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晓野的野

8月15日 独立
Independent Writing：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today more likely to give time and effort improving the world than young people were at the past.

There is a public debate that whether young people today are more likely to give time and effort to improve the world than young people were at the past. Some people believe that young people today obviously are more likely to give time and effort to improve the world since youngsters now have more advantages that will induce them to change the world. However, others argue that there is no doubt the youngsters in past time were more likely to change the world, for their world were so bad that they were eager to change it into a better one. In my point of view, young people nowadays, who are more energetic and creative, are more likely to spend time and effort to improve the world. Here are my reasons offered in support of my point of view.

First of all, youngsters now full of creativities and curiosities, which will boost their eagerness to improve the world. Since youngsters are little babies, they have begun to watch cartoons, which are full of some things that never happen in real life. So they always ask themselves a lot of questions. How could this happen? Why I have never seen this happen in my life. Can I make it happen? Young people gain creativities and curiosities in this way. Therefore, they are eager to improve the world. On the contrary, youngsters in old times lacked such activities and had less creativity. So, compares with young people at the past, youngsters now are more likely to spend time and effort to improve the world.

In addition, youngsters now accept better education than young people at the past did. So they own the abilities to change the world. For example, my grandfather, who was a handsome young man 60 years ago, was eager to become a train designer, since train was a convenient transportation and our country was in great need of train. However, my grandfather never got professional education about how to design a train so he had no chance to accomplish the goal. Finally, he had to give up his dream to change the world by designing trains. In contrast, young people have more chances to gain knowledge and knowledge helps them change the world.

To sum up, maybe both young people now and young people at the past are eager to improve the world. But they are in different conditions. Youngsters at past lacked some necessities that were crucial for them to improve the world. In contrast, youngsters now have advancing technologies and important education, as well as creativities and curiosities. Youngsters now not only have willingness to improve the world but also have the ability to improve the world. There youngsters now are more likely to spent time and effort to improve the world.

晓野的野

Independent Writing：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past young people are more depended on their parents in making decision. Today, young people are better able to make decisions in their own lives.

brainstorm

1、过去的父母溺爱孩子帮忙做决定，最后孩子丧失了做决定的能力。
对比现在的父母，他们更加了解孩子做决定的重要性，培养孩子自己做决定。【外部因素】

2、现在的孩子更加有主见，他们的想法突破传统思维，新奇，想自己manage their own lives，想live a life full of novelty and surprise.【思想方面】

3、过去的孩子懂的不多，不知道的地方很多，得依赖父母，现在有了什么计算机啥的，自己操作稳妥妥。【技术操作方面】

As the development of the society, great changes show up in many respects, especially in the respect of young people. Youngsters are becoming increasingly dependent: they take care of themselves, they try to make more money and they even go aboard for further education alone. Those things could hardly happen in the past. Therefore, when it comes the statement that young people now are better able to make decisions in their own lives than young people in the past did, I cannot agree anymore. Here are my reasons offered in support of my point of view.

First of all, traditional parents preferred to make decisions for their children and children were forbidden to make their own decisions. As time passed by,young people lost the ability to make decisions for their own lives. Why parents in the past did that? As the matter of fact, parents thought it was a kind of protection, protecting their children from some potential dangers. Parents thought their children were too young to make their own decisions. On the contrary, parents of today are getting to realize that it is crucial for their children to make their own decision especially that decision that will have great influence on their future career.

In addition, youngsters who are more independent and creative are more eager to manage their own lives. They want do something new and live a life full of novelty and surprise. For example, my best friend Tony, who now is a student majoring in medicine in UK, makes his own decision to chase his dream. His family always wanted him to become a teacher, which is a easy job with high salary. However, Tony does not want to live a life without challenge so he decides to become a doctor. A recent research conducted by a prestigious research institution, after investigating 1028 young people, has shown that young people today are more likely to leave their comfortable zone and try new thing. With such characteristic, young people are more able to make decisions in their own lives.

Last but not least, technologies are far more advancing now than before. The biggest problem for young people to make their own decisions is lacking of knowledge about their decisions. Now with the help of technologies, such as computers, they can easily find the information they want. In contrast, young people in the past lacked such technologies so it was not a easy job for them to make their own decisions.

To sum up, youngsters of today have advantages over young people in the past. For the reasons I mentioned above, I strongly agree that young people now are more able to make decisions for their own life.

还没有改.....媽蛋，今天非改了才睡！

晓野的野

As the society is developing rapidly, great changes show up in many respects, especially in the respect of young people. Youngsters are becoming increasingly dependent: they take care of themselves, they begin to take part-time job at a younger age and they even go aboard for further education alone. Those things could hardly happen in the past. Therefore, when it comes the statement that young people now are better able to make decisions in their own lives than young people in the past did, I cannot agree with it anymore. Here are my reasons offered in support of my point of view. Several reasons in different dimensions will be demonstrated and explained to justify my point of view.

First of all, traditional parents preferred to make decisions for their children and therefore children were forbidden to make their own decisions. As time passed by, young people lost the ability to make decisions for their own lives. Why parents in the past did that? As a matter of fact, parents thought making decisions for their children was a kind of protection, protecting their children from some potential dangers. Parents thought their children were too young to make their own decisions. On the contrary, parents of today are getting to realize that it is crucial for their children to make their own decision especially that decision that will have great influence on their future career. So parents encourage their children to get into the habit of making decisions for their own whenever and wherever.

In addition, youngsters, who are more independent and creative, are more eager to manage their own lives. Something new and a life full of novelty and surprise are what they are chasing for. So they try to gain ability to make better decisions for their own. For example, my best friend Tony, who now is a student majoring in medicine in UK, makes his own decision to chase his dream of becoming a doctor. His family always wants him to become a teacher, which is an easy job with high salary. However, Tony does not want to live a life without challenges so he decides to become a doctor. A recent research conducted by a prestigious research institution, after investigating 1028 young people, has shown that young people today are more likely to leave their comfortable zone and try new thing. With such characteristic, young people are more able to make decisions in their own lives.

Last but not least, technologies are far more advancing now. The biggest problem for young people to make their own decisions is lacking of knowledge about their decisions. Now with the help of technologies, such as computers, they can easily find the information they want. In contrast, young people in the past lacked such technologies so it was not an easy job for them to make their own decisions.

To sum up, youngsters of today have advantages over young people in the past. For the reasons I mentioned above, I strongly agree that young people now are more able to make decisions for their own life.

最后两段还没有想好 先把改好的放上来

晓野的野

8月17日 独立 未修改
Nowadays, there are a increasingly number of people, who pay particular attention to their future developments, asking their children to playing sports, for they think playing sports can boost the development of personalities of children. As a matter of fact, people can gain important lessons on life learning. Several reasons in different respects will be demonstrated and explained to justify my point of view.

First of all, I cannot emphasize the importance of the ability to cooperate with each other too much. Playing sports with people obviously can provide people with the chance to gain such ability since sports need people's good cooperation. For example, my friend John, who used to the kind of person who liked to deal with problems alone, never cooperated with people. However, after he began to play football, every thing changed. He came to realize that he could not achieve a score alone and he must cooperate with others. The cooperation with each other is crucial to fulfill a goal since it gather the wisdom and power from everyone and a group is stronger than a person.

In addition, playing sports help people to make new friends and people are getting to know how significant the friendship is during their lives. It is universally acknowledged that the friendship plays one of the most important core roles in people's lives. But nowadays people always overlook friendships since they have less chance to see them, to touch them and to feel them. People are increasingly busy with boring work, hard studies and such, leaving less time for friendship. On the contrary, playing sports enables people to meet new people, who have similar hobbies and different experience. Playing sports together, facing problems together and dealing with difficulties together make them to feel the importance of friendship.

Last but not least, playing sports is challenging for people and people who are in fond of playing sports have definitely long- term goal in their life.  A survey conducted by a prestigious US research institution, after investigating and comparing 2000 people in different counties and areas, has shown that people who like to play sports are more strong-minded and easier to get success than those who do not like to play sports. From this survey we can draw the conclusion that playing sports actually make people to gain crucial characteristics for their future career.

To sum up, for the reasons I have mentioned above, playing sports gives important life learning for people.
结尾收的好仓促......
等下贴个修改版的

晓野的野

今日 修改之后 还是不怎么满意
为嘛我就写不粗来高贵冷艳赶脚
狂拽炫酷吊炸天的句子 快到碗里来
Nowadays, sports activities are becoming increasingly popular, not only because playing sports can help people keep fit but also because it can help people understand the truth of life. As a matter of fact, engaging in sports activities, people often gain important lessons on life learning. Several reasons in different respects will be demonstrated and explained to justify my point of view.

First of all, playing sports with people obviously provides people with a rare chance of gaining the ability to cooperate with people. The importance of the ability to cooperate with each other cannot be emphasized too much. Sports activities, a challenge of physical strength, also require people to get to know each other and cooperate with each other. For example, my friend John, who used to be the kind of person who always dealt with everything alone, never cooperated with people. However, this situation did not change until he began to play football. Suddenly, he came to realize that no one could achieve a score without other’s help and people need cooperate with others. The cooperation with each other is crucial to fulfill a goal since it gather the wisdom and power from everyone and a group is stronger than a person.

In addition, playing sports help people to make new friends and people are getting to know how significant the friendship is during their lives. It is universally acknowledged that the friendship plays one of the most important core roles in people's lives. However, people are increasingly busy with boring work or hard studies, leaving less time for friendship. Therefore, people often overlook friendships since they have less chance to see, to communicate with or to hang out with their friends. On the contrary, playing sports enables people to meet both new and old friends. Playing sports together, facing problems together and dealing with difficulties together make them to feel the importance of friendship. In this way, people can deeply find out how crucial the friendship is.

Last but not least, people, who are in fond of playing sports, are more likely to understand the importance of having a goal. Since sports activities are full of unexpected challenges, a definite goal is quite necessary for people to fulfill target. A survey conducted by a prestigious US research institution, after investigating and comparing 2000 people in different counties and areas, has shown that people who like to play sports are more likely to have a goal in life and easier to get success than those who do not like to play sports. From this survey we can draw the conclusion that playing sports actually make people to gain crucial characteristics for their future career.

To sum up, engaging in sports activities enables people to understand the necessity of cooperation, the importance of the friendship, and the significance of goal. For the reasons I have mentioned above, we can easily draw the conclusion that playing sports gives important life learning for people.

hemodata

晓野的野 发表于 2013-8-17 16:20
今日 修改之后 还是不怎么满意
为嘛我就写不粗来高贵冷艳赶脚
狂拽炫酷吊炸天的句子 快到碗里来

今天时间不够了，只改了两段。。。

晓野的野

hemodata 发表于 2013-8-18 11:04
今天时间不够了，只改了两段。。。

谢谢hemo君....
汗 还是修改过的文章 结果还是细细碎碎出了那么多问题

hemodata

晓野的野 发表于 2013-8-18 22:43
谢谢hemo君....
汗 还是修改过的文章 结果还是细细碎碎出了那么多问题

啊，叫我小默就好。。。

可能是写的时候太着急了，就容易出各种小错误吧，时间越紧就越慌张
我也是这样

晓野的野

8月18日 独立作文
敲了之后草草看了遍就复制word了 好多错别字
拖拖拉拉又到了到现在
看来明天要打双倍鸡血啊

In order to improve the efficiency to teaching, school rewards teachers by considering their performance. Speaking of the better way to evaluate teachers' teaching efficiency, I argue that it is better to evaluate the performance by teachers. Three reasons in different respects will be demonstrated and explained to justify my point of view.

First of all, teachers are more professional in judging the performance of teachers. As teachers, who have received teaching skills for many years and gain experience in teaching, they are obviously more skillful in judging their performances. Take my friend Tony, who is a high school student, as an example. His school also rewarded teachers by considering their performance. However, his school judged the performance by students’ idea. Finally it turned out to be that those judgments were inaccurate and teachers who actually had better skills did not get reward. Such case is not rare in our lives. So we can draw the conclusion that it is not a good way to evaluate the teaching efficiency by students since teachers are better at conducting the evaluation.

In addition, other factors may mislead students' judgments and lead to a wrong evaluation. Such cases often happen in our lives. Assuming that there are two teachers, one does not perform well but is very kind and another has teached students efficiently but is very strict. It is not surprised that students like the kind teacher even though he or she has poor teaching kills. On the contrary, teachers will not mislead by those factors and will give just evaluations. Therefore, teachers are more proper that students to give evaluations to teaching efficiency.

Admittedly, compared with teachers, students share more time with their teachers and know the personalities of their teachers better. However, a better sighthing about their teachers does not mean a better evaluation of the teaching efficiency. What we need about a proper evaluation are professional skills and just attitudes.

To sum up, there is no doubt that teachers have a better evaluation about teaching efficiency due to their professional skills. Moreover, unlike students, teachers are less likely to be misled by other factors that are unrelated to teaching efficiency. Therefore, when it comes to the more useful evaluation about teacher, I strongly argue that teachers can do a better job.