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cannedpineapple

No problem. Good luck. Don't worry too much.

five626

Hi, Jason. many thanks for your interview tips. my first interview went quite well and smooth today.

gelukkig

Hi Jason, do you know if current student (first year or second yr) play a role in reading applications?

cannedpineapple

Hi, Jason. many thanks for your interview tips. my first interview went quite well and smooth today.

-- by 会员 five626 (2011/11/12 17:39:47)

Great! 不妨发个面经跟大家分享

cannedpineapple

Hi Jason, do you know if current student (first year or second yr) play a role in reading applications?

-- by 会员 gelukkig (2011/11/12 18:22:00)

At Wharton, some second-years are specially selected to go through adcom training so that they can read applications.

fightforit

Thank you for Jason's help!

I just want to share my weaknesses about my essay.

Avoid generaliztion or vagueness.

You and the school are both unique. Thus, it takes time and effort to know both better and find supporting materials to support your view.

Vagueness usually comes from the logical flaw. You give a summary to what you believe and obeserve. But more importantly, you need to tell them why you come to this point.

Go on revising my essay, good luck all and you can share your opinion here too.

five626

Hi, Jason. many thanks for your interview tips. my first interview went quite well and smooth today.

-- by 会员 five626 (2011/11/12 17:39:47)

Great! 不妨发个面经跟大家分享

-- by 会员 cannedpineapples (2011/11/13 17:22:40)

既然你开口了，我就发咯，不过不是主流的学校~

cannedpineapple

Thanks!

asoka123

Hi Jason,
Many thanks to your comments on my essays.
Logical thinking is much more important than grammar correcting. I'll work on that.

Marko