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下面是来自Rotman学生的范文，有关作者的具体信息都被我隐去了，原文500字整。 1. Discuss your personal and professional development over the past five years and describe how these changes have led you to choose to do your MBA at this time. What are your career goals and how will a Rotman MBA help you to achieve them? Rotman 的官方审题： We want to know: Why do you want an MBA? Why now? What do you expect
to do after your MBA? Why have you chosen Rotman? I know that you
have the answers to these questions. Just write it down and you'll have
your first draft. Don't worry about what you think we want to hear. 例子： Through my Engineering degree, I completed six different internships including a challenging position with (deleted words about the company), Germany. At (company), I was responsible for investigating different environmental technologies involved in (work related technical terms). This international experience gave me the opportunity to be immersed in a different business climate and cultural environment. Based on my internship experience and nearly three years of professional work experience in process design and supply planning with (2 company names), I have been exposed to a variety of different forms of business which include (industry related functions). Through these experiences I have developed a strong interest in the energy business and the role it plays in the world economy. My experiences with the (some) industry have allowed me to clarify my long term goal of leading a division of an Investment Company in the (some industry) sector such as (Company name). In the short term, after earning my Rotman MBA, I plan on using my acquired finance and business knowledge to enter a management position with (company), where I hope to use both my engineering and financial skills to develop economically viable and environmentally friendly alternative energy sources. My work with (company), Director of (department name) at (company name), the Team Leader on (company’s project name) Projects, has taught me the importance of developing environmentally safe and sustainable energy solutions through our extensive research on bio-diesel and developing it as a marketable product for the company. However, in order to achieve my goals, I need to be a motivational leader, a risk taker, an effective problem solver, and a strategic thinker. The Rotman MBA will provide the skills that I need to achieve my goals through its Integrative Thinking approach and the curriculum, faculty, students, and extracurricular activities. At Rotman, I will develop a strong foundation in the core skills, such as finance, operations, and business strategy. The required curriculum classes such as “Finance”, “Strategy 1”, and “Operations Management” will help with this skill development. In addition, the team projects involved in the classroom will strengthen my public speaking and leadership skills. Leadership and communication courses such as “Leadership”, “Managerial Negotiations”, and “Managing People in Organizations” will also enhance these skills. Outside of the classroom, I will participate in extracurricular activities to develop my leadership and management skills further. I plan on using my previous student leadership experience as the (former student organization) President to take on a leadership role with the (Rotman student organization name) or (Rotman student organization name). I also plan on being an active member of the (Rotman student organization name) and one of the many Social or Sports Clubs at Rotman.
If given the opportunity, I feel that I would flourish in the Rotman environment and contribute a great deal both as a student and upon graduation as an alumnus who is dedicated to making a positive difference and giving back to the community.
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发表于 2006-12-12 07:48:00
我一向非常能睡！
