[原创]最后的UNC也被拒了，全军覆没。希望DX指点

thli88

以下是引用李大衛在2008-3-19 2:34:00的发言：

GMAT 680很够了

没有具体方向790都一样被ding

九年经验又有大半在Intel如此全球代表企业

申请五间完全没有interview表示有critical problem in essays

即使还不用看太多细节也可想而知是没有具体生涯方向

也因此没有明确MBA动机

所以学校的特性媒合也无法个人化

再怎么有抱负没有细部实践方法都没用

至少楼主要熟悉MBA细部内容并能找出进修的必要性之后再申请

MBA原则上任何人都能念

包山包海无所不包

但落水三千只取一瓢饮

您要的是MBA里的哪几瓢



跟版主有相同建议

若楼主想知道有哪些原因遭拒

会需要请楼主将申请状况在不影响个人隐私的前提下做细部描述

才有办法分析

我觉得你说的很有道理， 所以我注册了MBA insider 在business week 上。上面有录取学生的Essay.的确写的不错。谢谢了

thli88

以下是引用飞过太平洋在2008-3-19 12:20:00的发言：

100％ESSAY出问题。

不是光有为青年人家就要的。

要有差异，突出自己。故事要讲的好。

大家看看我的Goal 是否有大漏洞：

I have a long term plan to build up my own software company in IT industry. China has so many talents of software engineering, but China dose not own world famous software companies. While, India’s software industry have boomed up and cultivated many well-known native software firms, such as InfoSys and Satyam. On the other side, foreign software and solution companies, such as SAP, Oracle and Microsoft ,almost occupied China’s software industry. Ironically, they hosted their R&D centers in China and hired a bunch of Chinese engineers. I aspire to take the responsibility to alter the situation and foster a world-class software service provider from China.

 

For this goal, first of all, I should build and sharpen my business capabilities before 35 years old. In Intel, I inspired my potential and learned a lot about various leadership styles, effective team work, customer orientation, and business operation. Especially, Intel’s open and global working environment cultivated me to be a pro-active and initiative guy with global thinking. However, only a MBA program can offer me systematic business management trainings to improve my general skill-sets of international business operation. Secondly, I need a business co-partner, who are smart and passion. In a top MBA school, it will be easy to get this task done. Thirdly, I should find out the venture capital to support the setup of my business. So I prefer study in US for my MBA program, where it is relatively easier to get capital support.

Chajas10

说句实话, No aspriation in your goal.

还有一点: my own software company in IT industry? 但是不够具体. 这样说感觉是个外包的软件公司...

Chajas10

你的背景真的不错, 如果可能, GMAT重新考, ESSAY好好写. 明年一定会有收获的.

thli88

以下是引用Chajas10在2008-3-19 17:35:00的发言：
说句实话, No aspriation in your goal.

还有一点: my own software company in IT industry? 但是不够具体. 这样说感觉是个外包的软件公司...

有道理。看来加入一个申请的workshop是非常有用的。彼此可以互相发现问题。要知道，自己是很难发现自己的弱点。

parfour

thli88：老大，你是高人啊！

李施德林

你的短信已回复。

Friskies

以下是引用thli88在2008-3-19 17:10:00的发言：

大家看看我的Goal 是否有大漏洞：

I have a long term plan to build up my own software company in IT industry. China has so many talents of software engineering, but China dose not own world famous software companies. While, India’s software industry have boomed up and cultivated many well-known native software firms, such as InfoSys and Satyam. On the other side, foreign software and solution companies, such as SAP, Oracle and Microsoft ,almost occupied China’s software industry. Ironically, they hosted their R&D centers in China and hired a bunch of Chinese engineers. I aspire to take the responsibility to alter the situation and foster a world-class software service provider from China.

For this goal, first of all, I should build and sharpen my business capabilities before 35 years old. In Intel, I inspired my potential and learned a lot about various leadership styles, effective team work, customer orientation, and business operation. Especially, Intel’s open and global working environment cultivated me to be a pro-active and initiative guy with global thinking. However, only a MBA program can offer me systematic business management trainings to improve my general skill-sets of international business operation. Secondly, I need a business co-partner, who are smart and passion. In a top MBA school, it will be easy to get this task done. Thirdly, I should find out the venture capital to support the setup of my business. So I prefer study in US for my MBA program, where it is relatively easier to get capital support.

第一段啰唆

第二段似乎大家都是这么几个理由，是不是招办的人看多了也没感觉了？

shirley_0123

是不是强调工作经验会好些啊.如果申请MBA的话.工作应该是很重要的吧

飞过太平洋

 1,没有激情。要写道你自己看了心潮澎湃，高潮迭起。其他人看了才能有感觉。

2， 找PARTNER和找VC，如果这个是来商学院的原因，人家会觉得太小儿科了。你来就为了找个人跟你一起干啊。。。。。。汗啊。

你不来商学院，也照样可以做到。干嘛要来？

唯一一个跟商学院有关的又说的太笼统，简单一句系统训练就过了？

要深挖你现在的经验学识和你的GOAL之间的差距，而这些差距又是商学院能给你弥补的。

3， In Intel, I inspired my potential and learned a lot about various leadership styles, effective team work, customer orientation, and business operation. Especially, Intel’s open and global working environment cultivated me to be a pro-active and initiative guy with global thinking.

这是时候是说缺点补漏的时候，就没必要再继续夸自己了。你都LEARNED A LOT，还来？

这点我不太确定，看其他人意见了。

前两点我很确定。嘿嘿