原答案:For members of the seventeenth-century Ashanti nation in Africa, animal-hide shields with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, protecting warriors against enemy arrows and spears. protecting作定语用。fficeffice" />
根据提示可否有以下几个答案:
改进1:For members of the seventeenth-century Ashanti nation in Africa, animal-hide shields with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, used to protect warriors against enemy arrows and spears.
以上两个句子的末尾都是是作定语修饰animal-hide shields with wooden frames;但是[改进1]句子中的:used to protect更确切,比protecting 更易理解为定语。
改进2:For members of the seventeenth-century Ashanti nation in Africa, animal-hide shields with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, a method of protecting warriors against enemy arrows and spears.
这个改进后的句子是否正确,可否理解为,a method是逗号前面的同位语部分呢? |