天山 3-Q2

yulin115

I think I like E better

xiao_zhutou

同意E。C中的results in the fact that重覆罗嗦。

totolau

i prefer C

C中的 heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted这种修饰结构好像是ETS比较喜欢的。

另外，results in 比 with the result that 更简洁。

有一点我想问一下，D选项中的 "，and  results" 中and 与results只见是不是应该有代词啊？因为有个“，”？

jackieduan

", and" 后面似乎应该接句子

stillwater

E。The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it isinserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

我的题目是这样的,不是staying而是stays,

楼主是抄错了,还是这题有两个版本

Pudding

C中的results in the fact that重覆罗嗦。

Agree! It's redundancy...

anyname

以下是引用beautywawa在2004-12-18 10:35:00的发言：

天山 3-Q2 verbal-SC

As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.

A.         ….

B.          As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed staying where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

C.          The honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes

D.          The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing

E.           The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

我是選C,但我想問的是,中間從heavily開始算是插入句嗎?以及heavily與staying這樣算平衡嗎?

觉得E最好。

A. this 指代不清
B. 没有主句
C. 逻辑不通且awkward：The stinger results in...? 就像：His house, damaged in the earthquake, resulted in the fact that he had to live in a hotel. (lol, the wrong subject's blamed）
D. 逻辑不通（同C）且it指代歧义(bee or stinger?)
E.  with the result that比较wordy，如果是resulting that就完美了，但the best。

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-2-28 2:27:41编辑过]

tuzq

肯定选E了，stinger怎么自己会去cause呢

huawang

我觉得是D….

C中results in the fact that…明显不对

E中是什么东西with呢??觉得with在这里的用法很怪

zhbeaner

Q2:
As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A. As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this
results in the act of stinging causing
B. As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the
result that the act of stinging causes
C. The honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in
the fact that the act of stinging causes
D. The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results
in the act of stinging causing
E. The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the
result that the act of stinging causes

我的版本中是stays,　我觉的应该是Ｅ最好．