prep2008 -sc 语法笔记勘误、查漏专贴

zhongshanlh

IMO，你说的enough与sufficient确实是问题，但是B中的with结构确实是夹心修饰，既可以跟前半句，也可以跟后半句，没有问题的

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然后提一个小疑惑：

207. (T-4-Q30)
Unlike the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, a permanently orbiting space station will have to generate its own electricity.
A.    the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,
B.    the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, with sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,
C.    the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which enabled them to carry sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries,
D.    the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which were capable of carrying sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,          
E.    the flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, whose shortness allowed them to carry sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries

解释说B选项说with结构是夹心修饰，但是with之后又for their short flights，说明with结构修饰的是复数名词，那么只能是前面的the shuttle and earlier spacecraft而不会a permanently orbiting space station 呀？
我觉着with不是夹心修饰，B的问题只是enough和sufficient的重复

不知是否是自己想错了，谢谢斑斑解惑哦~~

-- by 会员 jay871750293 (2012/5/5 11:22:05)

zhongshanlh

PREP 216题补充部分关于主语比较，一个小细节错误了。

主语若相同 ，可省，但助动词不能省。如：
As a result of the continuing decline in the birth rate, [fewer people] will enter the labor force [in the 1980’s] than (few people省略)did [in the 1960’s and 1970’s], a twenty-year period during which people born after the war swelled the ranks of workers.
我认为错误的地方在than后面的括号中的注解，省略的应该是people，而不应该是few people，因为people自身这个名词是被作为被比较对象，在前后句子中充当主语，而并不是fewer/few people充当主语，所以省略的仅仅是people一个词

zhongshanlh

In an attempt to guarantee the security of its innovative water purification method, the company required each employee to sign a confidentiality agreement prohibiting that its water purification methods be disclosed to companies using an analogous purification process.  
A.    prohibiting that its water purification methods be disclosed to companies
PREP解释
A中companies和an process单复数不匹配
不太同意此观点，因为就是有可能就是其他的公司使用的是一个相似的方法，，，，

zhongshanlh

226. (GWD-3-Q1)
The four-million-year-old fossilized skeleton known as Lucy is so small compared with many other skeletons presumed to be of the same species, and so some paleontologists have argued that Lucy represents a different lineage.
A.    presumed to be of the same species, and so
B.    presumed to be of the same species that
C.    presumed that they are of the same species, and so
D.    that they have presumed to be of the same species, so that  
E.    that they have presumed are of the same species, and
关于D和E的解释，PREP：D.    that they have presumed中用现在完成时没有必要，they无所指
实际上D和E中最严重的错误在于they have presumed中是主动，但实际应当是被动。

longlongzhi

在第64页的，223题的考点当中有一句1. 动词比动名词简洁: payment比paying好，development比developing好。对于没有专门名词形式的动词，再应该用动名词。

应当是名词比动名词简洁吧？payment和development都是名词，不是动词

jeffery2541

215.(GWD-3-Q3)A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.

A.which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing

B.which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing

C.which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of

D.including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing(D)

E.including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of



题目释义：A study urged to…，including…，closing…，and requiring….

考点：句子结构（grammatical construction）逻辑意思（logical predication）

1. 定语从句关系代词which的指代

2. 现在分词表伴随功能动作时，与句子谓语同时发生，逻辑主语等于句子主语。

3. and平行结构。

4. limit做动词时的固定搭配：limit to + 界限；limit on doing sth.(做某事的限制)

名词：size limits大小、规模限制

5. urge的固定搭配：urge sb. to do sth.

6. shark catches: 捕鲨量，此处catch意为a quantity of fish that has been caught at one time

选项分析：A.which离其逻辑上所指的remedies太远，且如果指代remedies不该用单数includes；the establishment of不如动词establishing简洁，而且与后面的closing不平行。

B.which和includes错误同A；limits to the size of sharks that can be caught不够简洁，直接用size limits和shark catches就行

C.which错误同A；the establishment of和the closing of名词短语不简洁且和requiring不平行

D.correct；including修饰remedies，including是介词，其跳跃能力比which强

E.limits to the size of sharks that can be caught不够简洁，直接用size limits和shark catches就行；the establishment of和the closing of名词短语不简洁且和requiring不平行
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小的是这么认为的：
1·考点2：这里说的v-ing是说的including吗？如果指的是establishing，closing，requiring也不太恰当。其实，好多人看了还是会以为including是v-ing的用法。
2·题目释义：A study urged to undertake remedies to…，including establishing…，closing…，and requiring….这样可能更能说明平行的是那些部分，否则，会有同学误以为including，closing，requiring三者并列平行。

evlily8783

177. (T-4-Q12)
For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of milk each per year.
A.    providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
B.    providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
C.    provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
D.    provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces        
E.    provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce

题目释义：For the farmer who … to keep them cool, provided and milked…., Holstein cows will produce…….
         cool，provided，milked三者并列做keep的宾语的补足语，for the farmers中的for为介词表原因。

而下面对E选项的分析说的是：
(E)    Correct；调整句子语序rovided with high-energy feed, and miked regularly, Holstein cows will produce an average of 2,275 gallons of mild each per year for the farmer who takes care to keep them cool。

题目释义和选项分析对题目结构的解读显然不同，我个人认为选项分析中的说法更加可信——也就是说，provided 和milked作的是后面主句的伴随状语，而不是keep的宾补。

请NN们明鉴~~谢谢！

495429200

一个小小小小的细节问题~
212. (GWD-10-Q1)
补充说明：
1.  关于倍数的表达----by balabaladou7：
白勇《GMAT语法全解》中说过“...times + 形容词/副词比较级 + than.....‖属于有争议的结构，因为
产生歧义。标准书面语中避免使用此结构。“....times + as+形容词/副词+as" 则常用。
但好像张道真语法上有说:--6道OG例子证明这个两种表达都可以。
five times as...as 和 five times more/greater than...是表达相同的数量概念的.这是英语国家的语言习
惯,不能用中文硬翻理解. 张道真语法 P384/页尾注释。




这个语法点第五版manhattan上指出来认为两者意思是不同的，一个是5倍一个是6倍。并且比较级的用法是应该避免的。
参见P260

jessi4765

这个语法笔记太完美了，神马新东方神马白勇语法全解，都不及这个语法笔记！这才是学语法必备的！

Bianshaozhe

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