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jtrchina

求助大全语法一题

11. Researchers agreed that the study of now treatments for heart attach patients was extremly impotant but more research was needed to determine that balloon angiopasty preceded with ultrasound was or was not any better for heart atteck patients than the balloon procedure by itself.
A.more research was needed to determine that balloon angiopasty preceded with ultrasound was or was not any better for heart atteck patients than
B.more research was needed for determining whether or not balloon angiopasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart atteck patients than is
C.that more research was needed to determine whether balloon angiopasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart atteck patients than
D.that more research was needed to determine that balloon angiopasty preceded with ultrasound was any better for heart atteck patients than
E.that more research was needed for determining that balloon angiopasty preceded by ultrasound is or is not any better for heart atteck patients than is

key B

B中不是有 whether or not这个是重复吗？必错啊？有问题？

than 后面要接 is 只有B和E
E比b更累赘么？
还是有其他错误？

-- by 会员 葛佳 (2010/5/26 20:00:58)

其一：
whether or not 表达不简洁，但语法并无错误，相较正确性错误（主谓、平行并列等）只是有效性不够简洁，不足以作为排除依据。
GMAC越来越狡猾，许多中国培训机构总结的规律套路往往被其将计就计地设下圈套，把握原则，纵然题能千变万化，自以不变应万变。


其二：
E中，
determine that ……is or is not……表达十分笨拙，表达是否用whether

jtrchina

求助大全语法一题

14. Books in European libearies last longer than books in libraties in the United States because, although the climate in Europe is fairly humid, libraries there are not subjedted to the exremes of temperature and humidity that damage collections in the United States.
A.because, although the climate in Europe is fairly humid, libraries there are not subjedted to the exremes of temperature and humidity that
B.because, although the climate in Europe is fairly humid, libraries there are not subjedted of the exremes of temperature and humidity as those that
C.because, although the climate in Europe is fairly humid, libraries there are not subjedted to the exremities of temperature and humidity as
D.because the climate in Europe is fairly humid, but libraries there are not subjedted to the exremes of temperature and humidity as


答案选A 我选的是C
我用排除法be subject to  用的是although the climate...就只剩下A和C
为什么不用as？as不是也有连词的作用么？

-- by 会员 葛佳 (2010/5/26 20:02:27)

as
若做连词用，应接完整句子
若表与……相同  应用As……as
若表作为  应接名词
C皆不符合上述用法


拓展一下
若C句改为：
Books in European libearies last longer than books in libraties in the United States because,
although the climate in Europe is fairly humid, libraries there are not subjedted to the same exremities of temperature and humidity as those that damage collections in the United States.
则漂亮

葛佳

A主要的错是两个并列的分词间没有连词，并且them和it本来都是指代驯鹿的，但是不一致。
C也是them和it的指代问题。并且and so这么一用变成了一个单句和结果从句并列了。并且in order多余。
one和it是有区别的。第一it可以指代不可数名词而one不可以。第二，it指代整个名词短语，而one是指代短语的中核心词。第三，也是最复杂的，it的指代是绝对替换而one不是。（第三点LZM的书说的清楚）建议可以去看看，属于基础知识。

-- by 会员 recoupsin (2010/5/26 21:50:45)

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第三点LZM的书说的清楚）建议可以去看看，属于基础知识。我用的是白勇的 没有找到 代词的用法。什么叫做it指代 绝对替换？是说用it代替核心词后之后就不用其本身了？ one我听xdf老师讲的是前面有N，后面用one 就容易歧义。这点一直不明白。请指教

jtrchina

Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style （A）were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from


我直接把正确答案贴上来了.. 当时排除B 是想着 also 是副词.. 感觉influenced 和inspired应该用and连接的...
（有点表达不清..）
我觉得我又出现语法知识的盲点了..请扫盲!

LZ好忙..

-- by 会员 cutewen (2010/5/26 22:51:30)

influenced是从句谓语，inspired是主句谓语，两者动作发出者不同，不可用and并列连接


若influenced 和inspired用and连接，则原句不完整，缺少谓语：
luegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists and also inspired many musicians,
including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.


whose开始直到句尾皆属从句，主句只剩luegrass musician Bill Monroe，故缺少谓语

jtrchina

The investigations of many psychologists and anthropologists support the generalization of there being little that is a significant difference in the underlying mental processes manifested by people from different cultures.

(A) of there being little that is a significant difference
(B) of there being little that is significantly different
(C) of little that is significantly different
(D) that there is little that is significantly different
(E) that there is little of significant differences


答案是D  我选的E
之前记得有老师说过要尽量不改变原句的含义和修饰关系。还特别说了significant和significantly最好是原文是啥 答案就是啥...

今天提了两个问题! 希望LZ有时间解答一下喔。辛苦了!

-- by 会员 cutewen (2010/5/26 23:02:35)

significant和significantly最好是原文是啥 答案就是啥...


出自XDF，十年前或许有用，然当今GMAT出题已越发灵活，经常并非若干细节便可解题，语义+原则是现今GMAT语法主流。相信一定多次碰到过正确选项违背一些所谓规则的情况吧


此题中，little of 不可修饰复数名词differences，若要使其正确，应改为few修饰
正确选项中little是名词，后接定从修饰

jtrchina

对不起，今天喝多了，明天解答。见谅~

-- by 会员 recoupsin (2010/5/27 0:31:10)

保重身体  
作为战友  替你接一会儿班
好好休息

-- by 会员 jtrchina (2010/5/27 7:39:23)

狐假虎威了一把
希望没有辜负recoupsin NN之盛名

Keep fit so u can keep fighting , My friend

leosnoon

求助大全语法一题

11. Researchers agreed that the study of now treatments for heart attach patients was extremly impotant but more research was needed to determine that balloon angiopasty preceded with ultrasound was or was not any better for heart atteck patients than the balloon procedure by itself.
A.more research was needed to determine that balloon angiopasty preceded with ultrasound was or was not any better for heart atteck patients than
B.more research was needed for determining whether or not balloon angiopasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart atteck patients than is
C.that more research was needed to determine whether balloon angiopasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart atteck patients than
D.that more research was needed to determine that balloon angiopasty preceded with ultrasound was any better for heart atteck patients than
E.that more research was needed for determining that balloon angiopasty preceded by ultrasound is or is not any better for heart atteck patients than is

key B

B中不是有 whether or not这个是重复吗？必错啊？有问题？

than 后面要接 is 只有B和E
E比b更累赘么？
还是有其他错误？

-- by 会员 葛佳 (2010/5/26 20:00:58)

其一：
whether or not 表达不简洁，但语法并无错误，相较正确性错误（主谓、平行并列等）只是有效性不够简洁，不足以作为排除依据。
GMAC越来越狡猾，许多中国培训机构总结的规律套路往往被其将计就计地设下圈套，把握原则，纵然题能千变万化，自以不变应万变。


其二：
E中，
determine that ……is or is not……表达十分笨拙，表达是否用whether

-- by 会员 jtrchina (2010/5/27 8:08:21)

同意！！感觉在做比较题时，有两个必须得步骤：一、对比对象是否可比，二、谓语是否补上。其次再看细节，in this case,                   ...was... any better for heart atteck patients than is ...

recoupsin

对不起，今天喝多了，明天解答。见谅~

-- by 会员 recoupsin (2010/5/27 0:31:10)

保重身体  
作为战友  替你接一会儿班
好好休息

-- by 会员 jtrchina (2010/5/27 7:39:23)

狐假虎威了一把
希望没有辜负recoupsin NN之盛名

Keep fit so u can keep fighting , My friend

-- by 会员 jtrchina (2010/5/27 8:49:22)

呵呵，谢谢啦，昨天我遇到了欧洲的六个教授，他们把我叫去喝酒了。结果他们告诉我说今天叫我带他们去酒吧，他们要去做禽兽。妈的~虽然他们付钱，但是我翻译都没有钱，不爽~

jtrchina

对不起，今天喝多了，明天解答。见谅~

-- by 会员 recoupsin (2010/5/27 0:31:10)

保重身体  
作为战友  替你接一会儿班
好好休息

-- by 会员 jtrchina (2010/5/27 7:39:23)

狐假虎威了一把
希望没有辜负recoupsin NN之盛名

Keep fit so u can keep fighting , My friend

-- by 会员 jtrchina (2010/5/27 8:49:22)

呵呵，谢谢啦，昨天我遇到了欧洲的六个教授，他们把我叫去喝酒了。结果他们告诉我说今天叫我带他们去酒吧，他们要去做禽兽。妈的~虽然他们付钱，但是我翻译都没有钱，不爽~

-- by 会员 recoupsin (2010/5/27 13:05:07)

恩准你今天做最后一天禽兽。。。
明天起要做回超人
G路漫漫


PS  不需要翻译吧。。。
    （心里想：难道LZ在给自己的欲望找个冠冕堂皇的理由。。。）


好了  不玷污这神圣的精华帖
最后一次歪楼

葛佳

（164）    T-4-Q12
For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of mild each per year.
A.    providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
B.    providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
C.    provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
D.    provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
E.    provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce

答案选E 我选的是D 为什么用将来时态》？