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5月10日 独立写作 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important investment for a big company is to improve the efficiency and proficiency of its employees.
In today's economy, a big company must take measures to put a large amount of investment in order to stand out of in the severe(感觉ferice恰当一点) competition and then creates a lot of profits. Hence, it is of great significance to invest on improving the efficiency as well as the proficiency of its stuff. My reasons are threefold.
Primarily, a rise in employee's working ability is of great help(觉得这个表达不对,of great use?) to improving improve the service of the company. I've heard of a company, Haidilao, which is well known in China for its perfect service and advanced concept of management. As the CEO of Haidilao claims, they invest a great deal of money to educatingeducate their employees for the purpose of improving their working efficiency and providing walfare(welfare) to family members of their employees(直接to their family members好啦). In this way, not only aredo the employees are willing to work with energeticly(energetic), but their family members are also satisfied with the company and encourage them to work more efficiently for such a considerate company.
Subsequently, as the quality of stuff is an essential element of a big enterprise, it has responsiblility(responsibility) to maximum the quality as well as skills of its stuff. In some special fields of industry, employees are always required to be well-educated and skilled to work with hi-tech machines and devices. For example, the Foxconn company, intensively invests on the training of its employees. Once the working efficiency and proficiency of its employees have increased, they may catch up with the latest technique and manage to operate the advanced machines. As a result, the employees created an incrediable(incredible) profit for the company.
Plus, only by improving the working ability and efficiency of the employees can they make fewer mistakes and create more profits to the company. From an aspect of investment and rewards, a better trained employee will devote himself to a larger extent and then cause lessfewer troubles to the company, leading to a tremendous raise in the profit of the company. In China, before the year of reforming and opening up, the owners of companies didn't attach any importance to providing provide extra opportunities to training train their employees and the growth of those companies were harder(slow) because of the low quality of the products and the inefficiency of their workers.
In summary, due to the above-mentioned reasons, we could safely arrive at a conclusion that the most crucial investment for an enterprise is to increase the employees' working efficiency and proficiency.
conclusion:晨依的表达和用词都很棒!结构很清晰,句子很流畅! 一定一定一定注意小错误,像不定式,单复数,这样扣分太不值了! 512加油! |
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