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Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life andlandscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerl was the novelist who became thefirst woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories aboutthe peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerl turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
謝謝各位NN..
但我作到這題是選(E)
請教高手思路指導我下列疑點..謝謝!!

1.a novelist who...這不是限定用法嗎??
為何不用the novelist who...
用As a novelist有什麼不好嗎??
2.....,in 1909修飾becoming我覺得ok啊..請教如何看出雙向修飾?
3.若我硬要選E,請問這裡的in 1909 becoming可否解成由輕到重?
即As a novelist, S.L (in 1909 becoming the first....Literature ) turned away from...and wrote romantic...Sweden.

remona9t

我觉得A还有一个修饰歧义的问题，就是in 1909,在A中1909，是修饰后面的整个句子，而在D中in 1909做状语，修饰became,简洁，明确

我看到E就排除了，E改变了文章的重心（将从句/分词结构变为svo结构），文章的重点是她获得nobel prize这个事实，而不是他的写作方向；我认为，as a novelist并不是E的错误

yukon

还有就是：正如the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win ，第一个做某事的人the first sb to do sth是固定用法

gigiga0118

這題我選C

我還是不大能分辨in addition to 與and also的差異點

longman:

in addition to: sth add to a piece of information

如果番成中文: 在1990年她成為第一個女性外加第一個swedish作家....

正確選項D   : 她在1990年代時成為第一位女性而且也是第一個Swedish的作家ˋ

天阿~~~我打出來後覺得兩者的意思都不對

原文應該是要表達"她在1990年成為第一位女性作家吧".....

另外,個人觀點

C錯在明明是同一個主語,用了,and變成兩個獨立句子

A was also更將 women 跟 writer分割,邏輯上不對

E 沒用from A to B

  反到用了from A and B-->感覺像是from (A and B)

  還用了that去形容人......

Avantasia

Tianshan-4-Q4:

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern LACE>SwedenLACE>, in 1909 LACE>SelmaLACE> Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A.        Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern LACE>SwedenLACE>, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

B.        She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern LACE>SwedenLACE>, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won

C.        Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern LACE>SwedenLACE>, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning

D.       A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

E.        As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

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这题似乎公认的答案是D, 但是who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life有这种用法? 感觉from...to是个固定的搭配, 要求平行, 但是怎么to后面还有个write! 去掉write这选项是最好的, 可写成这样我觉得有问题.

另外D的时间状语位置我觉得有点怪, OG里面有个解释好像和它冲突:

92. Never before had taxpayers confronted so many

changes at once as they had in the Tax Reform Act of 1986.

(A)  so many changes at once as they had in

(B)  at once as many changes as

(C)  at once as many changes that there were with

(D)  as many changes at once as they confronted in

(E)   so many changes at once that confronted them in

Choice D is the best answer, Choices B and C awkwardly place at once between confronted and its direct object, changes.

我自己理解的答案是E, 解决了上面两个问题, 至于the first sth to do这个结构我觉得不是强调重点, E的说法可以接受, 请指教.

SuperSherry

嗯，同意Avantasia的说法，窃以为D和E句子结构上都没有问题，只是这个who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life实在是有些奇怪。如果该成who turned away from literary realism to romantic stories about the peasant life就更好了。所以当时选了E

beechanooi

I think the right answer is E.

A,C,D all have a common mistake: turned/turning away from literary realism to write romatic stories... Here, the from ... to ... reqires two parallel nouns. Whereas E changed the structure to turned away from ... and wrote ..., completes the parallel of two verbs, and is more close to the logical meaning. This parallel of two verbs also make the sentence more balanced. Although B also adopts this correct structure, the "She..., and novelist Selma" creates redundancy of the subjects. Thus only E is the best answer.

horsefish

E中the first Swedish writer that won..., 用who才好. 答案是D. D中的to write不是接from的介词to.

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-9-25 9:05:27编辑过]

mmfoolish

同意25和27楼，请问from...to...是否需要用平行结构呢？似乎C中from...to...没有平行，请问这样可以麽？似乎平行结构ets很讨厌。请指正！

foreinter

开始我也觉得不好，但是看到其他选项都是to write，也就没管他了