bonnenuit的作文帖！作文一直都是个弱项！求大牛帮忙批改作文！感激不尽啊！

lizchang1990

不好意思阿~ 我尽量快点帮你批改作文吧~ 若今晚没看完,我明天早上发给你.我的作文也明天一块贴上来~  不好意思呀,忙递交申请材料今天,所以....   我一定会在明天早上前给你的!!!


不好意思阿~ 我尽量快点帮你批改作文吧~ 若今晚没看完,我明天早上发给你.我的作文也明天一块贴上来~  不好意思呀,忙递交申请材料今天,所以....   我一定会在明天早上前给你的!!!

不好意思阿~ 我尽量快点帮你批改作文吧~ 若今晚没看完,我明天早上发给你.我的作文也明天一块贴上来~  不好意思呀,忙递交申请材料今天,所以....   我一定会在明天早上前给你的!!!

lizchang1990

In the lecture, the professor is skeptical about the idea of reading passage that planting genetically trees on a large scale promise to bring a number of benefits. The professor argues that the benefits listed in the reading passage are open to debate, though planting genetically trees do bring some benefits.

In the reading passage, genetically modified trees are more hardier (去掉more)and more likely to survival than their unmodified counterparts. On the contrary, the professor says that the genetically modifications do not ensure the trees survive in the wild. Some trees may survive from some disasters, however, the genetically modified trees are too uniform to get through the disaster and more likely to die out.(流畅度不错~)

The professor then oppose(小错误哦~) the view in the reading that the genetically trees will bring the farmer more economical benefits by stating that the company will charge more on the genetically tress' seeds than unmodified trees 's, even the farms cannot plant the seed freely after they collect them.

Finally, the professor points out that the genetically modified trees grow more aggressively than normal trees do, and take the nutrients and water away, making the unmodified trees out of competition. This fact disapproves the reading's idea that the use of genetically modified trees can prevent overexploitation of wild trees.

评语:看了你2篇综合, perfect, LZ语言功底不错,这模板也不错哟~

lizchang1990

我的下午6点样子上传,不好意思哟~~~

lizchang1990

我昨天的作业连接,  http://forum.chasedream.com/TOEFL_Writing/thread-781814-3-1.html#last

谢谢!