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11#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-7 17:40:21 | 只看该作者
8月7日 独立作文 初版
Independent Writing:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.

With the living standard significantly increased, nowadays people pay more and more attention to their health in order to live a healthy lifestyle and to do more exercise. Healthy body guarantees people to study well and work well. When it comes to the statement that it is more easier to maintain good health than in the past, I cannot with it any more. Several evidence will offered in support of my opinion.

First of all, the medical technology has been advanced in the last decades and doctos' skills have improved a lot. Some serious illness, especially some illness cannot be cured in the past , can get cured now. Many people can become healthy again even if they have those illnes. On the other hand, many people in the past often died of a tiny desease such as cold.

Additionally, unlike people in the past, people of the modern society pay more attention to their health since they think they can do a lot of interest things as long as they live. Many gyms are builded in the places where are very convinient for people. It just takes a few minutes to walk there. And the government is concetrating on improve people's living standard so that it use the taxes to fund many  gym. People can go there for free. So more and more people take exercise. However,in the past, there were not enough gyms. For that reason, people would not want to exercise.

Last but not the least, as the living standard has improved a lot, people can eat foods that are more nutrient, which does good to people's health. While in the past, I would like to take China as an example, a great number of people had to live with hunger  since the weather was so bad that no crops they could gain. And the water was not clean, making peolple to suffer from many complicated deseases due to the dirty water.

To sum up, medical technologies have been advaced a lot compared with those in the past. And people can easily get access to the gyms and get exercises. Also, inceasing living standards make people live a healthy life. For those reasons mentioned above, I totally agree with the idea that people maintain good health more easily now than in the past.
12#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-8 00:12:49 | 只看该作者
8月7日 综合作文 初版 TPO4

In the lecture the professor questions the reading's assertion that dinosaurs are endotherms. The lecture puts forth the idea that , in fact, dinosaurs are not endotherms. Three reasons are offered in support of the professor's idea.

First of all, the reading passage mentions that dinosaurs are endotherms since they babe been discovered in polar regions. The climates were so cold that dinosaurs had to maintain a temperature so that dinosaurs are endotherms. However, the professor augues that the temperature in polar areas was much warmer than that of today. It is warm enough for the dinosaurs to live with the temperature.

In the second place, the reading cites that dinosaurs are endotherms because they have leg position and movement as  all of the modern endotherms do. But the professor says that this phenomenon has another explanation. The position and the movement of legs are used to support more weight so that the dinosaurs can grow into a large size. Those positions and movement are not used for running.

Lastly, the reading passage suggests that dinosaurs are endotherms because they have haversian canals. Haversian canals allow living animals to grow quickly. However the professor does not agree. The professor rebuts this by saying that dinosaurs stop growing or grow slowly in cold weather. They are not endotherms because endotherms can grow rapidly even in cool weather.

To sum up, because of the evidences mentioned above, the professor disagrees with the passage's idea that dinosaurs are endotherms.
13#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-9 07:16:54 | 只看该作者
昨天出去见同学玩耍了独立作文综合作文都没有写该打!
今天开始绝对不脱逃作业!
立字为证!
14#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-9 07:46:59 | 只看该作者
为今天的作业占座位,综合+独立!
15#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-9 18:36:37 | 只看该作者
Independent Writing:
For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on universities?

1、大学花费更多,幼儿教育花费少。
2、budget is limited,为了产生更大的效用投入大学
3、大学生毕业后可以投入工作产生money GDP improve然后得到更多的钱投入both

In order to develop our country, the government has to choose from spending more budget on very young children education to spending more budget on universities. Some people strongly argue that the government should spend more budget on very young children education as it is the beginning of kids's educantion and a good beginning makes a big difference. Admittedly, the very young children education is very important. However, given the goal of successful development of a country, focusing the budget more on universities is absolutely a better choice. Here are the reasons in support of my opinion.

First of all, compared with very young children education, universities' education cost much more. Universities need a great amount of money to pay for their professors whose salaries are higher than teachers of very young education and pay for facilities that are much more expensice than children's toys. Very young children's education does not need a lot of money, even their parents can give them good education. There is no reason to pay so much money in children education.

In addition, the amount of budget is limitted. In order to make the most use of budget, the government should spend such money in somewhere that can generate great advantages. Professors and students in universities do a lot of important researches and experiments whose results can significantly boost the economy of the society and improve people's living standard, which induce the development of acountry. However, it takes those young children ten or even more years to make such changes. There is no doubt that a government should pay more money to the education of universities.

Last but not the least, a majority of university students will find jobs and begin to work, which can improve the amount of the working force. If the skills of students are improved, the society can benefit more from them since better skills can bring more profits. And the GDP can get improved, too.

To sum up, when it comes to the stament that a government should focus budget more on very young education than universities, I strongly disagree. In order to develop a country successfully, money should be spend to such kind of education that need badly and that can makes big differences. For the reasons mentioned above, I argue that a government should spend more budget on university education.

一天没有写就手生,打字老是出错。
想点想了好久。
脑子里想表达的复杂句子表达不出来,只能写超级简单白烂的句子,内伤嘤嘤嘤。
这个是一点木有修改的,什么错都一大堆==
先下楼去跑个步,等下回来改作文还有写综合作文。
16#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-10 01:16:45 | 只看该作者
8月9日 综合作文已完成
一堆错字
17#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-11 00:08:03 | 只看该作者
Independent Writing:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Is the most important characteristic of a good political or business leader is the ability to take responsibility for mistakes?


Considering that many political and business leaders are afraid of taking responsibility, which brings a lot of serious problems, people argue that the most important characteristic of a good political or business leader is the ability to take responsibility for mistakes. Admittedly, the ability to take responsibility for mistakes undeniable has a significant influence on the government or companies. However, when it comes to the statement that such ability is most important, I cannot agree because it overlooks some other characteristics that are equally important or even more important. Here are three points offered in support of my opinion.

First of all, in my point of view, the ability to make a good plan is much more important than the ability to take responsible for mistakes because a good plan can avoid mistakes to the greatest extend. A recent survey conducted by a prestigious US research commercial institution, after investigating 356 world famous companies to find out the factors that lead to their business crisis, has shown that 68% of those mistakes are caused by poor plans, i.e., we even do not need to handle mistakes if good plan are made.

In addition, the ability to work efficiently is equally important because many mistakes show up due to the delay of some procedures. If leaders can work efficiently, they can finish their work in a shorter time. And the time left can be used to review what they have done. In this way, many potential mistakes can be found and those potential mistakes can be handled before they show up, which greatly decrease the cost.

Last but not the least, the ability to communicate and cooperate with people is also an important factor that we cannot neglect. If a leader can communicate with people well, he or she can find some errors made due to some ignorant. Here I would like to take Tony, who is a CEO of a famous company, as an example. His stuffs told him he had made a plan with some errors and hoped he could change the plan. But Tony failed to have a good communication with his stuff; the chance to change the plan was missed as time past. Finally, the poor plan brought many troubles and the company paid a great amount of money to deal with the problems.

To sum up, although the ability to take responsibility for mistakes is important, it is far from the most important characteristic. Many other characteristics are even more important, without which will do harm to the government or company. Therefore, I disagree with idea that the ability to take responsibility for mistakes is most important for a good political or business leader.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-11 23:09:44 | 只看该作者
8月11日 独立

如果學校拿到了一筆錢,improve the food of cafe in school or invest in social activity for students after school.
creative thinking
1、更多的人参加社交活动,在学校咖啡馆吃东西的人少
2、学生喜欢社交活动
3、社交活动对学生的发展十分重要
4、学校知名度 学校教育质量

If a university gets a large amount of money, how should the university to spend the money? Should the university spend the money to improve the food of cage in school or invest in social activities? When it comes to the decision about how to spend such money, with no hesitation, I will obviously choose to invest the money in social activities for students after school. Here are my points offered in support of my opinion.

First of all, it is universally acknowledged that social activities are very crucial for students' development in the future. A resent survey conducted by a prestigious US educational research institution, after investigating 1000 students, has shown that students who take part in enough activities have better capabilities and get better jobs. So we cannot emphasize the importance of the social activities too much. In order to improve the students' skills that are closely related to the social respects, the university should invest the money in social activities. In this way, students can get sufficient experience, which is necessary for their future careers, from those activities.

In the second place, students show more interests in social activities than in the food of cafe. From a survey of our school, about 88 percent of students usually take part in social activities after school; however, only about 52 percent of students go to school cafe. Compared with the food of cafe, social activities need the money more necessarily since money should be spent to somewhere that can generates more advantages.

In the third place, the reason why we should spend the money in social activities is that the quality of social activities is a important factor that shows the educational level of our school. A good university may have bad food but a good university never has boring social activities. Improving the quality of social activities, a university can attract more top students because top students always pay much attention to their social skills. With more top students, universities can step into the group of world-famous universities in a shorter time.

To sum up, again, I would like to emphasize the importance of the social activities. As for students, it is more necessary to invest money in social activities. In addition, taking part in more social activities, students gain useful experience and make a big difference in the future. As for universities, improving the quality of such activities is crucial for the development of the universities. For the points mentioned above, I strongly argue that a university should spend its money to social activities if a university gets money.
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发表于 2013-8-12 23:50:26 | 只看该作者
我用批注改的,所以只能上传文档了,不好意思

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-13 00:35:01 | 只看该作者
8月12日
独立

Independent Writing:
你同不同意that 學生參加學校的organization 和activities club is as important as their academic class.
Students get benefit from student organization or club activities 是不是as much as their academic studies.

Nowadays many schools plan to limit the number of school organizations and club activities to spare time for academic classes, arguing that academic classes are more important than organizations and club activities. Admittedly, academic classes play an important role in students' life. However, academic classes do not mean everything for students. When it comes to the importance of school organizations and club activities, I strongly believe that such organizations and activities are as important as academic classes. Here are the points offered in support of my opinion.

First of all, organizations and club activities provide students with several opportunities to improve communicating skills and to make new friends. Many students like to join school organizations or take part in activities because they can meet many new people and make friends here. At the same time, students can practice their communicating skills, which are crucial for their future development. In contrast, academic classes also can enable students meet new people, but they hardly talk because they have to listen to what professors are talking and take notes quickly, making it hard for them to make new friends.

In the second place, it is universally acknowledged that the meaning of life is not only to gain new knowledge but also to enjoy an interesting life. Those organizations and activities give students a lot of fun--parties, balls, sports games, ect. For example, I always show great interests to sing and club activities offer me a chance to practice my singing skills and I can have fun with people who have the same hobby as me, which makes me feel happy.

In the third place, organizations and club activities develop the ability to cooperate with people, which has a great influence on students' future career. I cannot emphasize the importance of such ability too much. A recent survey conducted by a prestigious US research institution, after investigating 10000 people from 12 years old to 32 years old, shows that students who often join organizations and club activities have more successful career due to their ability to cooperate with people. Therefore, organizations and club activities are equally important to academic classes.

To sum up, although academic classes provide professional knowledge to students, organizations and club activities give them crucial skills and experience that cannot be obtained in classes. For the reasons I mentioned above, I argue that organizations and activities are as important as academic classes.

啊呜,每次都是拖到晚上写,口语也是拖到晚上练......
拖延症......
有木有特效药啊......
草草的改了下错字主谓一致,用的好幼稚的句式
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