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Do you agree or disagree that people are now easier to become educated than in the past.
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Nowadays, the education is becoming more and more important in people’s daily life.In response to the issue at hand that whether people now are easier to become educated than in the past. Some people might argue that in deed,peoples are easier to be educated than in the past. But some others may hold the opposite opinion. From my own perspective, I would probably follow the former one. My points of view, on the whole, involves the fundamental and deep discussions as follows.

First of all, the top of my list of my viewpoints is that education system has developed to enroll many more students than before. Both common sense and our experiences of daily life inform us that the more chances for students to enroll, the less pressure for students to join in the schools. What’s more, it provides more oppotunities for students to choose their favourate majors and try their best in their interesting subjects. A recently reasearch indicates that the rate of colledges education has increased seventy percent than in forty yeara ago. In these situations, hence, it is partially indisputable that the people now are easier educated than in the past.


In addition, an equally essential and compelling argument that deserves people’s attention is that with the development of science and technology, the methods of education have improved than before. One can only need to look at that people have ways to obtain knowledges than what I can imagin, such as Internet, video, radio and so on. It is more convinent for students to obtain knowledge, with a click of the mouse on the computer, they can get thousands of pages of information from website, like Google, which is much fater than searching knowledges in traditional way like books. What’s more the modern means for education make students have a wider perspective of the knowledge.


Admittedly, it is probably true in some certain conditions that people have difficulties in education. This alone doesn’t consititute a sufficient support to claim that people are not easier to become educated than in the past. As a matter of fact, these cases are too specific and hence too weak to support this conclusion. When the advantages and disadvantage are carefully examined, the more striking conclusion is apparent that the people are now much easier to become educated than in the past.


Above all, although some people still remain unconvinced, the factors and reasons I have analyzed at least could make them more aware of various dimensions of the issue under discussion. There is little doubt that more and more people realize that people are now easier to become educaten than in the past.

maggie雾

题目 university professor should focus time on doing research
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Nowadays, the issue of education considerablely concerned in people’s daily life. In response to the issue at hand that whether university professors should focus time on doing research is a hot topic. Some people may argue that university professors should focus time on doing research. But some other people might hold the opposite opinion. From my own perspective, I would probably follow the former one. My point of my view, on the whole, involves the fundamental and deep discussions as follows.
 
 First of all, top of my list of my viewpoints is that professors focusing time on doing research will benefit the whole world. Both common sense and our experience from our daily life inform us that universities are essential producers of cutting-edge research for any countries, the success of these researches will lead all over the world a great improvement, such as the cure of the cancer and the solution of the global warming.It will make the world more healthy and more wonderful. In these situations, hence, it’s partially indiputable that it is benificial for universtiy professors to focus time on doing research.

 In addition, an equally essential and compelling argument that deserves people’s attention is that university professors focusing time on doing research will benefit the schools, to some extent, will boost the schools’ reputation. One can only need to look at that universities could receive the grants to make the research. Also this money will improve the teaching facilities. What’s more, one of the reasons why people think this university is good is that how about their advanced research programme, if university has its own advanced research programme, it will attract many potential applicants. Take the most famous university as the example, Harvard is famous for its advanced research programme, and attract many promising students every year.

 Admittedly, it may be true in some certain conditions that university professors should pay more attention on improving the quality of teaching. This alone doesn’t constitute a sufficient support to claim that professors shouldn’t not focus time on doing the research. As a matter of fact, these cases are too specific and hence too weak to strengthen this conclusion. When the advantages and disadvantages are carefully examined, the more striking conclusion is apparent that university professors should focus time on doing the research.

 Above all, although some people may still remain unconvinced, the factors and reasons I have analyzed could at lest make them more aware of various dimensions of the issue under discussions. There is little doubt that more and more people realize that university professor should focus time on doing the research.

maggie雾

附提纲  大家给点意见啦

第一篇  题目 现在的人们是否比过去的人更容易受教育
       观点 同意
       1 现在招收更多的学生 因为招收的学生多，进入学校学习的压力小，并且可以供学生选择自己喜欢的专业，从而更好的学习
       2 人们获得知识的途径变得多了起来 例如网络 通过这些途径可以更加便捷，并且可以拓宽同学的视野
       3 让步
第二篇 题目大学教授是否应该更多的关注研究领域
      观点 同意
      1 关注研究领域可以使世界变得更好 因为大学的研究可以贡献全世界， 这些研究可以造福与世界 例如 癌症的治疗和温室效应的解决办法
      2 关注研究领域可以使学校收益 a 可以获得研究的资金专注研究 也可以提高教学设备
                                   b 研究领域的成果是这个学校更吸引学生
      3 让步

maggie雾

题目Whether the most important problems could be solved within our lifetime.
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Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, many important problems effecting our lives have been solved. In response to the issue at hand whether the most important problems effecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime. Some people may argue that the important problems effecting our society today could not be solved within our lifetime. But some other people might hold the opposite opinion. From my own perspective,  I would probably follow the former one. My point of the view, on the whole, involves hte fundamental and deep discussions as follows.

 First of all, top of my list of my viewpoints is that wars couldn’t disappear within our life. Both common sense and our experience from our daily life inform us that every country couldn’t stop fighting for their resources, domains, technologies and so forth. For example, the Second World War was supposed to be “the war end to all wars” , but many wars have been fought or continue to be fought.As the says going:” There are resoures, there are always wars.” In these situations, hence, it’s partially indisputable that wars effecting our society today could not be solved within our lifetime.

 In addition, an equally essential and compelling argument that deserves people’s attention is that the problem of global warming wouldn’t be solved within our lifetime. One only need to look at that the global warming is increasing everyday, and people still destroy the trees and burning coals when cooking. Solving this problem costs at least hundreds years, we couldn’t solve this problem within our lifetime. A recently search indicates that the rate of global warming increases three percent than the last year.

 What’s more, the increasing population is still a big problem effecting our society. For example, China has carried out the “one child for one family”policy, but the pressure of supporting old people for only one child is increasing, many parents tends to give birth for more than only one child. Also, a recently research supports that the population of the world increases 4 percent than the last year. Therefore, it’s clear that the problem of increasing population could not be solved within our lifetime.

 Above all, although some people still remain unconvinced. The factors and the reasons I have analyzed at least could mare them more aware of the various dimensions of issue under discussions. There is little doubt that more and more people realize that the most important problems effecting our society couldn’t solve within our lifetime.

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