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kchszy061ban · 发表于 2012-6-11 23:09:07

There is never a reason to be rude (impolite) to another person

Have you ever been criticized by your teacher?Have you ever been shouted loudly by your boss？Have you ever been pushed down to the ground by someone?If your never experienced these situations,you would never understand the feeling of being treated rudely by other people.

Rude attitudes to others make them feel uncomfortable and even depressed.People always like the feeling of being confirmed by others,
such feeling makes them feel they are accepted by the society.However,rude people can not give others such feeling.Researchers had done
one experiment before.Two groups of workers were leaded by different bosses.One of them always criticized the workers in his group,while
the other boss treat his workers politely.One month later,the researchers made a survey,the results revealed that the rude boss made his workers feel stressful and depressed,the work efficiency of them were lower than the other group.

In addition,if one always have a rude character,people tend to keep a distance with that person.No one would love to live near a rude person,and enjoy the feeling of been treated impolitely.The result is that rude people have less friends,the relationships between them and their nearby people are strained.Such as when one chooses a house to buy,there are many of the houses to be selected.But people are less likely to buy a house which means they are going to live with a rude neighbour.Living with a rude neighbour means so many things people
have to consider.If you do something unintendly,but your neighbour does not think so,s/he may show her/his temper for you.

On the contrary,polite people have the effect of create a harmary and pleasant atmosphere.And other people are willing to live with people
who are not rude.

Of course,one sometimes have reasons to be impolite to other people which always have a bad temper and treat others unscrupulously.This
is understandable because one has her/his limitation of deadline.But being rude to other rude people,which have little sense of polite,may cause even worse effecnts.As a result,I definitely agree with the statement that there is no reason to be rude to another people.

综合写作 TPO19

The reading passage talks about “buzzing”,and says buzzers have bad effects on consumers and society.However,the lecture argues that the information in the reading passage is misleading,and does not reveals the truth.

First of all,the students who is a buzzer says the companies always hired people who had used their products and find the products are really
good.And buzzers are paid just like the companies paid the advertising.One different thing is that buzzers are person who really used the products and know the quality of them.While in the reading passage,it says that because buzzers are paid by the companies,their praises of the products are incrediable.

In addition,the reading passage reveals that because buzzers pretend to be private people,consumers just listen to them without any questions.
On the contrary,the students says that when he talks about a product with other people,they tend to ask so many questions,such as the price of it,the service,and how long does the student use the product.Consumers are always aware of the products they want to buy.

In the end,the students argues that it is no reason to say buzzers destory the social relationship.Because buzzers are who use the products themselves,and after consumers buy the products,they will find the products are indeed good.Then consumers began to believe buzzers and they develop a trustful relationshop with them.Futhermore,consumers are become open to people.

nirvanababy · 发表于 2012-6-12 17:00:14

红色改错，蓝色建议，高亮是写得好的

There is never a reason to be rude (impolite) to another person

Have you ever been criticized by your teacher?Have you ever been shouted loudly by your boss?Have you ever been pushed down to the ground by someone?If your never experienced these situations,you would never understand the feeling of being treated rudely by other people.

Rude attitudes to others make them feel uncomfortable and even depressed.People always like the feeling of being confirmed by others,
such feeling makes them feel they are accepted by the society.However,rude people can not give others such feeling.Researchers had done
one experiment before.Two groups of workers were leaded by different bosses.One of them always criticized the workers in his group,while
the other boss treat(treated, 最好和前面时态保持一致) his workers politely.One month later,the researchers made a survey,the results revealed that the rude boss made his workers feel stressful and depressed,the work efficiency of them were（was） lower than the other group.

In addition,if one always have a rude character,people tend to keep a distance with that person.No one would love to live near a rude person,and enjoy the feeling of been treated impolitely.The result is that rude people have less(fewer) friends,the relationships between them and their nearby people are strained.Such as when one chooses a house to buy,there are many of the houses to be selected.But people are less likely to buy a house which means they are going to live with a rude neighbour.Living with a rude neighbour means so many things people
have to consider.If you do something unintendly,but your neighbour does not think so,s/he may show her/his temper for you.

On the contrary,polite people have the effect of create a harmary(这个单词什么意思？我没查到诶) and pleasant atmosphere.And other people are willing to live with people
who are not rude.

Of course,one sometimes have（has）reasons to be impolite to other people which（who）always have a bad temper and treat others unscrupulously.This
is understandable because one has her/his limitation of deadline（期效限制？）.But being rude to other rude people,which have little sense of polite,may cause even worse effecnts（effects）.As a result,I definitely agree with the statement that there is no reason to be rude to another people.

文章第一段写得不错，整体来说逻辑清晰论述也很好，多注意语法。

kchszy061ban · 发表于 2012-6-12 17:14:04

多谢改正，第一段是十天搞定里面照抄来的了。嘿嘿，你肯定看出来了，不过还是多谢夸奖。

kchszy061ban · 发表于 2012-6-12 21:54:39

When come to the question of improving the quality of education,people’ opinons diverged.Some people believe that the best method is to increase teacher’s salaries,while others may think it is better to build teaching facilities.The people which support the later choice argue that if the taxpayer’s money are spend more on teacher’s salaries,then there would be not enough to be spended on teaching facilities.Also,they doubt that if teachers all have a high salaries,then they will not pay much attentions on their teaching.However,building high-level teaching facilities can benefit both teachers and students.

Taxpayers always pay attention to the use of their money that they paid as taxes,the reason is that the total amount of the money is limited,so increasing teacher’s salaries,means that less money will be spended on build teaching facilities.As we all know,taxpayer’s children are going to the school that were constructed by the government,and the money was come from the taxpayer.If the taxpayer does not satify with the quality of the teaching facilities in the school,they would think it is not a good choice the send their children to such type of school.The most important factor in kindergardens and primary schools is the safety,children there are more vulnerable than students in high schools and universities.So,if the facities in these places are not substantial and safe enough,children’ personal safety are not ensured.The result is that parents are not going to send their children to these shcools,how to talk about the quality of education.

Moreover,people worry about the situation that high salaries would cause teachers distracted.Compared to other types of career,teacher’s are already well paid.If one have so much money,the direct result is to spend it.With much money in hand,people are always willing to enjoy a better life.They may spend their time on thinking about planing a trip to several places,buy a sports car,a much bigger house.Personaly I do not think these ideas are not suitable for teachers,if they spend time on these things,the time they pay attentin to the teaching decreased.And it will cause the teaching quality of the teaher decreased intead of improved.

On the contrary,building teaching facilities can be good to students as well as to teachers.A high-level labrary gives students many equipmens to study,such as various books,computer centre,science centre,and so on.All these places can help student study better.At the same time,teachers can use these facilities too. We also can imagine a school have so many high salary teachers,they drive sports car to work,wear expensive outfits,but the labrary in this school is so small,you cannot find the book you want most of the time,no computers are provided there.Then,the quality of education can not be ensured.

Teachers are considered as master educators of human beings,their quality of life should be ensured.It is no doubt that teachers have a reasonable salary,however,the method of giving all teachers high salaries to improve the quaity of education is not suitable enough.

kchszy061ban · 发表于 2012-6-12 23:10:49

TPO 20 综合写作

The reading passage suggest that it is necessary to reintroduce the policy of supressing the natural fire in the wild places,the main reason is that the 1988 Yellowstone big fire cause huge damages to that place.However,the professor in the lecture argues that the natural fire is creative instead catastrophic phenomenon.

First of all,the professor says that the fire creats a chance for new plants to grow.And the pants in the Yellowstone becoms more diversed after the fire.The plants which are in the shade of the big trees have the opportunity to grow,and some seeds of the plants and other vegetation need heat to germinate,and the fire provided these seeds suitable condition.This view is directly opposite to the reading passage which states that the fire made the park seems like a devastated wasteland now.

Then,the reading states that large animals have the ability to escape from the fire,while smaller animals are unable to go to the safe place.Because of the disruption of the food chains,the ecosystem will never recover.On the contrary,the professor says that,with the appearance of the plants in the burned place,small anilams like rabbits and hares will come,behind them are the predators prayed on thess small animals.The food chains can be established again.

In the end,the professor says that if the fire happens every year,it may causes negative consequences for the local economy as in the reading passage said.However,the professor explains that the 1988 fire in the Yellowstone was a combinatin of many factors,such as the wind,dry weather,less rainfall.As a result,the fire would not like to happen every year,in fact,Yellowstone has no fire since 1988.So,the tourist com

包子不包子 · 发表于 2012-6-13 09:42:27

The reading passage suggests that it is necessary to reintroduce the policy 感觉应该是对let it be 的批评of supressing the natural fire in the wild places,the main reason is that the 1988 Yellowstone big fire cause huge damages to that place这句没有必要啊感觉 However,the professor in the lecture argues that the natural fire is a creative instead catastrophic phenomenon.

First of all,the professor says that the fire creats a chance for new plants to grow.And the pants in the Yellowstone becomes more diversed after the fire.The plants which areused to in the shade of the big trees have the opportunity to grow,and some seeds of the plants and other vegetation need heat to germinate,and the fire provided these seeds suitable condition.This view is directly opposite to the reading passage which states that the fire made the park seems like a devastated wasteland now.

Then,the reading states that large animals have the ability to escape from the fire,while smaller animals are unable to go to the safe place.Because of the disruption of the food chains,the ecosystem will never recover.On the contrary,the professor says that,with the appearance of the plants in the burned place不大准确啊,small anilams like rabbits and hares will come,behind them are the predators prayed时态 on thess拼写 small animals.The food chains can be established again.再准确些吧
对阅读的叙述有些多了听力可以在细致一些注意小错误哦

In the end,the professor says declares claims insists...换换词 that if the fire happens every year,it may causes negative consequences for the local economy as in the reading passage said said in the reading passage.However,the professor explains that the 1988 fire in the Yellowstone was a an unusualcombinatin of many factors,such as the wind,dry weather,less rainfall.As a result,the fire would not like to happen every year,in fact,Yellowstone has no fire since 1988.So,the tourist com ？

没有写完呀？
听力要注意细节哦侧重在听力阅读可以不叙述那么多

kchszy061ban · 发表于 2012-6-13 10:16:58

偶，多谢改正，下次一定注意，我也试试着看下你的文章额。我的语法错误太多了点。

kchszy061ban · 发表于 2012-6-13 10:19:12

没有写完？你是的是要把结尾也写上么？我看有好多综合作文都是没有结尾的，只是把三个要点写完就好。我真的不是很清楚结尾是不是很重要。刚刚看到，我没有贴上去完整的写作，是我太粗心了。

kchszy061ban · 发表于 2012-6-13 23:22:20

When it comes to the methods of teaching children,some parents agree with the point that the most important way for their children to improve abilities is to make mistakes and then learn from these mistakes by their own.While others believe that children should be told what is the right thing to do and help them when they make mistakes.As in China,most of the parents do not consider this question,the reason is that parents here think it is the done thing to help their children and tell them what is the right and proper thing to do.However,this type of teaching has its disadvantages.Indeed,children who make mistakes and then correct them on their own can learn more from these mistakes,thus they can do better in the future.

Through making and then learning from mistakes that children' made,they can cultivate indenpendence.Without help from their parents,children have to solve the problems on their own.Such as when children have some problems on doing homework,the easy way is asking their parents for help.Parents have the experiences to work out these questions.However,if sometimes parents are not available for some reasons,what can the children do?While,if children have the ability to solve them,they would finish it on their own,despite how difficulty the problem is,or even they may make some mistakes.The courage to confront with problems and confidence to get through them are important factors of indenpendence.

Furthermore,another benefits of making mistakes and learning from them is children can avoid the limatations of their parents.Differences in values and attitudes between parents and their children make parents see everything from their own point of view,and children view things based on their perspctives.One seriour problems in China is that young children are engaged in on-line game,some of them waste all their time on these games,when they spend all their money in the Internet Cafe,they began to cheat their parents for money to contiune their on-line game.The effects is that these parents consider Internet as a devil,and forbids their children use Internet.They are not willing to watch their children make mistake through using Internet,ingnoring the positive information and scitific knowledge provided on-line.
While children want to try new things,and eager to make some differences.

Nowadays,some children are afraid of making mistakes and lack the patience to deal with difficulty problems.Thus,if parents let their children make mistakes and learn from these mistake,their children would not have these problems.On the contrary,children who are always want to rely on their parents would never have the opportunity to form this ability.

Some people may not agree with the above statement,they think some mistakes are so severe that children would have life danger if they make these mistakes.Such as touch the electricity wire.And their condiderations on these issues are reasonable.However,besides these serious conditions,it is much better for children making mistakes and learing from their own mistakes.

kchszy061ban · 发表于 2012-6-14 20:52:21

Have you ever been criticized by your teacher? Have you ever been shouted loudly by your boss? Have you ever been pushed down to the ground by someone? If your never experienced these situations,you would never understand the feeling of being treated rudely by other people.

Rude attitudes to others make them feel uncomfortable and even depressed. People always like the feeling of being confirmed by others,such feeling makes them feel they are accepted by the society. However,rude people can not give others such feeling. Researchers had done one experiment before. Two groups of workers were leaded by different bosses. One of them always criticized the workers in his group,while the other boss treated his workers politely. One month later,the researchers made a survey,the results revealed that the rude boss made his workers feel stressful and depressed,the work efficiency of them was lower than the other group.

In addition,if one always have a rude character,people tend to keep a distance with that person. No one would love to live near a rude person,and enjoy the feeling of been treated impolitely. The result is that rude people have fewer friends,the relationships between them and their nearby people are strained. Such as when one chooses a house to buy,there are many of the houses to be selected.But people are less likely to buy a house which means they are going to live with a rude neighbour. Living with a rude neighbour means so many things people have to consider. If you do something unintendly,but your neighbour does not think so,s/he may show her/his temper for you.

On the contrary,polite people have the effect of create a harmony and pleasant atmosphere. And other people are willing to live with people who are not rude. When I was in middle far away from my home,I lived in school dorm. One of my roomamtes was so rude that everyone would keep a distance from him. However,he did not realize this because that was his habit in his own home. Later,our teacher talked to him about this question and he quichly changed his rude behavors. He became polite to me and other roommates,all of us felt so comfortable to live with him after his change.

Of course,one sometimes has reasons to be impolite to other people who always have a bad temper and treat others unscrupulously.This is understandable because one has her/his limitation. But being rude to other rude people,which have little sense of polite,may cause even worse effects. As a result,I definitely agree with the statement that there is no reason to be rude to another people.

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