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Terry95

joshua1993 发表于 2014-8-5 09:12
楼主是考完G了么？感觉作文有G的感觉

惊奇！！
我确实考完G了，但在努力摆脱G的作文模式。。
兄台怎么看出来我的作文有G的调调呢？

Terry95

资深少女_贾贾 发表于 2014-8-4 23:00
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libr ...

美女，你又在改题目了

At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries这里我觉得不能这么并列，你可以说体育运动和读书一样中样，但是不能说体育运动和图书馆一样重要对吧。 and should receive equal financial supports.

资深少女_贾贾

Terry95 发表于 2014-8-5 09:57
美女，你又在改题目了

At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as impor ...

my fault