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羊咩咩yw

TO ~9.14给我改作文滴同学，实在不好意思哈，我今天有点事所以不能早点写完，我会在9点贴上来的，然后也会提前去给你改完作文的，实在不好意思哈~~

羊咩咩yw

9.14 独立

Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in the past?

With the development of education system, the idea that people are now easier to become educated than in the past has gained increasing support in recent years. People feel that they have more chances to receive professional educations nowadays than in the past. I totally agree with them.

First, with the progress of modern technology and science, a lot of alternative sources have been used in education, such as computer, television and the on-line curricula which provides people more chances to be educated. The on-line curricula can help people who hope to gain more knowledge increase their range of study. Besides, more and more television programs impart various types of knowledge. People can be educated at any time and in different locations. Take one famous television programs named Yi Zhan Dao Di as an example, people take part in this programs need to answer different kinds of questions about mathematics, history, language and culture ,etc, at the same time the audience can learn those knowledge form their answers, or they can use send messages to answer those questions. In this case, people nowadays are easier to become educated.

Second, with the increasing of income level, people nowadays can afford more self-study courses and trainings than before. They can learn practical skills and knowledge form these courses which,in the past, were only available in traditional schools. Take New-oriental English School as an example, it provide various class to enroll students at different ages. People can get professional instructions and assistances in there when they are learning English. In contrast, hardly can people find a place to learn English.

Finally, the government has generate more education projects to ensure all the citizens have chances to become educated. Besides, in some underdevelopment areas, primary schools, middles, high schools and even universities have been build to meet the requirements of people's education demanding, which are never happened in the past.

To sum up, thanks for the development of our society to provide us a positive studying environment which filled with advanced technology and teaching methods. Therefore, it is safe to concluded that people now are definitely easier to become educated than in the past.

E月羽

9月14

With the development of education system, the idea that people are now easier to become(没有这种用法get ) educated than in the past has gained increasing support in recent years. People feel that they have more chances to receive professional educations nowadays than in the past. （和上句话重复）I totally agree with them.

First, with the progress of modern technology and science, a lot of alternative（可替代的？available） sources have been used in education, such as computer, television and the on-line curricula which provides people more chances to be educated. The on-line curricula can help people who hope to gain more knowledge increase their range of study. Besides, more and more television programs impart various types of knowledge. People can be educated at any time and in different locations. Take one famous television programs named Yi Zhan Dao Di （你确定它的外文名是这个？）as an example, people take part in this programs need to answer different kinds of questions about mathematics, history, language and culture ,etc, at the same time the audience can learn those knowledge form（from） their answers, or they can use send messages to answer those questions. In this case, people nowadays are easier to become educated.

Second, with the increasing of income level, people nowadays can afford more self-study courses and trainings than before. They can learn(acquired) practical skills and knowledge form(from) these courses which,in the past, were only available in traditional schools. Take New-oriental English School as an example, it provide various class to enroll students at different ages. People can get professional instructions and assistances(单数) in there when they are learning English. In contrast, hardly can people find a place to learn English. ()

Finally, the government has generate(generated) more education projects to ensure all the citizens have chances to become educated. Besides, in some under development areas, primary schools, middles, high schools and even universities have been build to meet the requirements of people's education demanding, which are never happened in the past.

To sum up, thanks for the development of our society to provide us a positive studying environment which filled with advanced technology and teaching methods. Therefore, it is safe to concluded(conclud) that people now are definitely easier to become educated than in the past.

作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；全文结构较为严谨；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。