一战GMAT 760 (Q51 V42) 倾情回馈CD [2012-07-19] 三楼更新Quant & AWA

babybearmm

非常感谢各位的关注！！更新CR了

smile5815

学不下去了就过来转转~滚去学习去！

corneliaflower

又来顶BABY姐的贴了。最爱CR了，哈哈。

klllun

谢谢baby姐，我正在尝试CR用analogy的方法，但是自己写出来的东西似乎都见不得人一样啊，文笔很烂。。。baby姐帮忙看看不啊~提一点改进意见哦 谢谢了
原文：In an attempt to reduce the crime rate, the governor is getting tough on criminals and making prison conditions harsher.  art of this effort has been to deny inmates the access they formerly had to college-level courses.  However, this action is clearly counter to the governor’s ultimate goal, since after being released form prison, inmates who had taken such courses committed far fewer crimes overall than other inmates.

自己YY的：In the world, people prefer the slim builds. Thus, a bulk of guys is trying to lose weight by keep their diet stringently. However, according to the research by the health care commitment, the decreased number of non-keep diet people is much higher than that of keeping diet one. This result is clearly counter the ultimate goal of keeping fit.

klllun

baby姐，推荐的 Foundations of GMAT Verbal  这本书是不是没有pdf的啊？我在CD，google上面也没有搜到，只有manhattan的试读19页的。。。

babybearmm

谢谢baby姐，我正在尝试CR用analogy的方法，但是自己写出来的东西似乎都见不得人一样啊，文笔很烂。。。baby姐帮忙看看不啊~提一点改进意见哦 谢谢了
原文：In an attempt to reduce the crime rate, the governor is getting tough on criminals and making prison conditions harsher.  art of this effort has been to deny inmates the access they formerly had to college-level courses.  However, this action is clearly counter to the governor’s ultimate goal, since after being released form prison, inmates who had taken such courses committed far fewer crimes overall than other inmates.

自己YY的：In the world, people prefer the slim builds. Thus, a bulk of guys is trying to lose weight by keep their diet stringently. However, according to the research by the health care commitment, the decreased number of non-keep diet people is much higher than that of keeping diet one. This result is clearly counter the ultimate goal of keeping fit.

-- by 会员 klllun (2012/7/27 11:38:03)

Great try! I think the analogy is good, although I do not get this "the decreased number of non-keep diet people is much higher than that of keeping diet one. "
Do you mean: after x months, people who had dieted were less successful in losing weight than those who had not dieted.

babybearmm

这书我用的纸板的....

baby姐，推荐的 Foundations of GMAT Verbal  这本书是不是没有pdf的啊？我在CD，google上面也没有搜到，只有manhattan的试读19页的。。。

-- by 会员 klllun (2012/7/27 11:45:38)

klllun

谢谢baby姐，我正在尝试CR用analogy的方法，但是自己写出来的东西似乎都见不得人一样啊，文笔很烂。。。baby姐帮忙看看不啊~提一点改进意见哦 谢谢了
原文：In an attempt to reduce the crime rate, the governor is getting tough on criminals and making prison conditions harsher.  art of this effort has been to deny inmates the access they formerly had to college-level courses.  However, this action is clearly counter to the governor’s ultimate goal, since after being released form prison, inmates who had taken such courses committed far fewer crimes overall than other inmates.

自己YY的：In the world, people prefer the slim builds. Thus, a bulk of guys is trying to lose weight by keep their diet stringently. However, according to the research by the health care commitment, the decreased number of non-keep diet people is much higher than that of keeping diet one. This result is clearly counter the ultimate goal of keeping fit.

-- by 会员 klllun (2012/7/27 11:38:03)

Great try! I think the analogy is good, although I do not get this "the decreased number of non-keep diet people is much higher than that of keeping diet one. "
Do you mean: after x months, people who had dieted were less successful in losing weight than those who had not dieted.

-- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/7/27 17:04:58)

嗯嗯，就是这个意思啊~baby姐这个方法好神奇呀，很欢乐呀~真赞！但是有些RC真的提不出来逻辑的链条，想YY都找不到方向的。
请问姐姐的，所有的analogy之前是不是都要找出premise，写出逻辑链条，这样的思路再自个儿YY啊？
哦，原来书还没有PDF化，只有去找找纸板滴~

晨依Jacqueline

又来看连载了~~baby姐姐的心经真是宝库啊！
看到很多和其他心经不同的地方和内容！！！！大爱
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emiliana

楼主好牛！膜拜！