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Nowadays, driven by the fierce competition in the market and the rapid growth of the technology, technological devices are improving （这有点搭配不当，应该是数量增多，或者是质量提高吧）quickly. With this fast improvement, using new technological device becomes a fashionable behavior. However, I really do not think that it is more enjoyable to buy a new technological device when it becomes available than to wait until it approaches to many people. I have plenty of reasons to say so.


To begin with, former experience tells me that a new technological device is usually not convenient to use because the market always lack the overall set of facilities, services, and software tofit and （有点多余）support this new product. We can first take the products of apple for example. Because iPad is not used by as many people as possible（这句话有点别扭，改成ipad is not accessible to most of people）, the operation system of iPad is not compatible with many common softwares that we frequently need on normal computers. That brings about a lot of inconvenience. On the other hand(conversely), if one day this product and its operating systems are used by many people, the softwares that we frequently use in daily life and everyday work will be created to fit of its system.


In addition, buying a new technological devices might make me feel more regretful rather than pleasant. First, common sense tells us that whether a new technological device is good or not cannot be fully discovered before thousands of times of testing by the consumers. If the product is perfect, we indeed can feel lucky and delighted. However, what if the product is not as perfect as we expected it to be? The answer is obvious that we will feel depressed. Therefore, in order not to be regretful, I think that waiting until many people have got it, used it, and estimated it, and then going to buy it is a wiser choice than buy it at the first time when it become available.




Furthermore, I think few people will deny that they want to buy the new technological device largely for the purpose of chasing the fashion trend. They pursue fashion (用vogue替换)because they want to have the（a?） common topic with others or be admired by others. However, if this technological device has not comesto the hands（？） of enough numbers of people, people who have by（bought?) this device at the first time cannot draw others attention and talk with others about this product. Others have not even known this product. Thus, even in the aspect of fashion, I do not think buying a new technological device when it is available is more enjoyable than buying it when many people have got it.


In brief, no matter in what aspect, I firmly believe that waiting until a technological device is owned by many people before going to buy it is more enjoyable than otherwise buying it when it is just available.
conclusion:结尾不够精彩，一定要抽出时间检查哦。