[原创]最后的UNC也被拒了，全军覆没。希望DX指点

dinno

Your English is not that good.And you do not know why MBA. Talk to more people.

Even get admitted, you should expect frustrations for your study in b-school and the job-searching.

hope08

以下是引用dinno在2008-3-22 8:41:00的发言：

Your English is not that good.And you do not know why MBA. Talk to more people.

Even get admitted, you should expect frustrations for your study in b-school and the job-searching.

晕了，你这个说的有点过了。

happyls

"China has so many talents of software engineering..............

楼主应该找人帮忙看essay，大概扫了一眼，第二局话就是GMAT语法考试的典型错句。China本身没有生命，不用has。For example, There is a dog in the room and the dog has 4 legs.

重考GMAT，如果你还有上名校的梦想。

祝你好运。

suvtong

我觉得MBA申请最重要的就是为什么别人会相信你能成功,你的理由不是很充分,大家相信你是一个有志青年,但是intel的工作说明不了什么问题,intel的工作职位很多,您是初级开发工程师,还是大区市场经理的经历对于申请的差别大得很.
我觉得你的工作经历需要和你的志向紧密结合.
我觉得这个可能需要加强吧.

QingHuang

Your English is not that good.And you do not know why MBA. Talk to more people.

Even get admitted, you should expect frustrations for your study in b-school and the job-searching.

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Guys, be nice to someone who needs advice, as well as encouragement and hope at this moment...
    

 

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RedEye

我从行业的角度来分析一下：
1）你在Intel工作，基本上是个hardware/chipset company,并且你工作了9年啦，这个时候，你突然跳出来说，要开个软件公司？我想，人家会认为你是头脑发热。
2）你一直在说微软，印度公司什么的，你肯定是想开家软件公司，来达到相同的成就，可是，你后面又说，要做software service,变成外包公司啦，中国的软件外包公司可是不少，为什么增加你一家，就会改变现在的局面呢？逻辑上面来说，有点不合理。

如果我是你，我会这么说，
你想帮助中国的‘龙芯’产业化，你在Intel学习了很多专业方面的知识，但是，你缺乏business knowledge,所以需要MBA

一家之言，希望有所帮助。

李大衛

you need to explain "why you"

why this logic is particular for you

what's your personal characteristics, passion, skill sets, experience...etc.

everything

what part of business knowledge?

be very specific

why the industrialization of chip needs you here?

why not others?

and why you need this mba?