华裔何时能成为美国和加国的政治首脑（总统，总理）-Rotman申请网络日志

MayFair

The essay1 has 5 draft versions before submitted for Editing.

The essay2 has 2 drafts

Essay3 has 2

essay4 has 3

Feel much better now

alohame

以下是引用MayFair在2006-12-30 8:06:00的发言：

Finally chose EssayEdge because it is the cheapest to use.

Googled a coupon code for EssayEdge and got $10 off the service. Super.

http://www.edealinfo.com/Coupons/essayedge.shtml

Once submitted, I received a confirmation email to link to the website that I can trace the status of the service. The reviewed essays will be returned by the end of Dec.31. Cool......

还有这么好的东东，呵呵，不错

今天晚上陪父母去看话剧“我的一辈子”，一直都没有搞懂是自己太匮乏文学细胞了还是他们说的实在太深奥，反正我是没看懂它究竟要表达个什么意思。有几个高中同学很有文学细胞，写得文章也是极其拗口，有一个还特喜欢模仿周树人的口吻，曾经有一段我也受过他的影响，写作文时总用一种比自己年龄大很多倍的语气，自认为很成熟，不过高考时语文的分数的确很理想。上了大学思想就在不断的退化，被各种形形色色的文化充斥，人的品位也一下低了许多，现在每次读他们的blog都有一种很痛苦的感觉，生涩，不明白这帮文人到底想说个什么意思。同样都是中国话，可是从他们的嘴里说出来我听着就别扭，不知道是他们太高深还是我过于俗气，反正是欣赏不了了。

alohame

Happy new year,mayfair!

MayFair

Happy new year to you too!

MayFair

以下是引用alohame在2006-12-30 23:06:00的发言：

不知道是他们太高深还是我过于俗气，反正是欣赏不了了。

还是深入浅出的比较好,不过80后的青春文学太浅显易懂了一点。

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-2 2:49:51编辑过]

MayFair

EssayEdge sent back the revised essays within 36 hours.

There is no change to contents or sentence structures or Rhetoric.

There are a bunch of changes to the prep.,definite articl, adjuctive.

I got what I paied for.

BTW, it seems that the payment part is only tested by IE, not FireFox.So better use IE to pay the application fee.

Submitted the application to Rotman already.

alohame

以下是引用MayFair在2007-1-2 3:16:00的发言：

EssayEdge sent back the revised essays within 36 hours.

There is no change to contents or sentence structures or Rhetoric.

There are a bunch of changes to the prep.,definite articl, adjuctive.

I got what I paied for.

BTW, it seems that the payment part is only tested by IE, not FireFox.So better use IE to pay the application fee.

Submitted the application to Rotman already.

Congratulations and Good luck!!

MayFair

Thanks.
And both referees submitted their reference letter too.
The application package is officially complete now.

alohame

Okay,so you can go to the lecture tomorrow evening for free!

alohame

How is everything going with you?