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大神,还在吗?In traditional small towns, people used to work and shop in the same town in which they lived; but now that stores and workplaces are located far away from residential areas, people cannot avoid traveling long distances each day (Evidence). 我觉得这里更像background呢,因为你说evidence是支持main conclusion的,但是main conclusion是Something must be done to ease traffic congestion。我觉得没有支持到啊,人们不能避免每天都要出行很长举例不能支持到我们要做些事情来改善交通拥挤,因为evidence并没有提及交通拥挤。我觉得evidence应该是类似于说交通拥挤坏处的句子。感谢楼主回复呢 |
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