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8月12日
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Independent Writing:
你同不同意that 學生參加學校的organization 和activities club is as important as their academic class.
Students get benefit from student organization or club activities 是不是as much as their academic studies.
Nowadays many schools plan to limit the number of school organizations and club activities to spare time for academic classes, arguing that academic classes are more important than organizations and club activities. Admittedly, academic classes play an important role in students' life. However, academic classes do not mean everything for students. When it comes to the importance of school organizations and club activities, I strongly believe that such organizations and activities are as important as academic classes. Here are the points offered in support of my opinion.
First of all, organizations and club activities provide students with several opportunities to improve communicating skills and to make new friends. Many students like to join school organizations or take part in activities because they can meet many new people and make friends here. At the same time, students can practice their communicating skills, which are crucial for their future development. In contrast, academic classes also can enable students meet new people, but they hardly talk because they have to listen to what professors are talking and take notes quickly, making it hard for them to make new friends.
In the second place, it is universally acknowledged that the meaning of life is not only to gain new knowledge but also to enjoy an interesting life. Those organizations and activities give students a lot of fun--parties, balls, sports games, ect. For example, I always show great interests to sing and club activities offer me a chance to practice my singing skills and I can have fun with people who have the same hobby as me, which makes me feel happy.
In the third place, organizations and club activities develop the ability to cooperate with people, which has a great influence on students' future career. I cannot emphasize the importance of such ability too much. A recent survey conducted by a prestigious US research institution, after investigating 10000 people from 12 years old to 32 years old, shows that students who often join organizations and club activities have more successful career due to their ability to cooperate with people. Therefore, organizations and club activities are equally important to academic classes.
To sum up, although academic classes provide professional knowledge to students, organizations and club activities give them crucial skills and experience that cannot be obtained in classes. For the reasons I mentioned above, I argue that organizations and activities are as important as academic classes.
啊呜,每次都是拖到晚上写,口语也是拖到晚上练......
拖延症......
有木有特效药啊......
草草的改了下错字主谓一致,用的好幼稚的句式     |
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