是语法表述出了问题，所以c将原句意思改了，当然错了

思谦

请确认呀，到底是C还是E？

我选C

wwwhahchn

逻辑永远是第一位的，选E

Avantasia

这题我现在选D，争来争去就是集中那么几个点上面：

1. D到底逻辑有没有逻辑意思错误？

我的理解是一点都没有，看一个OG题目：

The only way for growers to salvage frozen citrus is to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns.

(A)   to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns

(B)   if they are quickly processed into juice concen­trate before warmer weather returns to rot them

(C)   for them to be processed quickly into juice concentrate before the fruit rots when warmer weather returns

(D)   if the fruit is quickly processed into juice concen­trate before they rot when warmer weather returns

(E)    to have it quickly processed into juice concentrate before warmer weather returns and rots the fruit

For parallelism, the linking verb is should link two infinitives: The only way to salvage ... is to process. Choice A begins with an infinitive, but the plural pronouns them and they do not agree with the singular noun citrus. Choices B, C, and D do not begin with an infinitive, and all present pronoun errors: the plural pronouns cannot grammatically refer to citrus or fruit, nor can they refer to farmers without absurdity. The best choice, E, has parallel infinitives and uses fruit to refer unambiguously to citrus. E also expresses the cause-and-effect relationship between the return of warmer weather and the rotting of the fruit; A, C, and D merely describe these events as contemporaneous.

”and“在OG里面说明白了可以表示一种因果联系，大家可以先好好读读E，读三遍再读这题的D：The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing，and在里面是表示一种逻辑上面的因果关系，逻辑非常的通顺，不要割裂开前面的where it is inserted直接看后面，那样逻辑肯定不对，把选项看完整。

2. E为什么不对？

主要原因是罗嗦，能直接用动词result说的清清楚楚，用介宾结构我认为是不对的。

babypace

D里面, and results in the act of stinging causing 是不对的。sting又导致了the act of stinging？

fatlara

E.          The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and staying where it isinserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

主干是：The h’s stinger is barbed and staying

这里没有明显的标志要使用现在进行式is staying吧~~~~~~呵呵

而且，with the result怎么感觉都怪怪的说~

呵呵~~偶 选 C

maxine_c

看了前面的帖子，我想可能是每个人下载的天山第三套题中的E选项不同，导致大家有点误会

我下载的题中E选项是

E.          The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it isinserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

所以我选E，理由如下：

1、原题的意思是蜜蜂的刺倒勾并留在扎入的地方，这件事导致了后面的（刺人使得蜜蜂留下很大的创伤）

C的意思是蜜蜂刺本身导致了后面的事，不符合原意

2、C中的result in the fact that是一个罗嗦的表达，只需要说result in that即可

E中，with the result that的意思是“结果是, 因此, 从而”相当于连词，而且句意也符合原文

而很多人的E选项stays 变成了staying，所以他们选C

我认为在这两种不同的情况下，两队人都选择了optimal的答案

wennier

顶一下，我也选E,排除C也是因为逻辑原因。