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正儿八经潜水 · 发表于 2012-9-13 12:44:36

正儿八经潜水 · 发表于 2012-9-13 21:53:55

9月14日独立
Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in thepast?

Our major difference between this era and the previous times in the emphasis on education,which naturally give rise to an issue of whether people are easier to become educated than in the past.My reflection on the relevant elements of this issue as well as my experiences leads me to hold a positive attitude towards the assertion that people are indeed now easier to be educated than in the past.After all,nowadays,people may have the choice of being educated at home by using technology such as computers or televisions as education software becomes better and better.

The first reason coming to my mind is that being educated at home using computers and televisions allows for more flexibility.People can adjust their study schedule to match the time of day when they are most alert.They can also progress through the lessons at their own pace.For example,clever people will be able to advance more quickly,and the slower ones can take more time to gain a deeper understanding of the material before moving on to the next lesson.Therefore,people are easier to become educated now.

Equally important is the fact that home-based education is safer and it saves precious time and money.Many traditional schools can no longer offer a safe and healthy education environment.For instance,when people go to traditional schools,they may face the daily dangers of being involved in traffic accidents.It’s sad but true.Being educated at home also saves on transportation time and a lot of money,which can be better spent studying.Thus, people are easier to become educated now.

In addition to the above reasons,another noteworthy reason is that a home-based education system will help our society achieve equality in education.All people,no matter what district they live in,will receive the same quality of instruction,especially for people who are disabled.Of course,people in rural areas can attend classes with those in cites,all without having to leave their house or hometown.It is,in the sense,reasonable to say that people are easier to become educated now.

Taking into account the above analysis,we may safely come to the conclusion that people are now easier to become educated than in the past ,because nowadays home-based education is more flexible and safe and it saves precious time and money.It also helps us achieve equality in education.

ioioke · 发表于 2012-9-15 02:53:11

Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in thepast?

Our major difference between this era and the previous times in the emphasis on education,which naturally give rise to an issue of whether people are easier to become educated than in the past.My reflection on the relevant elements of this issue as well as my experiences leads me to hold a positive attitude towards the assertion that people are indeed now easier to be educated than in the past.After all,nowadays,people may have the choice of being educated at home by using technology such as computers or televisions as education software becomes better and better.

The first reason coming to my mind is that being educated at home using computers and televisions allows for more flexibility(从句里面没有宾语，加个us 如何).People can adjust their study schedule to match the time of day when they are most alert.They can also progress through the lessons at their own pace.For example,clever people will be able to advance more quickly,and the slower ones can take more time to gain a deeper understanding of the material before moving on to the next lesson.Therefore,people are easier to become educated now.

Equally important is the fact that home-based education is safer and it saves precious time and money.Many traditional schools can no longer offer a safe and healthy education environment.Forinstance,when people go to traditional schools,they may face the daily dangers of being involved in traffic accidents.It’s sad but true.Being educated at home also saves on transportation time and a lot of money,which can be better spent （on）studying.Thus, people are easier to become educated now.（这句话和上一段的最后一句话是相同的，建议换一种说法）

In addition to the above reasons,another noteworthy reason is that a home-based education system will help our society achieve equality in education.（句子开头的reason有点重复，建议去掉一个）All people,no matter what district they live in,will receive the same quality of instruction,especially for people who are disabled.Of course,people in rural areas can attend classes with those in cites,all without having to leave their house or hometown.It is,in the sense,reasonable to say that people are easier to become educated now.

Taking into account the above analysis,we may safely come to the conclusion that people are now easier to become educated than in the past ,because nowadays home-based education is more flexible and safe and it saves precious time and money.It also helps us achieve equality in education.

总结，结构很明确，最后总结也很好。童鞋很多地方句号，逗号后面没有空格。这个要注意。

正儿八经潜水 · 发表于 2012-9-15 07:03:25

哈。谢谢。你们改的真早，夜里都不睡觉的。。

ioioke · 发表于 2012-9-15 12:29:22

我在北美，有时差，要是那次改晚了，别介意哈。

正儿八经潜水 · 发表于 2012-9-15 17:05:38

哈。原来如此。第一段第一句不是个句子，还有第三段第一句没有主语，你木有看出来呀

shatong424 · 发表于 2012-9-15 19:56:38

本人看了一下，没太看懂，先发一份你这篇作文的翻译，我在看看。觉得论证的内容上有问题

正儿八经潜水 · 发表于 2012-9-15 20:46:30

请问哪里不懂呢？结构还是意思？应该很好理解呀

简单说一下中间三段：
1、灵活性更高，自主安排学习时间，调节课程进度。聪明的人学得快，迟钝的人学得慢。
2、安全经济，节省时间。不会遇到车祸，省时间金钱花在学习上。
3、全社会教育机会均等，无论住哪儿，可以接受相同教育。残疾人，农村学生。

正儿八经潜水 · 发表于 2012-9-15 20:48:10

9月15日独立
Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while othersthink they should spend more time educating students. What is your view?

Nowadays it is widely acknowledged that university professors have played an essential role in people’s life, especially in university students’ life. As a result, the question is often raised as to whether university professors should spend more time doing research or educating students. To this question, people’s opinions vary, with some claiming that it is much better to spend more time doing research and others holding that pend more time educating students is a better choice. Taking into account the major factors involved, I cast my vote for the former opinion because it could benefit the students as well as the world in general and this essay will explore the reasons for my stance.

The first reason coming to my mind is that the research could have great influences on the real world could one day lead to great breakthroughs, such as a cure for cancer or a solution to global warming. If that is the case, then the average life span of people will be longer and the earth will be more comfortable to live on with the better environment. It, therefore, seems fair that university professors should spend more time doing research than educating students.

What is equally important is the fact that if a professor’s research was successful it could benefit the university and the students in two ways. On the one hand, the university would be able to receive grants and funding to continue with further research. This money would help the university improve their research facilities, which would benefit the students who use these facilities. On the other hand, the recognition of the research would improve the reputation and standing of the university, which is something that would also benefit the students who studied there by association. Thus, I absolutely believe that spending more time doing research is a better choice for university professors.

In addition to the above reasons, another point I want to make about this topic is that a professor who continues to do research is more aware of recent developments and is kept at the forefront of the field. This will make the professor a more knowledgeable teacher. The professor is also more likely to be a more enthusiastic teacher because he or she will be excited about the new discoveries when sharing them with students. It is,in the sense,reasonable to say that it is more important for university professors to do research rather than to educate students.

Taking into account the above analysis,we may safely come to the conclusion that university professors should spend more time doing research, because a successful research can have great influences on the real world and benefit the university as well as the students. Of course, students will be educated by more knowledgeable professors.

shatong424 · 发表于 2012-9-15 21:03:04

我拿word 给你改的回帖显示不出来我给你改的地方你给留给Q 我给你发过去吧

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