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[SC总结] 再问OG164(大全714)(新增ETS官方回复)

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61#
发表于 2004-6-8 03:23:00 | 只看该作者

我们从语法手段开始:

V119.

Executives and federal officials say that the use of crack and cocaine is growing rapidly among work­ers, significantly compounding the effects of drug and alcohol abuse, which already cost busi­ness more than $100 billion a year.

核心词指代ETS认为此题的which指代the effects,毫无疑问,cost这个动词表明的指代对象为复数,非effects莫数。

X178.

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

就近词指代allow决定了复数指代,但是从逻辑上(也即我们第二步要提到的)不可能是criminals,所以只能是sentences.

V253.

Analysts blamed May's sluggish retail sales on unexciting merchandise as well as the weather, which was colder and wetter than usual in some regions, slowing sales of barbecue grills and lawn furniture.

就近词指代was决定单数指代,逻辑上决定了指代weather而不可能是merchandise

OG补充5

The use of gravity waves, which do not interact with matter in the way electromagnetic waves do,

就近词指代do决定复数指代,指代waves

62#
发表于 2004-6-8 03:24:00 | 只看该作者

第二步,我们看逻辑手段:


V114.



From the bark of the paper birch tree the Menomini crafted a canoe about twenty feet long and two feet wide, with small ribs and rails of cedar, which could carry four persons or …



OG的解释:Choice E, the best answer, states that although the canoe could transport cargo of considerable weight, it was light: a canoe . . . which could carry . . . yet was . . . light....


核心词指代-这题个人认为指代寻找比较难,因为指代对象和指代词之间距离很远,但是,could carry的可能是ribs and rails of cedarcedar么?显然,从逻辑的角度,a canoe更合适,而且,从语法的角度,a canoe后一个about介词短语(说明性)和一个with介词短语没有改变核心词地位,所以,修饰核心词在语法上也至少是可行的。






233解释



Both D and E fail to use and to introduce the last item in the list, which is sleeping in these constructions.



Recently implemented "shift-work equations" based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, sleeping on the job, (D)lowered fatigue among shift workers, and raised production efficiency in various industries.



核心词指代which从逻辑上不可能指代list



V164.



The commission proposed that funding for development of the park, which could be open to the public early next year, be obtained through a local bond issue.



就近词指代-此题,ETS给出了明确的逻辑指代思路






X253.



Analysts blamed May's sluggish retail sales on unexciting merchandise as well as the weather, colder and wetter than was usual in some regions, which slowed sales of barbecue grills and lawn furniture.(参35



the referent of which is not clear because regions, not weather, is the nearest noun.



就近词指代ETS认为逻辑上应该指代weather而不是regions






XB11



The growth of the railroads led to the abolition of local times, which was determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and differing from city to city, and to the establishment of regional times.



was is incorrect; the verb must be were to agree with times



就近词指代-此题,ETS给出了明确的逻辑指代思路,认为was应该被改为were,指代local times




[此贴子已经被作者于2004-6-8 4:43:38编辑过]
63#
发表于 2004-6-8 03:25:00 | 只看该作者

第三步,其他手段


通过上述例子,我们可以发现,从语法和逻辑的角度可以帮助我们解决一些指代的问题,但是好像还不够。比如OG164:



164. The commission proposed that funding for the park's development, which could be open to the public early next year, is obtained through a local bond issue.




(B)that funding for development of the park, which could be open to the public early next year, be



(E)development funding for the park, which could be open to the public early next year, is to be



Choice B is best. Choice A attaches the relative clause which could be open ... to the noun development, when, in fact, it is the park that could be open. Choice C omits that, the object of proposed that is needed to introduce the clause describing the proposal. C also uses to be unidiomatically where be is correct: the commission proposed [that] funding ... to be obtained is wrong. Choice D incorrectly uses perhaps open to the public ... to modify development; the phrase should modify park. Choice E, which seriously distorts meaning, says that the commission proposed development funding and that such funding could be open to the public ....





在查找了一些资料后,我发现,当which的潜在指代对象是一个独立的主语结构或独立的宾语结构时,且其指代对象的修饰成分比较简单(这点,好像tianwan也有指出),那么定语侧重于指代核心名词(在没有语法和逻辑问题的前提下)。



(所谓独立结构,就是其在句中不是由其他从句引导出来的。比如:A do BA/B如果都是名词结构的话,则他们都是独立结构;而A do that B … B是由宾语从句引导出来的名词,我就认为B不是独立结构)






比如:OG164Esb proposed + development funding for the park,红色部分就是一个独立的宾语结构,核心词是funding






再比如:X50.





As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would deemed legally blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500.

Its rudimentary sense of vision 就是一个独立的主语结构。










再比如:V114.





From the bark of the paper birch tree the Menomini crafted a canoe about twenty feet long and two feet wide, with small ribs and rails of cedar, which could carry four persons or …



a canoe作为修饰对象,也是一个独立的宾语结构。






再比如:X229.




…many others in the film industry, however, contend that the technique degrades major works of art, which they liken to putting lipstick on a Greek statue.





Major works of art 也是一个独立的宾语结构(不过其存在于宾语从句中)






再比如:233解释



Both D and E fail to use and to introduce the last item in the list, which is sleeping in these constructions.



虽然从逻辑上我们可以判断,但是item也同时是一个独立的宾语结构。






反之,我们看下面的例题:



X38.





Scientists have observed large concentrations of heavy-metal deposits in the upper twenty centimeters of Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there.



核心名词是concentrations,而且,其也是一个独立的宾语结构,但是concentrations后有of/in/of三个表示不同复数成分的介词短语修饰,which的指代就倾向于就近名词。



再比如:V164.





The commission proposed that funding for development of the park, which could be open to the public early next year, be obtained through a local bond issue.





Funding在成分上虽然是核心名词,但是,他是由宾语从句引导出来的名词,且funding后有for/of两个介词修饰,所以,从句倾向就近修饰。



再比如:


X164. The commission proposed that funding for the park's development, which could be open to the public early next year, is obtained through a local bond issue.
虽然funding后只有for一个介词修饰,funding在成分上虽然是核心名词,但是,他是由宾语从句引导出来的名词,所以,从句倾向就近修饰。



[此贴子已经被作者于2004-6-8 8:55:33编辑过]
64#
发表于 2004-6-8 03:26:00 | 只看该作者

总结

首先,用语法和逻辑思路排除选项,若不行,用修饰名词的独立性确定答案。

以上为个人总结,偏颇之处在所难免,希望大家给予指正。

另:感谢vincent0330对164不懈的质疑,也希望大家能早日得到ETS官方的标准解释。

65#
 楼主| 发表于 2004-6-8 03:37:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢stoneren精采的分析....

PS: 114那题有点奇怪, 老哥你看看搭配的OG解释.....

66#
发表于 2004-6-8 03:43:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用vincent0330在2004-6-8 3:37:00的发言:

谢谢stoneren精采的分析....


PS: 114那题有点奇怪, 老哥你看看搭配的OG解释.....


我是这样思考的:首先,从语法上which可以修饰a canoe/small ribs/rails of cedar或small ribs and rails of cedar;其次,从逻辑上分析,a canoe作为修饰对象比较合理;第三步,我用名词的独立性来证明我的判断。

67#
 楼主| 发表于 2004-6-8 03:50:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用stoneren在2004-6-8 3:43:00的发言:


我是这样思考的:首先,从语法上which可以修饰a canoe/small ribs/rails of cedar或small ribs and rails of cedar;其次,从逻辑上分析,a canoe作为修饰对象比较合理;第三步,我用名词的独立性来证明我的判断。



呵呵....那就是说你用其他OG的解释来解释canon 那题.....cc....我误会你了......


我突然想到:


假如句子是:


The commission proposed funding for the development of the park, which........


这里的which按你的说法就是指代funding吗?(假如不管后面的句子)

68#
发表于 2004-6-8 04:17:00 | 只看该作者

学习ing。狗狗,你把which后面的都省了,stoneren的逻辑那步的判断怎么做?

69#
发表于 2004-6-8 04:17:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用vincent0330在2004-6-8 3:50:00的发言:



呵呵....那就是说你用其他OG的解释来解释canon 那题.....cc....我误会你了......


我突然想到:


假如句子是:


The commission proposed funding for the development of the park, which........


这里的which按你的说法就是指代funding吗?(假如不管后面的句子)



我认为这里的which应该是指代funding
70#
发表于 2004-6-8 04:22:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用我爱宝宝在2004-6-8 4:17:00的发言:

学习ing。狗狗,你把which后面的都省了,stoneren的逻辑那步的判断怎么做?


vincent0330的意思应该前提为:是which后没有语法和逻辑的暗示。

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