10月3日综合写作作业

阿伦艾弗森

according to the reading, we know that the writer illustrates an issue about selling fossils is not a good development and uses three opinions to prove his argument. The professor in the lecture deals with the same question, however, in different ideas.



Firstly, the reading thinks that fossils collected by private will make it harder for us to see and decline our interests in fossils. Yet the professor argues that commercial using of fossils can help us have more opportunity to see them because when the schools purchase the fossils they will display them.



Secondly, the reading tells that scientists will lose access to fossils and they will miss some important finding about extinct life forms. However, the professor says that this opinion is not true because scientists should verify the fossils at the first time before fossils sell to the individual and every detail can pass through their hands so they will not miss the important part of the fossil.



Thirdly, the writer thinks that private collector will not carefully treat the fossils because of their commercial use. Nevertheless, the professor says that it is more important to find those fossils than completely undiscovered.

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