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pengxudong

wanggang0411 发表于 2013-9-10 14:45
9月9日 综合 TPO4

The passage shows several considerable evidences to provethat dinosaur were endoth ...

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sherryv

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wanggang0411

9月10日 独立写作 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement --It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise.

People are always wondering which way isbetter to relax, reading a book or doing physical exercise. If there is onepreference, which I take, leave to make conclusion, then it is doing physicalexercise, rather than reading a book, that could relax not only my body butalso my mind. There are widespread testimonies for it and the primary ones arelisted as follows.

The foremost reason for doing physicalexercise is the healthy life and strong body provided by daily workout. Arecently research about the most successful people shows that one of the vitalfeatures for their success is their infinity energy, which could support theirovertime work day in and day out, and ensure them making right decision underheavy pressure. How could they keep full of energy under such inhuman workload? Doing physical exercise. A survey just shows that people who exercisemore than 14 hours a week could live longer than those do not.

In contrast, the obvious thing brought bywatching a movie or reading a book after heavy work or study is myopia. Inchina, 75% students have myopia and this number has increased since 1970 whenTV become common in each family, and jumped even faster in 1996 when personalcomputer spreads widely in whole society. Therefore, I believe it's notappropriate to let students to keep using their tired eyes after heavy study.

Admittedly, watching a movie could relaxpeople's mind, and reading a book could increase people's knowledge. How satisfactoryand refreshing it could be to watch a movie or read a book in the peacefulevening after a tiring day. Hardly anyone could resist the comfortable sofa andwarm bed.

Nevertheless, the fact that watching amovie makes people more delightful and reading a movie makes people moreintelligence should not prevent us from concluding that doing physical exerciseis more visionary as well as healthful and placing a certain amount of relianceon the notion that physical exercise is always the sensible choice.

wanggang0411

9月10日 综合 TPO5

The passage lists several possible purposes of these massive stone buildings, and provides looked convincing explanation to support each hypothesis. However, the lecture completely refutes all of these hypotheses by listing its arguments as follows:



For the hypothesis of purely residential, because there no enough fire place for hundreds of people to cook, and neither enough room for such numbers of people to live, it is un-convincing to conclude that these massive stone buildings were purely residential.



Regarding to the second theory about the purpose of grain maize storage, the lecture lists several evidence to refute it. First, although the rooms are large enough to store quite amount of grain maize, no spills of grain maize could be found. Secondly, if these rooms were used to store grain maize, some remained containers should be found. However, no container exists in this place.



Finally, compared with ceremonial centers, these great houses is more likely to be a trash station, since besides the pots, other building materials such as stone and sand are also revealed. Furthermore, the pots do not necessarily for festive meals, but for the meal of construction workers.

Therefore, all hypothesis made by passage have been rejected by lecture.

wanggang0411

9月11日 独立写作
父母應該多陪孩子玩遊戲或體育運動，還是陪孩子做和學校學習有關的事情

Parents are always wondering which side is more important toaccompany their children, physical exercise or study relevant. As for me, bothof these affairs are not mutual exclusive, but equal important and evensupplementing each other. There are widespread testimonies for this principaland the primary ones are listed as follows.

From common sense, we have known that education is importantfor the development of young child, and that study is essential way for thedevelopment of human's brain. Therefore, parents should spend more time toaccompany their children on study. First, the young child has weak self-controlability, thus, without the supervision from elders, they would lose focus onthe study and hang on somewhere else. Second, parents just like the captain ofa sailing boat, with their guidance, the advantage and disadvantage of childcould be found earlier in the childhood, and then the child could be on a rightway according to his or her advantage. I could still remember that when I wasyoung my mother found me excellence on math then she encouraged me to joinOlympic math class, so I could become a math teacher today. Without her, itcould be possible that I'm still pondering on my direction.

On the other side, parents should not ignore the importanceof spending time on physical exercise and game with their children, sinceseveral indispensable benefits could be gained from these activities. Forexample, the intimacy, playing game is a good way to increase intimacy betweenparents and children. Under such activity, their relationship could become teammate; therefore, they could know each other more closely, relieving the gapbetween two generations. Besides that, physical exercise is another chance forparents to find out whether their children have sports or athletes talent. AnotherMichel Jordan or Tiger Woods could grow up from your back garden.

Admittedly, some people would argue that spending time withtheir children on physical exercise is much important than on study,  and vice versa, because they believe thatthey know their children more than children themself, or that their childrenshould grow up in a predefined way. However, how could these parents know thattheir children are quite good on football if they did spend with their childrenon the ground, and how could they know that their children will become famousscientists on any specific area if they didn't seat with them and reviewedtheir homework.

Therefore, from what has been discussed, I could confidentlydraw a conclusion that both physical exercise and homework deserve parents tospend time with their children. And any presumption about the features of childrenshould make parents losing balance on these two sides.

wanggang0411

9月11日 综合 TPO6
The passage refers several evidence to compare the value between traditional encyclopedias and the communal online encyclopedias, and then makes a conclusion that the former has much higher valuable than the latter. However, the lecture completely disagrees with the passage by refuting each evidence made by passage one by one.

In the first place, the lecture believes that it is unfair to criticize the errors existed in communal online encyclopedias, because there is no perfect encyclopedias online or offline. Furthermore, even if there is an error in online encyclopedias, it could be fixed quickly. In contrast, such error would take decade to be corrected in traditional encyclopedias.

Another point referred by passage is about the security issue existed in Communal online encyclopedias. Whereas the lecture cites several methods or strategies to relieve such concern. For example, nobody could change the factual article that nobody disputes. Besides that, special editors will supervise all modification on communal online articles.

Regarding the trivial and popular topics mentioned in the passage, the lecture believes that online topics reflect public interest rather than some limited and biased opinion, and such diversity is an important advantage of communal online encyclopedias. In contrast, the content listed in traditional encyclopedias is limited by space and discriminately determined by some specific people.

苦大仇深的Lexi

wanggang0411 发表于 2013-9-12 22:08
9月11日 综合 TPO6
The passage refers several evidence to compare the value between traditional encyc ...

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wanggang0411

9月12日 独立: 是否同意政府不应该给艺术家(musician, filmmaker, artist...) 任何 financial support.


正文: 写的好好慢啊~~~~什么时候才能上400啊.....谁能提供个高端大气上档次的万能模板, 我背背呢~~~

Regarding the question whether government should suspend thefinancial support for artist such as musician and filmmaker, some peopledisagree with this proposal, while others stand on the opposite side. From my personalperspective, I believe that various factors should be taken into account beforewe make any judgment.

To begin with, the economic development and living standardof artists are various in different countries, in different areas and evengenerations, therefore, government should make the decision based oncomprehensive investigation. For example, the film industry is quite matured inmy country, and the whole ecology is healthy and flourishing. Everybody goes tocinema each weekend, so director could make any their idea come true withoutconsidering any financial factors, and, in turn, actors, male and female, couldfind job easily, and most of them live in big houses and drive luxurycars.  Therefore it doesn't make sensefor government in my country to further supports film industry.

On the other hand, compared with the flourish in filmindustry, musical industry suffered the harshest winter this decade. By thelack of article education, people rarely listens classic music, not evenmention to go the theater. While less interest on classic music does notnecessarily mean more customer in popular music. Popular music is alsosuffering this decade because people could download everything they want from internetfor free. Therefore, I strongly disagree with the proposal about suspendingfinancial support for artists, in contrast, much more efforts and resourceshould be provided to support those artists who are struggling on theircareers.

Admittedly, there are many other aspects, such as educationfees and elder insurance should deserve more attention by government. In mycountry, many students in rural part are still studying in the camp, and manyelders are still living below the social living standard.

Nevertheless, the fact that parts of people in my countryneed help should not prevent government from taking care others who are also strugglingto survive, and placing a certain amount of reliance on the notion that theutility of resources need to be balanced.

wanggang0411

9月12日 综合

TPO 7
The passage casts doubt on the probability that wood companies in the United States will adopt ecologically friendly practices to receive the ecocertification. However, the lecture relieves such concern by refuting the evidence the passage provides one by one.

To begin with, the lecture believes that the customers in United States do have the ability to distinguish the authorities among different certifications, specifically for these ecocertificationes issued by independent organizations. Whereas the passage holds an opposite view, with the consideration that so many cheating or susceptible labels are existed in American market.

Furthermore, the passage concerns that the additional cost will make companies losing customers. However the lecture points that the prince margin of American customer is larger than that considered by passage. Thus, if the price of certificated products is not higher too much than other products, then the customers will be interested on other factors such as ecological friendly.

Finally, regarding the motivation of American companies to keep up with the developments in the rest of the world, the lecture argues conclusively that if the American would fall behind other foreign companies, then by the interesting on the ecological products, American customers will buy the foreign ecocertificated products, which local American companies could not provide.

pengxudong

wanggang0411 发表于 2013-9-12 15:35
9月11日 独立写作
父母應該多陪孩子玩遊戲或體育運動，還是陪孩子做和學校學習有關的事情

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