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kchszy061ban

6月20日110827 NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

When it comes to the question of doing  things,people' opinions differ.Some prefer to take action immediately as soon as they face the challenge.While others like to consider carefully and thoroughly before they take any actions.Gernerally speaking,if people can think about every aspect of the challenge and make a plan about how to deal with it,it would be better.

Let us talk about the first benefit of being patient with one's work.If one use patience as a good strategy to deal with the problem s/he faces,it can shortcut the time s/he needs to solve it.When people suddenly confront with a new problem which is very diffifult to solve,they need time and energy to analyze it,to gather information about it,and sometimes they need to learn from other people' advices or experiences as well.After all of these preparation works have been done,they will have a clear plan about every step on how to solve the problem.Also,with enough time of consideration,they definitely have time to think about the difficulies they may face in their work,and draw up a plan on how to set them at rest.Therefore,people will solve the problem eaily and quickly.

Then,people really need patience to do some specific works.Patience means that one need to spend suffient time on the work they do,have the confidence to solve it,and to continue on whenever they confront with setbacks or they may feel depressed when they fail sometime.As we all know,studying is really a boring process,and it lasts so long,from primary school,middle school,then fianlly into university,if one has no patience,s/he can hardly finish the learning process.

In addition,patience is a factor to become grow-up.Adults are more tactful than young people,they are usually more patient before they do something than young people do.Years of experiences give them the wisdom to consider thoroughly before they make any decisions.The one who always takes action is thought to be not wisdom engough.If one start to do something s/he know little about it,most of the time s/he will fail.Not only s/he lacks the knowledge of it,but also s/he need to learn that s/he need patience to spend enough time to understand the priciples in the field s/he meets with.

Of course,the opportunity will escape if you do not seize it.However,one thing that everyone need to pay attention to is that,before you grasp it,you need to ensure you can succeed.Otherwise,the damage it brings to you would far outweith the advantage you get.Thus,people need patience as a kind of good strategy.

kchszy061ban

TPO 4 综合

The reading talks about some evidence which supports dinosaurs are endotherms.While in the listening,the professor explains that scientists have problems about the argument in the reading passage,and the materials are not valid enough to prove dinosaurs are in fact endotherms.

Fisrtly,the polar region explaination that if dinosaurs were not maintain their body temperature constant and above the surrounding,they would not likely to survive in the polar region.While the professor says that the climate at that time when dinosaurs lived were warm enough to maintian their life,and when the climate were indeed too cold,dinosaurs could migrate to warm places or hibernate.Thus,this explaination are not convinceable enough.

Then,the author of the passage states that the place of the leg may indicate dinosaurs are warm-blooded animals.However,the professor argues that there may other benefits for the leg position of dinosaurs,such as it could support more weight,and then dinosaurs could grow into large size which had many advantages at that time.

In the end,bone structure is cited by the reading as an evidence to support its conclusion.On the contrary,the professor points out there also growth rings on the bone of the dinsaurs.The growth rings means that dinosaurs used to grow rapidly and then slowdown or stop to growth if the temperature was cool.And then they began to grow again when the weather was warm.That was the reason why the growth rings formed.If dinosaurs are warm-blooded animal,they would grow constantly despite the weather was warm or cool.So,this evidence proves to be invalid.

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稍晚些时候回来该文章哈~~表着急~~

yangyangyu

恩，我也只有先来占个座儿，晚上晚点回来给你改了~今天晚上得出去啊~~刚才大概扫了一眼，昨天作文没看，今天感觉banban 写作好像有进步了耶~读着挺顺~ 加油哇！

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TPO 2 综合    
In the reading passage,the author states the advantages of group work.However,the professor in the lectuer is skeptical about these advantages.And explains his reasons in the lecture.
First,according to the reading,a group of worker haves more people to do the same projects,and they also have more (lots of) ways to do (fulfill) the project.While the professor cites that  an experiment has been done,the result showeds that the (some) workerws were likely to become free-riders when they were in a group.And then (when) the group makes made some succeses,they are were assigned to the group.
Alao,when asking about the feelings of some workers who have made insightful contributions,they just saysthat they feel opposite to what is said in the reading.Because their contributions are belong to the group,no one’s name is cited except the group.
Then,the reading says that because of more people invoved in a group project,they can finish the project quickly.While the professor argues that the fact is that it takes long time to make an agreement amoung all the members.If some of the group members are so infulcial to others,they would become dictated,most of the tiem they make a dicision without discussion,even when other members warn that the direction of that decision may be wrong.If their decision is proved to be a mistake,then the mistake would attribute to all the group members.

抱歉banban这篇改的比较晚，这几天期末导师找着各种帮忙，终于碰到过节了，先预祝banban端午节快乐哇\(^o^)/~
banban写这篇文时，是不是时间特别赶呀，感觉一点都不像你写得诶，很多拼写和时态的错误，后边我就直接标红了，其他都还好了，该把握的点也都在。
继续加油哦

kchszy061ban

这个综合，阅读分的不清楚，写起来就很费劲，多谢改正。  没事的，导师的事情先应该做

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TPO 4 综合
The reading talks about some evidences which suppots dinosaurs were 这块我觉得就直接写现在时吧·~你觉得呢~~因为全篇都是现在时~~虽然R部分都是过去的时态endotherms.While，这的while是副词啦~~要加，
号 in the listening,the professor explains that scients 拼写拼写！！！have problems in the arguments in the reading passage不要这么多in~~把in the argument去掉~~,and the ？？？是阅读还是lecture~~说明确materials are not valid enough to prove dinosaurs are endotherms.
Fisrtly,the polar region 这个地方怎么能解释呢？加个theory~~ explaination that if dinosaurs were 现在时not maintain their body temperature constant and above the surrounding,they would not likely to survive in the polar region.While， the professor says that the climate at that time when dinosaurs lived were warm enough to maintian their life,and when the climate were indeed too cold,dinosaurs could migrate to warm places or hibernate.Thus,this explaination are not convinceable enough.
Then,换一个词，表示所以的此很多，so therefore 等等哦~~ the author of the passage states that the place of the leg may indicate dinosaurs are warm-blooded animals.However,the professor argues that there may other benefits for the leg position of dinosaurs,such as it could support more weight,and then dinosaurs could grow into large size which had many advantages at that time.最后的逻辑关系不对哦，听力说的是腿长底下除了能跑以外 还有个好处，是支撑体重！~~
In the end,bone structure is cited by the reading as an evidence to support its conclusion.On the contrary,the professor points out there also 缺个动词啊~~has啊 is啊~~growth rings on the bone of the dinsaurs.The growth rings means that dinosaurs used to grow rapidly and then slowdown or stop to growth if the temperature was cool.And then they began to grow again when the weather was warm.That was the reason why the growth rings formed.If dinosaurs are warm-blooded animal,they would grow constantly despite the weather was warm or cool.So,this evidence proves to be invalid.这是不是没听懂呢？说的是恒温动物一般的生长规律是快-慢或不长-快，而恐龙不是这样，所以他不是恒温动物~~这个是个很重要的细节啊~~
-- by 会员 kchszy061ban (2012/6/20 23:18:13)

我挑了很多毛病 特别是时态 单三 最重要的就是听力内容的细节及和文章的关系要弄明白
总的来说 全文很流畅 这个还是挺好的~~一定要保持住~~
听力还是要加强~~
我听这部分的听力的时候 也是总丢点~~
一起努力吧~~

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6月20日110827 NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

When it comes to the question of doing  things,people' opinions differ.Some prefer to take action immediately as soon as they face the challenge.While others like to consider carefully and thoroughly before they take any actions.Gernerally speaking,if people can think about every aspect of the challenge and make a plan about how to deal with it,it would be better.

Let us talk about the first benefit of being patient with one's work.If one use patience as a good strategy to deal with the problem s/he faces,it can shortcut the time s/he needs to solve it.When people suddenly confront with a new problem which is very diffifult to solve,they need time and energy to analyze it,to gather information about it,and sometimes they need to learn from other people' advices or experiences as well.After all of these preparation works have been done,they will have a clear plan about every step on how to solve the problem.Also,with enough time of consideration,they definitely have time to think about the difficulies they may face in their work,and draw up a plan on how to set them at rest.Therefore,people will solve the problem eaily and quickly.

Then,people really need patience to do some specific works.Patience means that one need to spend suffient time on the work they do,have the confidence to solve it,and to continue on whenever they confront with setbacks or they may feel depressed when they fail sometime.As we all know,studying is really a boring process,and it lasts so long,from primary school,middle school,then fianlly into university,if one has no patience,s/he can hardly finish the learning process.

In addition,patience is a factor to become grow-up.Adults are more tactful than young people,they are usually more patient before they do something than young people do.Years of experiences give them the wisdom to consider thoroughly before they make any decisions.The one who always takes action is thought to be not wisdom engough.If one start to do something s/he know little about it,most of the time s/he will fail.Not only s/he lacks the knowledge of it,but also s/he need to learn that s/he need patience to spend enough time to understand the priciples in the field s/he meets with.

Of course,the opportunity will escape if you do not seize it.However,one thing that everyone need to pay attention to is that,before you grasp it,you need to ensure you can succeed.Otherwise,the damage it brings to you would far outweith the advantage you get.Thus,people need patience as a kind of good strategy.

-- by 会员 kchszy061ban (2012/6/20 21:51:39)

标红为单词拼写错误

When it comes to the question of doing  things,people' opinions differ.这个词是动词啊~~不对啊~~Some prefer to take action immediately as soon as they face the challenge要复数哦~~不能所有人面对的都是一个问题啊~~.While others like to consider carefully and thoroughly before they take any actions. Gernerally speaking,if people can think about every aspect of the challenge and make a plan about how to deal with it,it不要把两个it放在一起，给人的感觉太不明确了啊~~ would be better.

Let us talk about the first benefit of being patient with one's work.If one use patience as a good strategy to deal with the problem s/he faces,it can shortcut the time s/he needs to solve it.When people suddenly confront with a new problem which is very diffifult to solve,they need time前面家a或者复数 and energy to analyze it,to gather information about it,and sometimes they need to learn from other people' advices or experiences as well.After all of these preparation works have been done,they will have a clear plan 还是那个问题~~那么多人就一个plan？about every step on how to solve the problem.Also,with enough time of consideration,they definitely have time to think about the difficulies they may face in their work,and draw up a plan on how to set them at rest.Therefore,people will solve the problem eaily and quickly.注意：标点符号后面打空格，然后再写下一个单词~~

例子举得很好，但是呢~~你可以说，我遇到了这么一个问题，然后我是怎么解决的，把例子套在自己身上，具体化~~这样我觉得更好啊~~对不~~

Then,people really need patience to do some specific works.Patience means that one need to spend suffient time on the work they do,have the confidence to solve it,and to continue on whenever they confront with setbacks or they may feel depressed when they fail sometime.As we all know,studying is really a boring process,and it lasts so long,from primary school,middle school,then fianlly into university, if one has no patience,s/he can hardly finish the learning process.

这个观点感觉不是很好啊~~有点跟第一点重复了~~我一时间也想不到什么好的idea~~

In addition,patience is a factor to become grow-up要说帮助青少年长大，而不是有了p就能长大，要注意说的动词啊~~.Adults are more tactful than young people有点中式英语，可以说说youngster,they are usually more patient before they do something than young people do.Years of experiences give them the wisdom to consider thoroughly before they make any decisions.The one who always takes action is thought to be not wisdom engough.If one start单三形式 to do something s/he know little about it,most of the time s/he will fail.Not only s/he lacks the knowledge of it这个只代不明确,but also s/he need to learn that s/he need patience to spend enough time to understand the priciples in the field s/he meets with.

Of course,the opportunity will escape if you do not seize it.However,one thing that everyone need单三形式 to pay attention to is that,before you grasp it,you need to ensure you can succeed.Otherwise,the damage it brings to you would far outweith the advantage you get.Thus,people need patience as a kind of good strategy.
一定要注意拼写啊~~这个很扣分的呀~~
总的来说 文章不错~~但是要注意 句子之间要空格哦~~用word查一下就明白了~~如果不空格是错误的哦~~

kchszy061ban

6月21日110815NA One of your classmates needs help with some schoolwork. Which solution would you recommend your classmate should do: to ask you for help or to find a professional tutor for help?

When I was in middle shcool a couple years ago,my classmates often called me "bookworm".In fact,books are the most interesting things I have ever seen,I love reading books,love soving problems in the practices.Also,when I had some schoolwork which I could not deal with it by myself,I usually choosed to ask my teachers for help.At first,my classmates were willing to talk the questions we confronted with,but the result was not so satisfying.When we got together,most of the time we could not concentrate on the quesions,and our knowledge was not sufficient enough to work out all the problems,things gone even worse if my classmates did not know the answer,but they just gave me a wrong solution.Thus,I would recommend my classmates find a professional tutor when they need help for their schoolwork.

Let us talk about one of the disadvantages if we ask our classmates for help.What will you most likely do when you have time with your classmates?Doing schoolwork? It is so boring!And we have enough time to cope with it tomorrow,now let us play football with the school team,they are training only at this time of the week.Or they would say,"I have learn a new skill about street dance,let me show you,it is really cool".Then most of the time,you just focus on unralated things,instead of paying your attention to solve the problems.While,if you ask a professional tutor,s/he would not give you the chance to talk about other things.You can solve your problem very quickly without disturbance.

Then,another weakpoint to ask your classmates is that you can not solve some really difficult schoolwork.Whether they are primary students,middle school students,or studying in university,their knowledge is limited.Thus,when some quesions in the schoolwork require related knowledge beyond their level,the answer cannot be gained without the help of a professional tutor.As you can see,a professional tutor's help is necessary and at the same time can save your time if you directly ask s/he instead of your classmates who cannot give you all the answers you need.

Things would make you furstrate if your classmates give you the wrong answer.I still rember one solution which my classmate gave when I asked him about a very difficult mathematical question.According to his solution,I could work out it and got the right answer,so,I just did the same process as he told me when we took a test.But,the process of his solution was indeed incorrect and completely based on inverse method.Therefore,my score was very low in that test.If I had the opportunity to opt again,I would definetely choose to ask the professional tutors.Their experiences give them the wisdom to solve the quesion properly.

Of course,some students feel strained when they ask a professinal tutor because of the age difference.Meanwhile,some specific professional tutors will charge you for their service.However,from what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that the disadvantages of asking classmates ar so many and unacceptable,to ask for help from professional tutor is a better choice.

yangyangyu

6月20日110827 NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

When it comes to the question of doing things,people' opinions differ.Some prefer to take action immediately as soon as they face the challenge.While others like to consider carefully and thoroughly before they take any actions.Gernerally speaking,if people can think about every aspect of the challenge and make a plan about how to deal with it,it would be better.

Let us talk about the first benefit of being patient with one's work.If one use patience as a good strategy to deal with the problem s/he faces,it can shortcut the time s/he needs to solve it.When people suddenly confront with a new problem which is very diffifult to solve,they need time and energy to analyze it,to gather information about it,and sometimes they need to learn from other people' advices or experiences as well.After all of these preparation works have been done,they will have a clear plan about every step on how to solve the problem.Also,with enough time of consideration,they definitely have time to think about the difficulies they may face in their work,and draw up a plan on how to set them at rest.Therefore,people will solve the problem eaily and quickly.

Then,people really need patience to do some specific works.Patience means that one need to spend suffient time on the work they do,have the confidence to solve it,and to continue on whenever they confront with setbacks or they may feel depressed when they fail sometime.As we all know,studying is really a boring process,and it lasts so long,from primary school,middle school,then fianlly into university,if one has no patience,s/he can hardly finish the learning process. 这一点差不多算是第一点的具体化吧~（second benefit?!)

In addition,patience is a factor to become grow-up.（这里读着感觉有点奇怪呢, patience 是being mature的一个反映?!) Adults are more tactful than young people,they are usually more patient before they do something than young people do.Years of experiences give them the wisdom to consider thoroughly before they make any decisions.The one who always takes action is thought to be not wisdom(wise) engough.If one start to do something s/he know little about it,most of the time s/he will fail.Not only s/he lacks the knowledge of it,but also s/he need to learn that s/he need patience to spend enough time to understand the priciples in the field s/he meets with. (这点举个例子会不会好一点）

Of course,the opportunity will escape if you do not seize it.However,one thing that everyone need to pay attention to is that,before you grasp it,you need to ensure you can succeed.Otherwise,the damage it brings to you would far outweith the advantage you get.Thus,people need patience as a kind of good strategy.

小结:
就像之前说的哦，感觉ban ban 句子顺了很多~不错哇~撒花~
问题: 还是拼写~一定要小心小心啊~ 写完了要记得检查啊~
有关这个话题:
the first benefit之后,你后边文章没有其他的 second, third benefit了哇? 第二段有点第一段的延续，第三段就说的是patience 是 grown-ups 一个象征,最好可以多拿出点观点证明是benefits 而不是 benefit啦. (adults那段还可以细化一点,说patience到底是怎样让adults成功,而impatient如何不成熟了)..