OG13 SC35 现在分词用法疑问

zn3023

. By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records,and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to beof dangerously experimental design.

(A) and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be

(B) earning them at a time that aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be

(C) earning these at a time where aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were

(D) earned at a time in which aviation was still so new such that many of the planes she flew were

(E) earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were



答案说B C选项时是这样解释的：The wordearningtakes the pilot herself, not the records, as its subject. However,earningis close tothe records, not toJacqueline Cochran, making this sentence hard to understand.

earning做  ‘，ving’ 不是可以表示伴随或者结果吗？我感觉这里earning可以作为前面主句的伴随呀。不知我的理解哪错了，望NN指教！

kiwifoodtown

想问下A选项有什么问题啊？是因为and she 多余，所以优选E么？

-- by 会员 edisonshi (2013/1/21 18:29:43)

A选项把句子变成两个并列句子，改变了句子原本的意思。和E选项这种状语从句完全不同。

sisichen666

SVO,DOING的结构——earning确实是优先应该作为adverb modifier，作为伴随或者是结果，我们也是这么理解的；但是根据gamt的OA解释，说明即使，doing作为状语修饰前面句子，并不会失去其作定语的功能，所以og里有些题目给出svo，doing——doing可能修饰S可能修饰N。。。。。。其实我是不太支持这种解释的，因为毕竟是adverb modifier，但是这并不影响做题，知道就好，不必深究。。。。。。
来个连接，体会一下
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-740934-1-1.html?extparms=ThreadCatalogID%3d0%26page%3d2

zn3023

谢谢解释！搞清楚了！

francoiswang

我想问一下，A的错误除了so ..that..的结构不对以外，还有事因为没必要用"，and she...." 吗？
另外，还有一点疑问，因为一般来说最好不要改变原句的意思，这里感觉A的意思是把held和earn两件事分开来了，是two independent things，而BCDE全部是将两件事情关联变成了dependent things。请指教。谢谢

TerraceHo

（1）同一subject對應兩個不同的verbs，一般直接用連詞相連就可以了。如果再重複subject的話，另外又用連詞，就顯得wordy了。

（2）meaning問題可以分為illogical和ambiguous。雖然BCDE是將獨立的句子變成修飾語，但是正確的選項沒有使句子產生邏輯問題或者是歧義。如果對這個問題分不太清楚的話，建議看看Stacey的blog，很不錯

kiwifoodtown

. By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records,and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to beof dangerously experimental design.

(A) and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be

(B) earning them at a time that aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be

(C) earning these at a time where aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were

(D) earned at a time in which aviation was still so new such that many of the planes she flew were

(E) earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were



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earning做  ‘，ving’ 不是可以表示伴随或者结果吗？我感觉这里earning可以作为前面主句的伴随呀。不知我的理解哪错了，望NN指教！

-- by 会员 zn3023 (2012/11/7 15:38:08)

这里需要澄清一下伴随状语的概念。是由一个主语发出两个动作或同一个主语处于两种状态，或同一个主语发出一个动作时又伴随有某一种状态。伴随状语的逻辑主语一般情况下必须是全句的主语，伴随状语与谓语动词所表示的动作或状态是同时发生的。
这里earning them实际上和held seventeen official national and international speed records是同一动作，不是另一种不同的动作，而且从句子逻辑意思来看这个状语从句更像是对official national and international speed records的补充说明，所以用earned 修饰前面宾语更恰当。

edisonshi

想问下A选项有什么问题啊？是因为and she 多余，所以优选E么？

shally莎莎

kiwifoodtown 发表于 2013-1-22 10:25
想问下A选项有什么问题啊？是因为and she 多余，所以优选E么？-- by 会员 edisonshi (2013/1/21 18:29:4 ...

其实我想问D选项 为什么说time的真确代词是when？manhattan里面明确说了 when和in which是可以互相替代的！

kiwifoodtown

shally莎莎 发表于 2013-5-17 17:30
其实我想问D选项 为什么说time的真确代词是when？manhattan里面明确说了 when和in which是可以互相替代的 ...

在一些情况下，定语从句中，when和in which是可以互换的，比如被修饰词的确是表示时间的时候。但名词在句子中不表示时间的时候，比如表示事件，就必须用in which.  在状语从句中，就只能用when.