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neverback

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and
landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the
first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life
and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who
became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the
peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in
1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in
1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about
the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in
1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909
becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

MINE C

ANS D

请指教

爱维的天

(C) in addition to用法错，不可用替换also。

爱维的天

﹙E﹚和﹙D﹚比，那儿不好了，是as..吗?

rings

becoming应为became

爱维的天

以下是引用rings在2004-12-20 13:50:00的发言：
becoming应为became

谢谢rings的回答，可是若用became不就变成run-on sentence

用became的话，它的主语是谁呢?

rings

我的意思是在"becoming"这样的用法比较少见,因为become本身就是一种状态了,故一般使用became的形式,呵呵

leemike0928

我選A耶!!有誰可以告訴我A錯在哪????

leemike0928

我覺得A好像有修辭誤置,跟OG有一題火山爆發,那題類似Turning away from literary realism to.................., in 1909...........became thefirst woman   再討論

micht

A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life
and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who
became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

我覺得A的問題是 in 1909

Turning away from literary realism to.................., in 1909...........became thefirst woman

到底 1909 發生前面的事 or 後面的事?

我感覺有雙向修飾

請nn幫我確認 thanks

leemike0928

up up ....這題有點像OG的火山在信紙裡爆發的題目....請在確認