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    Perhaps no issue is talked about as commonly as working efficiency .In the current society,as people find soma many affairs to deal with,raising working efficiency has been proposed as a method of tremendous importance.At the same time,the topic about whether dealing with  the project one after another is better than the methods to handle on several projects meanwhile has raised to a heated debate.As for my point of view,I,who usually goes through a difficult time concentratingon a "big event ",think it's better to concentrate on several projects simultaneously.    On top of my argument,I think sometimes we can attain extra exceptional inspiration for one event from another seemingly unrelated project.For example.when I'm struggling with my maths problems and hardly find any solution in high school,I tend to stop to read my Chinese test book for a while.After that,amazing things happen.When I restarted answering the maths problems,I prone to interpret the problems from a creative perspective,which,in turn,give birth to an innovative solution.I think the analogy is valid when comparing the different subjects to different projects.    In addition,It might help save a lot of time compared with the former choices.First,it's highly doubtful that one can finish a high quality  of project in a short time.Someone might argue that the quality of project usually depends on the amount of time spent on it.However,the argument is highly doubtful without ruling out other possibilities factors.For example.it's entirely possible that one can take into account all the details in such a concentrating time.Nevertheless,if people handle on several projects at a time,it's likely that they have plenty of time to perfect their design.As you know,many creative thought tends to come out when people are not working.So the longer time internal they have to finish the project,the more likely they can handle on a extraordinary outcome.   Last but not the least,it 's more scientifically reasonable to do the latter choice according to how our brain work.Scientific analysis shows that assigning our brains to different task at a given time increase the efficiency our brains work.On the contrary,if our brain work on the same topic for a whole day,there's a great tendency that we think mechanically.   After ruminating all the factors,the inspiration we get,the comparably less time we take and the better compliance to the working mechanism of our brains are all compelling justifications for the superiority of multitasking .Of course how to arrange our time during the work also makes a difference.Only with a scientific schedule can be get a pleasing outcome.

viviyl

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viviyl 发表于 2013-3-31 12:38
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viviyl

huangtan 发表于 2013-3-31 13:00
tpo6

楼主偏心 ，咋不看看我的

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viviyl 发表于 2013-3-31 12:38
放word里面了，每次粘贴过来都没高亮了。这次用word看吧~

多谢了哈

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    4.1独立
    Perhaps no issue is talked about as commonly as life quality throughout the world .Today,as more and more people have felt tremendous pressure in the city and decide to move to a small town for a comparatively more stressless life,the topic whether living in a small town or in a big city is more salutary has raised a heated debate.In my point of view,with systematic thinking,I have a particular preference for life in a big city.

    On top of my argument,people are prone to find a desirable occupation in a big city.With various industries and countless corporations in badly need of skilled employees,you must be able to find your position,whether in a restaurant or in a financial business.Nevertheless,the thing is extreme different in the small town,where the development is stagnant and not much employment are necessary.You might even face difficulties to find something you are engaged in.

   In addition,people in big cities tend to have a higher-level inclusion of the outside culture.Take Shanghai for example,restaurant selling different type of food from throughout the nation can be found nowheres.You can see people praying in the European church as well as people listening the Peking Operation.What's more,in Shanghai,a significant portion of people come from different regions thus you can have a taste of diverse culture freely  Nevertheless,it is more than rare in a small town,where mainly the native people consists the whole population.What's more,if you don't behave as most people in town did,they probably regard you as someone breaking their tradition

   Further more,a variety of entertainment and convenient transportation are more accessible in a big city.In the evening,you can sing in a KTV,shopping around the downtown,or watch a movie,while in a small town where few recreations are accessible,you might be forced to sleep early at night after watch some boring soap operas.And if you want to visit a famous traveling place,in a big city you have direct flight towards it,while you may be struggling even to reach the destination

   After my ruminating all the elements,the larger change to find a ideal job,the more inclusion of culture,the easier access to entertainment and convenient transportation  are all compelling justifications for the superiority of living in a large city.Admittedly,in facet of air condition or noises,town might attains an competition edge,while taking all the ingredient into consideration,I think the overall living condition in a big city is more wonderful.

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   4.2独立
   Perhaps no issue is talked about as commonly as friendship by people throughout the world.As nowadays people still tend to turn to their friends for help,the topic concerning whether the advice from your  friends who are older than you is more valuable to the counterpart who are at your age has raised a heated debate.In my point of view,under most circumstances,I have a preference to ask the former friends for assist.

   On top of my argument,people older than us are prone to attaining more diverse experience than us,thus making their suggestion of higher reference value.What we are facing today probably is what the experience several years ago.And whether they succeeded or failed,certain valuable experience must have drawn from the past event.They might understand what we thought as they did years ago.For example,when I just enter the university three years ago,I have no knowledge about the various university life so I ask my brother Tom for suggestion on what should I do in my first year. Tom told me to have a taste of everything in campus ,like diverse association,Student Union while studying hard on my lessons ,and finally figure out where my interest lies.I did what he told me,and now I find my hobbies of photoing and  how to balance time  between academic study and after-class activities.

   In addition,the older have a great tendency to stay calm and thought rationally while our peers can be as imprudent and narrow-seeing as us.Our older friends reflect their former life more than us and know what is important or unimportant.For example,one day when I was in middle school,I had a intense quarrel with one of my best friends and then we didn't speak to each other for the following three months.I ask friends of my age about this,they simply advice me to wait for the apology,without doing anything.But Bob told me to analyze the problems between us and to have a talk with the friend.Luckily,I accepted what my brother told me and talked calmly with my best friends,then intimacy between us returned.We are still best friends now and  have a phone talk frequently.So,what if I accept the imprudent suggestion my peers offer me?I can not imagine.

   Further more,people older than us can consider a matter from a different perspective from us due to their broader horizon,while people of my ages probably think no further than I do.

   After my ruminating all the factors,the richer experience they have, the more mature characteristic they have,and different opinion they can offer from different perspective,are all compelling justifications for the superiority of people's suggestion who are older than us.Only if I get my advice from them,I would become much more successful now.

viviyl

4.2独立
   Perhaps no issue is talked about as commonly as friendship bypeople throughout the world. As nowadays people still tend to turn to theirfriends for help, the topic concerning whether the advice fromyour  friends who are older than you is more valuable to thecounterpart who are at your age has raised a heated debate. In my point ofview, under most circumstances, I have a preference to ask the former friendsfor assist.

   On top of my argument, people older than us are prone to attainingmore diverse experience than us, thus making their suggestion of higherreference value. What we are facing today probably is what the experienceseveral years ago. And whether they succeeded or failed, certain valuableexperience must have drawn from the past event(s).They might understand what we thought as they did years ago. For example, whenI just enter(ed) the university three years ago,I have(had) no knowledge about the variousuniversity life so I ask my brother Tom for suggestion on what should I do inmy first year. Tom told me to have a taste of everything in campus ,likediverse association(s), Student Union while studyinghard on my lessons ,and finally figure out wheremy interest lies.(如果用非谓语，句子的主语还是TOM，建议写完整的从句)I did what he told me, and now I find my hobbies ofphotoing(photograghing) and  how tobalance time  between academic study and after-class activities.

   In addition, the older have a great tendency to stay calm andthought(think) rationally while our peers can beas imprudent and narrow-seeing as us. Ourolder friends reflect their former life more than us and know what is importantor unimportant(minor). Forexample, one day when I was in middle school, I had a(an)intense quarrel with one of my best friends and then we didn't speak to eachother for the following three months. I ask(ed)friends of my age about this, they simply advice(advised)me to wait for the apology,(逗号去掉) without doing anything. But Bob, a friend older than me, told me to analyze theproblems between us and to have a talk with the friend. Luckily, I acceptedwhat my brother told me and talked calmly with my best friends, then intimacybetween us returned. We are still best friends now and  have a phonetalk(call each other)frequently. So, what if I accept the imprudent suggestion my peers offer(ed) me? I can not imagine.

   Further more, people older than us can consider a matter from adifferent perspective(s) from us due to theirbroader horizon, while people of(at) my agesprobably think no further than I do.

   After my ruminating all the factors, the richer experience theyhave, the more mature characteristic they have, and different opinion(s) they can offer from different perspective, are allcompelling justifications for the superiority of people's suggestion(suggestions from people) who are older than us. Onlyif I get my advice from them, I would become much more successful now.

注意一下语法。观点和论证还不错~

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    4.3 独立
      Perhaps no issue is talked about as commonly as environmental protection throughout the world.Nowadays, as more and more gasoline and electricity is being consumed each year in large quantity,in reference to the comparatively limited amount of the total power,the topic whether increasing prices of the gasoline and electricity is the only effective way to encourage energy conservation has raised to a heated debate.In my point of view,the only is definitely no.I deem that a careful review of the energy industry and the consumption of the energy will reveal the answer.

    On top of my standpoint,those proponents for the increase in price probably don't consider other possible ingredients for encouraging energy conservation.That is other methods can also play an essentially important role in supporting the energy conservation.There could be other possibility that  the former proposed method doesn't work at all.For example,the increasing price in our town in recent years does not coincide with a decrease in consumption of those energy.Virtually,the past several years has seen rapidly increasing amount of cars on the road,which seem never affected by the increase of  price.

    In addition,as mentioned above,to increase the number of programme in the TV and radio about the necessity and urgence for energy conservation might actually work.It is a favourable way for people to realize how their extremely large consumption of energy  is indirectly damaging the balance of the environment and what they can do to compensate for the loss.Those programs could encourage people to entirely turn down the electricity equipment or to go out by car only when necessary.As we know,what people think will largely affect their behaviour.So setting a concept of always saving energy and protecting the environment around can be,if not better,as efficient as increasing the price.

   Further more,increasing the price of certain energy might actually damage the welfare of a large portion of people.As is clear to see,the policy of increasing price is apt to limit the use for the rich,who must continue their life style,due to the comparatively low cost for them.While the majority of middle-classes are not that fortunate,who have to think twice before using those convenience facility,like cars,air conditions.For example,a person may take on several buses for 3 hours to a destination to save money,which,otherwise,could be reached within one and a half hour by car.So such policy is bound to affect the life level of mid-class people.
   
   After my analysis,the real effectiveness of the former policy,the merit of its alternative,and the potential detriment it could cause are all compelling justifications for the uncertainty of increasing the price.If the government are to insist the policy,more research have to be done to demonstrate its superiority.

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   4.4独立   
   Perhaps no issue is talked about as commonly as decision making throughout the world.As everyone has to make numerous decision through out the life,the topic concerning whether independent decision or advice from someone else is better has raised to a heated debate since a long time ago.In my point of view,I recommends that it's more favorable to make our own choices independently at least for most people.And a review of the affairs can make the answer more clear.

    On top of my argument,no one knows you better than yourself does.Thus only you can consider the affairs solely and entirely from you r own perspective.Others can not always figure out your thought,your real situation in analysis of your matter,which nevertheless,requires taking all the possible factors into consideration.For example,when I was about to attend the university and confused about what to major in.My parents both strongly recommends me to choose international finance,which,in their sight,is a guarantee of future career prospect.However,my interest virtually lies in E-business,you never know how crazy I have been  about shopping online and its mechanism.Fortunately,in light of my insistence,finally my parents gave in and we achieve consensus that I was able to follow my own engagement in choosing my profession.I could not imagine how frustrated I would be every day in my university career if I let my parents make the decision for me .

   In addition,the advice from others can serve a salutary function to offer reference for making decisions of our own,but is something you can entirely adopted.Because no one but you are to responsible for the decision you make.One simply decision you make currently can have a far-reaching effect on your life several years ago.Thus,it's highly necessary for you to think twice and analyze your choice rationally.

  Last but no least,independent thinking can be a necessity to survive the complicated world.Perhaps since we were primary school student we have been told not to follow what others say or do,but differentiate right from wrong and form our own mature thought instead.Admittedly,despite the majority of the favorable advice from our friends,there do exists some poor suggestion which might take us into trouble from several people.If we never make our own decision and merely follow what others says,the result can be destructive and unimaginable.

   After my ruminating all the factors,our deeper knowledge of ourselves,the necessity to take respondence for the decision and the fact that not all the suggestions are valuable are all compelling justifications for the superiority for most people to depend on themselves in decision making.That;s a wise way to live on earth.