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roric

以下是引用rings在2004-12-20 14:27:00的发言：
我的意思是在"becoming"这样的用法比较少见,因为become本身就是一种状态了,故一般使用became的形式,呵呵

看到这里已经昏了，问一句吧：这个becoming要怎么改才行？

偶想偷懒了，想不动了

findjuhl

Selma Ottiliana Lovisa Lagerlöf  novelist who in 1909 became the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

原文

http://www.britannica.com/eb/article-9046830

chang2301

D的結構很明顯的是分裂結構

在verb跟object中間插入modifier

這對ETS而言是awkward且無法忽略的錯誤

所以如果考試時要仔細看題

說不定是題目有誤

如果題目沒有錯誤

我覺得選C比較好

因為如果只是in addition囉唆的錯誤

總比一個awkward的結構來的好

open to discuss...

ptr07

E that should be replaced with who

ptr07

C winning means win a lot of time ??

kaochieh

（1）   T-4-Q4

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

 

A.       Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

 

B.       She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlof in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won

and必錯

 

C.      Selma Lagerlof was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909
                    she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning

the first…不是修飾Selma Lagerlof…應該是novelist

 

D.      A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909
                    the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

who turned away… 不是修飾novelist…應該是Selma Lagerlof做的動作

the first…不是修飾Selma Lagerlof…應該是novelist

 

E.       As a novelist, Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909
                    becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

the first…不是修飾Selma Lagerlof…應該是novelist

to win 及 in 1909 也都有問題!

zhch1222

我的理解：
become the first woman是发生在1909，而win the Noble Prize不是，所以将in 1909 放在the first woman前面，而A和C将in 1909提前有歧义。

ycgxx

这里to不是与from搭配的，所以不构成平行结构。。。

turn 。。。to do sth...另外， the first 后面只能加to do， becoming 是不对的。

另外还要注意句子中心的问题。。。

ycgxx

findjhl 好强。。。找到了原文。。。

夜凉如水

A.      Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

1 句子强调重心变化

2 时间状语位置不佳

3 并列分句逻辑意思有歧义。