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valwang99

Q29:

Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents, are the more likely to be self-confident, have a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as adolescents.

Children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.

Rather than permissive parents, the children of authoritative parents are the more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as an adolescent.

请教为什么c不对？

rhod

1. 不平行.

2. the more错误. 最高级前面才用the.

paraglider

A的句子结构也有问题啊？！！

A are more likely than B to have C who as xxx are xxx, xxx, and xxx.

这样的结构对嘛？

hankunlun

这样的结构对，

A are more likely than B to have C who are xxx,xxx,and xxx as xxx

whoami2

hankunlun, 请问, 我觉得 have sb do(原形) sth 才对啊, 但这里用的是 are, 而不是 be 哦。我就是因此而废了a, 选了 d

这不是标准使役动词的用法么？困惑啊

yoyonline

以下是引用whoami2在2004-12-6 17:21:00的发言：

hankunlun, 请问, 我觉得 have sb do(原形) sth 才对啊, 但这里用的是 are, 而不是 be 哦。我就是因此而废了a, 选了 d

这不是标准使役动词的用法么？困惑啊

我觉得从整个句子的意思来理解比较好。who 指代children，“as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent”.是who引导的从句修饰children。

三脚猫

以下是引用whoami2在2004-12-6 17:21:00的发言：

hankunlun, 请问, 我觉得 have sb do(原形) sth 才对啊, 但这里用的是 are, 而不是 be 哦。我就是因此而废了a, 选了 d

这不是标准使役动词的用法么？困惑啊

are 在句子中是做who从句的系动词，并不是have sb do sth结构，楼主可能看错了吧。

zhaoshujuanw

D.Children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.

   我想有可能是因为“they”,容易产生歧义，“children”or "parents"?

scorpio0001

以下是引用zhaoshujuanw在2005-1-8 2:28:00的发言：

D.Children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.

   我想有可能是因为“they”,容易产生歧义，“children”or "parents"?

我不认为这里的they指代不明。本句子的结构为children(修饰语）are ...., when they are...，所以they应该指代children。

D的错误在于：

1、rather than 前后形式不对等。

2、they指代children。所以句子变为：children are adolescent.搭配不合理。

3、句子重心改变。

请讨论。

juningw

以下是引用scorpio0001在2005-3-25 11:45:00的发言：

我不认为这里的they指代不明。本句子的结构为children(修饰语）are ...., when they are...，所以they应该指代children。

D的错误在于：

1、rather than 前后形式不对等。

同意

2、they指代children。所以句子变为：children are adolescent.搭配不合理。

是错在they are an adolescent. agreement不对

3、句子重心改变。

请讨论。

另外，还有个重要的错误，就是more是比较级，后面一定要有than。