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抱歉来晚了~~ Asked what professors will do to become recognized,(你第一句看着很别扭,木懂你的意思~~) the responses in universities have a boilerplate (这词不错)answer: the greatest contribution from researches will be to keep entire society appreciating their knowledge. I, given the chance, also prefer to endorse(词汇亮点) that researchers should have primary consideration.(你后面这个从句感觉不完整,你要换种表达~)
First and foremost, further evidence of researches’ potential comes from the benefits they generate in our world.(第一眼看完,好纠结的表达方式,potential 觉得没必要出现了.) Several years ago, cancer cannot be cured due to lack of technology in the medical field. Thanks to the medical researches these years, a person needn’t to be anxious or depressed after hearing being attacked by cancers. Also, recently professor Wang from Peking University made a significant discovery about Aids. His paper reveals that it is possible the aids could be treated within ten years in the near future. If what he predicts is true, patients who suffer from the Aids will not die. This is undisputable(亮点) a piece of surprising news to our world. However, were not devoted himself into his research, Wang would not have this discovery so early in his lifetime, as a result postponing the contribution to our world.
Moreover, another essential point worth being mentioned is that researches done by professors benefits students a lot. On the one hand(固定搭配,删掉the ), professors may introduce what their research findings to the class. These findings are more up-to-date knowledge, which will arouse students’ interests to a large extent. On the other hand, beside direct benefits, there is an indirect one as well. As we know, the professors’ researches contribute to the reputation of schools students study in. We cannot neglect the fact that big titles of schools do play an important role in their students’ careers. The higher reputation the schools have, the more easily the students will hunt a job after graduation.
In addition, fame and high-pay earned by doing research are also motivation for professors to move on. To make my demonstration more comprehensively, I would like to refer to professors in our school. Giving lectures is regarded as their responsibility. No matter how well they teach in the classes, we cannot attribute the students’ outstanding performances to lessons they attend. Because the outcome is affected by too many factors, among which students’ own talents and efforts cannot distinguished from it. More commonly, the professors’ pay and fame are valued more based on their researches. The more papers they published, the higher pay and fame they will obtain, driving them to be more devoted to academic. (建议你这几个理由换下位置,你这个可以放到第一去~ 因为你第一个感觉范围宽些) After ruminating (亮点词汇)over all these factors, it is more advantageous for us to make decision alone. As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that professors should dedicate themselves more into doing researches. 看得出你的语言文字不错,功底扎实~ Excellent !
The reading passage casts light on three ways to address the decline of Torreya. The professor in the lecture covers the same topic, however, with a totally opposite attitude that all these three ways will not provide us with satisfactory solution. The professor also utilizes three distinctive points to justify his viewpoints.
To begin with, the professor refuses the idea of the reading that we can reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years. On the contrary, the professor contends that reestablishing Torreya in the location cannot make effects. To be specific, the professor claims that on the one hand, the global warming has caused the overall temperature to rise. As a result the microclimate will never be a favorable habitat for Torreya. On the other hand, the professor points out that wet land there was drained and becomes drier already, not suitable for Torreya to grow any longer. Evidently, the professor’s idea is incompatible with that of the reading.
Moreover, as well defined as it seems in the reading that moving Torreya to an entirely different location is another option. (你这个表达~~~有点混乱,糅杂,简化成:About another option in the reading that…)The professor challenges this final down once again, and he asserts that a kind of tree called Black locust spreads quickly after being moved to a new area and causes a lot endangered trees to die. Clearly, taking the unpredicted outcome into consideration, the professor doubts the correctness of the point in the reading passage.
In addition, the reading passage points out that preserving Torreya in research centers may be a possible choice for us. The professor's statement contradicts with this point. According to the professor, in the research center, Torreya will not be able to resist disease because the research center has not the large enough capacity to ensure the genetically diversity(看了你的,我貌似应该听错了,呵呵) of Torreya. Apparently, the credibility of the conception in the reading begins to shrink when thinking about the limitation of a research center.
To sum up, the professor precisely discerns the drawbacks of the reading and convincingly reveals that the fundamental arguments in the reading needs to be reexamined with close scrutiny.
综合GOOD 不错哟~我看来还是明天得重听第三点. |
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