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7月16日     Do you agree or disagree, the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/ her personality or charactor.

When you come across a road and see a man dressed in sport clothes, you must think that the man is interested in sports. Also, some people prefer to wear deep dark clothes, others may love to buy light color clothes. According to some scientists, color can reflect one person's charactor to some extent. So, it is obvious that the way a person dressed can really indicate his/her personality. Let me figure it out as follows.

To begin with, we can see from our friends, family members, relatives that their clothes are good indication of their personality. We can find that those who are career-oriented and enjoy working often wear formal clothes. At the same time, people who have artistic disposition often wear lossely and funky clothes. For example, my father is a teacher in a primary school. He loves his work and devotes most of time to prepare for the class, answer students' questions and so forth. So much does he love his work, he does not want to make his students feel strange to wear new clothes. So, he buys two suits of formal clothes which are totally the same to reduch his students' unconfortable feelings of his clothes. When you see my father pass by in the road, you can simplly find that he is a teacher.

Moreover, it is natural to wear clothes that are suitable to one's environment. If you always see one person often wears football team clothes, you can make a conclusion that this person like playing football. I like playing football with my classmates every weekend. We wear clothes which are similar to the famour football players. Doing this makes us feel that we are playing with them in the playground. In fact, in my spare time, I wear my football team clothes too. It makes me feel a great sense of owe. Also it is a show off of my favorite sports.

Finally, we can simplly distingish police officers, soliders, nurses and students because the clothes they weared are different. A polichman is required to wear formal clothes at work. So, we can easily know a policeman is coming from a long distance. The clothes he/she weared indicate that he/she is a police officer. As you can see, one main character of a police officer is his/her clothes.

Of course, personality or character is complex and may change as people grow older or something else happened in their life. But no one can deny the fact that the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/her personality or character.

kchszy061ban

TPO 7
The author of the reading text talks about saveral reasons that American wood producers will not introduce ecocertification. While, the professor in the lecture does not agree with the author, and says that wood companies in the United States will eventually accept ecocertification.

First, contrary to what is stated in the reading passage that American consumers do not trust in advertising. The professor argures that consumers in the U.S usually distingish claims made by companies for their own products and claims made by independent agencies. They react favorablly to claims from independent organization with international trustworthyness. Thus, the first reason in the reading text is unsounded.

Second, the professor explains that consumers in the U.S care about the price only when the difference of price between products is too huge. If the difference is not so much, like less than 5%. Consumers will consider other factors rather than price. Also, American consumers really value environmently friendly products like the certified wood. Therefore, the second reason in the passage is reputed.

Third, the professor points out that in contrast to what is mentioned in the reading text, American companies will receive this certification. The reason is that wood companies need to compete with foreign companies who have already adopted this new practice. Otherwise, foreign companies' certified wood products will crowed in American market since consumers in the U.S are interested in these products. So, the last reason in the reading text is also unconvincing., according to the professor.

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The author of the reading text talks about saveral reasons that American wood producers will not introduce（用词不当，应为： work hard for，词义需要明确） ecocertification. While, the professor in the lecture does not agree with the author, and says that wood companies in the United States will eventually accept ecocertification.

First, contrary to what is stated in the reading passage that American consumers do not trust in advertising. The(注意细节，应为：，the) professor argures（错别字！！！！！！！）that consumers in the U.S usually distingish（错别字！！！！！！！）claims made by companies for their own products and claims made by independent agencies. They react favorablly（错别字！！！！！！！） to claims from independent organization with international trustworthyness（错别字！！！！！！！）. Thus, the first reason in the reading text is unsounded.观点明确，无信息缺失，语句通顺

Second, the professor explains that consumers in the U.S care about the price only when the difference of price between products is too huge. If the difference is not so much, like less than 5%. Consumers will consider other factors rather than price. Also, American consumers really value environmently（错别字！！！！！！！） friendly products like the certified wood. Therefore, the second reason in the passage is reputed.

Third, the professor points out that in contrast to what is mentioned in the reading text, American companies will receive（应为 adopt）this certification. The reason is that wood companies need to compete with foreign companies who have already adopted this new practice. Otherwise, foreign companies' certified wood products will crowed in American market since consumers in the U.S are interested in these products. So, the last reason in the reading text is also unconvincing, according to the professor.



语句通顺，无信息缺失！很好很好！只是，错别字啊kch~ 我记得上回好像改过你的独立嗫~也是这样。。。不过这个综合的错别字只有六个，比之前的独立少了十个！！

kchszy061ban

7月17日
Do you agree or disagree,the most important investment for a company is to spend money to improve the work skills of its employess

Nowadays, more and more companies relize the importance of finding the best methods to improve their profits as well as cut costs. There are many efficient and reasonalbe ways can be used to obtain their goal. For instance, it may be beneficial and also helpful for these companies spending money to update their equipments, to cultivitate their future labor forces in a university, or to improve the work skills of their employees. Everyone knows that a factory can not maintain its normal function without all kinds of skilled workers. Although the advanced technologies today help some companies finish part of their work by robots, employees are still required to monitor or repair these facilities. Therefore, spending money to improve the work skills of its employees is one basic option for companies.

To begin with, the main reason to improve worker's skills in a company is that it can help to improve their work efficiency. Workers become familiar with every process of their work, they also can learn ways about how to do better in their work and how to save time after they are trained. By doing these, they will shortcut the time they spend on their daily work. That is to say, in the same amount time compared to the day before the trainning, they can produce more products. Meanwhile, when they become familiar with the processes, they will make fewer mistakes. This also contributes to improve the work efficiency. Therefore, by improving worker's skills, companies can produce more products with high quality. So, it is really helpful for companies improving their employees' work skills.

Moreover, companies can make more profits by improving their worker's skills. As what has been stated in the second paragraph, more products means more money for the comopany. At the same time, if the workers in the sale department are well enough to persuade more consumers to buy their products, these products will bring cash to the company. While, one improtant way to help the sale workers is to improve their work skills. Thus it is very important for a company to invest money on this.

Finally, less accidents during work hour will happen aften workers have been trained by professional experts. Some special part of the producing process need workers pay more attention to, otherwise they will have unexpected accidents. For example, workers may hurt themselves if they do not know how to use a new machine which help them cut steel. If they do something wrong during their work hour, the result is very dangerous. However, if companies hire experienced experts to train their workers and inform them how to finish employees' work step by step carefully and safely, the damages can be reduced.

Of course, one risk of improving the worker's skills is that they may choose another company for highe salary or promotion. However, this risk can be avoid. Such as a contract between the workers and the company can be made to ensure the worker work in the company for certain years if they want to be trained by the company. Therefore, compared with the benefits companies gain from improving their employees’ skills, the disadvantages are not so many. So, improving the work skills of the worker is the important and essential step for companies.

包子不包子

7月16日 Do you agree or disagree, the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/ her personality or charactor.

When you come across a road and see a man dressed in sport clothes, you must think that the man is interested in sports. Also, some people prefer to wear deep dark clothes, others may love to buy light color clothes. According to some scientists, color can reflect one person's charactor to some extent. So, it is obvious that the way a person dressed can really indicate his/her personality. Let me figure it out as follows.

To begin with, we can see from our friends, family members, relatives that their clothes are good indication of their personality. We can find that those who are career-oriented and enjoy working often wear formal clothes. At the same time, people who have artistic disposition often wear lossely and funky clothes. For example, my father is a teacher in a primary school. He loves his work and devotes most of time to prepare for the class, answer students' questions and so forth. So much does he love his work, he does not want to make his students feel strange to wear new clothes. So, he buys two suits of formal clothes which are totally the same to reduch his students' unconfortable feelings of his clothes. When you see my father pass by in the road, you can simplly find that he is a teacher应该联系着装和性格的麽 怎么联系到职业了

Moreover, it is natural to wear clothes that are suitable to one's environment. If you always see one person often wears football team clothes, you can make a conclusion that this person like playing football. I like playing football with my classmates every weekend. We wear clothes which are similar to the famour football players. Doing this makes us feel that we are playing with them in the playground. In fact, in my spare time, I wear my football team clothes too. It makes me feel a great sense of owe. Also it is a show off of my favorite sports.

Finally, we can simplly distingish police officers, soliders, nurses and students because the clothes they weared are different. A polichman is required to wear formal clothes at work. So, we can easily know a policeman is coming from a long distance. The clothes he/she weared indicate that he/she is a police officer. As you can see, one main character of a police officer is his/her clothes.

Of course, personality or character is complex and may change as people grow older or something else happened in their life. But no one can deny the fact that the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/her personality or character.

拼写错误有点多了
还有怎么感觉跑题了呢 再看看？

kchszy061ban

7月16日 Do you agree or disagree, the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/ her personality or charactor.

When you come across a road and see a man dressed in sport clothes, you must think that the man is interested in sports. Also, some people prefer to wear deep dark clothes, others may love to buy light color clothes. According to some scientists, color can reflect one person's charactor to some extent. So, it is obvious that the way a person dressed can really indicate his/her personality. Let me figure it out as follows.

To begin with, we can see from our friends, family members, relatives that their clothes are good indication of their personality. We can find that those who are career-oriented and enjoy working often wear formal clothes. At the same time, people who have artistic disposition often wear lossely and funky clothes. For example, my father is a teacher in a primary school. He loves his work and devotes most of time to prepare for the class, answer students' questions and so forth. So much does he love his work, he does not want to make his students feel strange to wear new clothes. So, he buys two suits of formal clothes which are totally the same to reduch his students' unconfortable feelings of his clothes. When you see my father pass by in the road, you can simplly find that he is a teacher应该联系着装和性格的麽 怎么联系到职业了

Moreover, it is natural to wear clothes that are suitable to one's environment. If you always see one person often wears football team clothes, you can make a conclusion that this person like playing football. I like playing football with my classmates every weekend. We wear clothes which are similar to the famour football players. Doing this makes us feel that we are playing with them in the playground. In fact, in my spare time, I wear my football team clothes too. It makes me feel a great sense of owe. Also it is a show off of my favorite sports.

Finally, we can simplly distingish police officers, soliders, nurses and students because the clothes they weared are different. A polichman is required to wear formal clothes at work. So, we can easily know a policeman is coming from a long distance. The clothes he/she weared indicate that he/she is a police officer. As you can see, one main character of a police officer is his/her clothes.

Of course, personality or character is complex and may change as people grow older or something else happened in their life. But no one can deny the fact that the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/her personality or character.

拼写错误有点多了
还有怎么感觉跑题了呢 再看看？

-- by 会员 包子不包子 (2012/7/18 6:38:14)

感觉有点，我把那个职业改成性格就好呗？

diyangyang

Do you agree or disagree, the most important investment for a company is to spend money to improve the work skills of its employees

Nowadays, more and more companies relize(realize) the importance of finding the best methods to improve their profits as well as cut costs. There are many efficient and reasonalbe(reasonable) ways can be used to obtain their goal. For instance, it may be beneficial and also(also可以不用吧~) helpful for these companies spending(spend 的用法应该是加spend money on sth.) money to update their equipments, to cultivitate(cultivate) their future labor forces in a university, or to improve the work skills of their employees.(排比句很好呢) Everyone knows that a factory can not maintain its normal function without all kinds of skilled workers. Although the advanced technologies today help some companies finish part of their work by robots, employees are still required to monitor or repair these facilities. Therefore, spending money to improve the work skills of its employees is one basic option for companies.

To begin with, the main reason to improve worker's skills in a company is that it can help to improve their work efficiency. Workers become familiar with every process of their work, they also can learn ways about how to do better in their work and how to save time after they are trained. By doing these, they will shortcut the time they spend on their daily work. That is to say, in the same amount of time compared to(with) the days before the training(training), they can produce more products. Meanwhile, when they become familiar with the processes, they will make fewer mistakes. This also contributes to improve the work efficiency. Therefore, by improving worker's skills, companies can produce more products with high quality. So, it is really helpful for companies improving their employees' work skills.

Moreover, companies can make more profits by improving their worker's skills. As what has been stated in the second paragraph, more products means(mean) more money for the company(company). At the same time, if the workers in the sale department are well enough(be good at好不好啊我觉得这里有一点儿别扭) to persuade more consumers to buy their products, these products will bring cash to the company. While, one important(important) way to help the sale workers is to improve their work skills. Thus it is very important for a company to invest money on this.

Finally, less accidents during work hour will happen aften(after) workers have been trained(being trained) by professional experts. Some special part(parts) of the producing process need workers pay more attention to, otherwise they will have unexpected accidents(unexpected accidents may occur). For example, workers may hurt themselves if they do not know how to use a new machine which help(helps) them cut steel. If they do something wrong during their work hour, the result is very dangerous. However, if companies hire experienced experts to train their workers and inform them how to finish employees' work step by step carefully and safely, the damages can be reduced.

Of course, one risk of improving the worker's skills is that they may choose another company for highe(higher) salary or promotion. However, this risk can be avoid(avoided). Such as a contract between the workers and the company can be made to ensure that the worker (workers) should work in the company for certain years if they want to be trained by the company. Therefore, compared with the benefits companies gain from improving their employees’ skills, the disadvantages are not so many(serious, 或者改成can be ignored). So, improving the work skills of the worker is the important and essential step for companies.

连词用的很好呢起承转合安排很合理例子举得也很好少量拼写错误

kchszy061ban

7月18日
Do you agree or disagree,because the world is changing so quickly,people now are less happy and less satisfied than people in the past

When it comes to the question of in which time do people feel more happy and satisfied, different people hold various opinions. Some of them think because of everything around us changes so rapidly, people nowadays feel unpleasant and less satisfied. While others are on the opposite position. They appreciate the quickly changes in modern society, and claim changes make them enjoy their life happily. Personally, from my point of view of a student, I believe the rapid changes are beneficial for present people and make modern people feel more happy and satisfied than people in the past. My reasons are as follows.

To begin with, the rapid changes in modern society give present people more entertainments to take part in and relax themselves. One obvious quick change of this world is the technologies. Especially the update of cell phones. People can use cell phones to communicate with their family members in order to share successes in their work places or in study. They also can use mobile phones to organize with their friends to play games such as football or basketball together so as to relax themselves. Moreover, people can even run their business by using a cell phone. After successes of their business, they fell satified to share their progreees and work with their family and friends.

Moreover, the quichly changing world gives present people more opportuities to chase their dreams and fulfill their objects. All of these things could have the effect to make modern people feel happy and satisfied. For example, one of my primary classmates and also my good friends could not enter universities because of his performences at school. But he choosed to learn courses on-line, this type of education required less of his score on tests. Actually, he studyed very hard everyday, and did all of the assignments on time according to the requirement of the lectuer. Finally, he got a bachelor's degree in science and started to work at a world company. On the contrary, if he lived in the past before the computers were invented, he could not do all this and had to stay at home to help his parents work in the fields.

Finally, the rapidly changing world also help modern travel fast to every parts of the world, this can help people feel happy and satisfied. Such as when they want to go to other places, they can get there quickly. For example, when my parents want to see me, they only need to by two tickets of train or plane. In contrast, people in the past needed to spend saveral days or even months on their way if they wanted to see their children who lived far away from them.

Of course, some people may argue that the rapid changes in modern society make some people have difficulties to adapt to its pace. And this make them feel unhappy and less satisfied. While people in the past had no such problems. However, based on what I have discussed above, I can safely draw the conclution that people live in modern society are more happy and satified than people in the past.

diyangyang

咩~羊羊没找到kch的综合写作捏~是不是贴在别的地方咯啊~

kchszy061ban

咩~羊羊没找到kch的综合写作捏~是不是贴在别的地方咯啊~

-- by 会员 diyangyang (2012/7/19 0:05:00)

我偷懒了，今天一块改下呗。 yangyang亲。 我下午写额。 中午洗衣服去。夏天真烦，洗衣服就是一件烦心事。